10-12 Lines
30 Minutes
House Rules
No Hate, Crew, or Dickriding Votes.
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10-12 Lines
30 Minutes
House Rules
No Hate, Crew, or Dickriding Votes.
Checc in G/L fams...............................
Checking.
Even an Everlast couldn’t promote you to the highest rank of punchlines,
I see you recollected your fake arrogance when you battled Bangerdime,
If I was the color of defeat, you’re Six sense would recognize the aura of my hue,
But every time I mar your surfaces with my wins, I'm clarifying you,
This guy is similar to a main-screen horror flick, anticipate this pun,
The film-makers have agreed on your fate, the black guy dies in this one,
Don't think you can pull this one out, I know you're not thinking that,
Becuase the only thing this scam-artist pulls out is rabbits out of his hat,
Solidify your work, get a thesaurus, hell or a tutor, you’re illiterate and that’s apparent,
Most votes go to you because we don't feel like reading your lines, you're not coherent,
I don’t mean to name-call, this kid gets silenced more than the lambs,
I don’t mean to quote, but this battle is in the bag, “Oh my bad fam”
This guy getting used like tools-n-school, ya lose-ya-cool
This boy bang more 'black balls' than finishin' moves in pool.!
Bash-ya-down till you in a “grave” like you stashed-in-grounds
Treat ya girl like a “blunt” how she’s just “passed around”
i'm too advanced for loki, his shits ~~mediocre~~..like faulty stacks of cards, 52 Deck is nothin but ~~jokers
My bullets pass thru LIKE~A~CHEST-SCAN, you're only a 'GROOMS-MEN' cuz you just got BEAT BY~THE~BEST-MAN!
dont kno why this fool decided to try-this-tyrant... i'm a warlord general, i'll have any one of my DOGS, 'pee n shit on u' like u was a 'fire-hydrant'...
lets get to the point "face~tha~facts" you a "disgrace~to~rap" ya rhymes are "whack" and ya lines are on "crack",and to be "exact" ya rhymes are "jacked",you think you complex but ya shceme aint even "compact",i wont even count "that" i'm fuck his world up like i was "demo~crat" i take you out with a "dem~attack" you fuckin with tha conducter now i gotta derail his "tracks",i aint talkin "smack" but only time this dude could win is if the voters misplaced their catz(categories)....
Like a “Snake” he has no “Vertabrae” so stop-the-fakin
I’ll pull his bones out with ease like playing Operation
Ur bitch-made so store-ya-switch-blade, this whore-will-git-layed, my four tore-his-rib-cage… beatin him is ‘elementary’ like fourth-n-fifth-grade…
I’m killin-him, this is a ‘crime’, but u already know that I sin-hard… they shud convict me for this murder, n ‘put me in a CELL’ like ya ‘sim-card’…. LoL
This is easy, nigga I retire-the-barriers… Who want it? I’m givin this kid his ‘NEXT-L’(Nextel) like the ‘WireLess-Carrier’!!!!
‘Beatin catz again n again’ da police il ‘re-charge’ me fo ‘battery’, urinate all ova ya like toilet seats when I scatter pee, you wuz takin punches ‘after da buzzer’ cause ya shots jus ‘don’t matter’ G/
Ab will lyrically pops shells...i got this kid lookin like a heart monitor the way i cause him to drop health
ima make you fold the way you got odd's dealt....Ven cant see me in text, im 'outta his reach' like 5 year olds goin for the top shelf
...................................Quote:
Originally Posted by MagicConcept
You went way over the line limit. WTH?
i was tryin to hurry up my fault its the second verse......................
I said 10-12 Lines and you put like twenty.
i thought it was bars. and be serious who really does 12 lines,Quote:
Originally Posted by Exact
I said a "Quick Battle".
magic u would be better but u went over the limit but exact had better flow and punches anyway
punches/Exact
vocab/Exact
flow/exact
wordplay/magic
v/exact
uppin uuppiin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
uppin uppin.......................
i'm not sure if i shud vote on this..as its been claimed magic went over the limit
but i'm not the one to enforce the rules on other peoples battles..so u deal with that how u see fit
this how i see it
exact-
I don’t mean to name-call, this kid gets silenced more than the lambs,
I don’t mean to quote, but this battle is in the bag, “Oh my bad fam”
nice
vs
magic
My bullets pass thru LIKE~A~CHEST-SCAN, you're only a 'GROOMS-MEN' cuz you just got BEAT BY~THE~BEST-MAN!
decent
I’m killin-him, this is a ‘crime’, but u already know that I sin-hard… they shud convict me for this murder, n ‘put me in a CELL’ like ya ‘sim-card’…. LoL
nice..
i think this battle was ok nothing great
the above lines are the ones that stood out to me
and since magic had a couple more stand out lines than exact.. i put him slightyly ahead..
magic also just about took the wordplay...tho there was nothing too great in this one
Vote-Magic
for a couple extra stand out lines and slightly better wordplay
good looks fams
uppin fams..................
magic u really went over the limit.....alot to read man but i enjoyed it alot. nice punches, good multies, good word. str8 structure. but ur flow was off.
exact wayyyyyyyy better flow, but punches vwas'nt that hard structure was also well. nice battle both off ya.......[B]
Upping.
EXACT----u had some nice vocab,wordplay....some nice punches...specially liked ur CLOSER..probably one of the fav lines of the battle..and 4 the most part had a good flow,and ok structure
MagicConcept----you rely way 2 much on ur multies, and i think that makes for a forced verse, not 2 mention u kept switchin structure, which throws of the flow, you had some nice punches/but i also wasnt feelin some of them cuz of the overused filler multies!!....(not 2 mention u went on for ever)...but thats not that big of a deal or w/e.....however all in all a pretty good battle...id say juss calm down the multies, and focus more on personals/punches, and make ur structure better!!...it was kinda hard 2 follow!!
good battle
pretty much could either wya
VOTE-EXACT
plz hit up my 2 battles in my sig wit an HONEST! vote!! thanx
Punches-magic
structure-exact
flow-magic
personals-exact
mutis-magic.
overall-magic
close battle..over the limit dosent mean you get my vote...its not my battle to DQ or say anything..im just votin on better battle verse and magic had it..
v/magic.
Punches-Magic
Structure-Exact
Vocab-Exact
Word Play-Magic
Multies-Magic
Best Lines:
Exact
Solidify your work, get a thesaurus, hell or a tutor, you’re illiterate and that’s apparent,
Most votes go to you because we don't feel like reading your lines, you're not coherent,
MagicConcept
This is easy, nigga I retire-the-barriers… Who want it? I’m givin this kid his ‘NEXT-L’(Nextel) like the ‘WireLess-Carrier’!!!!(One of the Hottest Lines I've Heard)
Very close battle but when it came down to it Magic and more punches and Exact had some not as hard and more selfglorifyin'.
v//MagicConcept
uppin famlies........................
exact:
If I was the color of defeat, you’re Six sense would recognize the aura of my hue,
But every time I mar your surfaces with my wins, I'm clarifying you,
- elevated shit
This guy is similar to a main-screen horror flick, anticipate this pun,
The film-makers have agreed on your fate, the black guy dies in this one,
- played...................and u know it!
I don’t mean to name-call, this kid gets silenced more than the lambs,
I don’t mean to quote, but this battle is in the bag, “Oh my bad fam”
-lol , nice closer.
this was one of the best verses i'ce voted on for a while, keep it up bey.
magic concept - d/q'd for me. a cupla bars over is ok, but that shit was ridiculous.
exact was dope. he gets the v.
magic jus fuccs around wit madd shyt like the next-L line i liked...DAT WAR FIRE, exact came weak in dis, his puns werent direct hits...they did damage but he had low metaphors...magic lives up to his name the punchline-master
flow-magic
metaphors-magic
puns-magic
structure-exact
rhyme sceme-magic
wordplay-magic
hard hitters-magic
opener-exact
closer-magic
v/magic
Last upping.
exact won dis cause magic went ova da line limit even though u verse was sick as fuck
Here;s my breakdown...
It seems like both Exact and MagicConcept punched around each other. I didn't see any personals or anything really hard hitting. Therefore, I had to rate this battle on rhyme scheme, wordplay, flow and strucuture. MagicConcept had the best rhymescheme, but wordplay fell short on both individuals. Exact had the better flow and strucure, but it was off in some places
Vote - Exact, by having better consistent flow.