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normal rules
check in 10 min
spit an hour
no hate/dr/crew votes
this is my check
good luck
check g/l to u 2
Forgiving this kid, “pray” to me, im ur “god” so “kneel”//(sig)
Cause I got this shit “locked”, like weed in a “Ziploc” “bag”, wit a closed “seal”//
This is just a piece of ma “meal”, son u still an “orderve”//(orderve-snack)
Cause “dog”(dawg) I “shitted” u, im letting “rookies” “curb” this herb//
Kid Ur lines is weak, ma “punches” be leaving u “bruising”//
cause ill demolish ur “game” ”easy”, while mine is “still cruising”//(game ft easy e-still cruising)
and kid u “born” to be “true”, while ur “royalty’s” a shame//
cause I “light” up like im “fusin”, murking a “vet” that has “noweight” under his “name”//
and u answered my callout, now look how im leaving this battle like “Katrina” hit it//
cuz when u say u a “born vet”, u mean u “cure animals”, just admit it//(veterinarian)
yo killa vote tis battle and ill do an honest vote on tis 1.
lol^^^^Quote:
Originally Posted by KkiLLa34
o aight i been wanting to battle u aight ill set it up
dude couldnt wait to lose,he was so ANXIOUS he had me CONFUSED
u beating me is ERELAVENT,so id jack em up and teach him his donts and do's
i say FUCK dis kid,cause u not on my level my NIGG
fag ass MASTERBATIN that ERECTION to dat pic of 50 cent in his SIG
he PLOTTING on STOPPING me,so im a attack him VICOUSLEY
U TESTING ME? well my semiauto will put 100 holes in yo bumby ass white T
HONESTLEY i think u good ya flow tight yea u aiight.....SCRACTH dat u suck
somebody offered him 1mill for his rhyme book,he said i dont want to con u
.................................................. ........cause its really worth a buck
there wont be no hesitation,merk him to were theres no explanations
BOTTOM LINE theres no future for so go back to school and get ya EDUMACATION
its 2 eazy man foreal
a gd drop killa lets get some votes in dis bitch upp
doesnt the last line diss u cause u spelled education wrong lol so that means u need to go back to school lol lmfao aight uppin for votes
AYE KKILLA HIT UP MA BATTLE VERSES COMPLETE IN FRONLINES HONESTLY..IM SERIOUS
v/killa
explanation- lol i aint go lie the rhyme book line by vet was fuckin dope...but killa took it with consistency i mean all of his punches were ok none were better than the rhyme book punch vet had but 2 tell the truth you need more than just one punch so born vet work on consistency i mean if you could throw good punches like that all day long you could hang with the best nah mean....but killa gets it for being more consistent
[.s. plz don't say i was d/r i was bein honest so chea...
o yea and this is my alias god's-son, so god's-son meet born vet lol
thanks for ur vote and i will do
nigga shut yo punck ass up i know how to spell education you know how ppl use that word edumacation u prolly white lolQuote:
Originally Posted by GoD's-Son
Quote:
Originally Posted by !.VeRbZ.!
yea i feel u my nigga thanx for da feed and the honest vote
lol no hate born vet lol and no im not white im latino lol so stfu bitch lol
lol my bad my niggaQuote:
Originally Posted by KkiLLa34
flow-tie
structure-tie
punches-killa
personals-killa
v/killa just a slightly better verse both yall looking good though
Forgiving this kid, “pray” to me, im ur “god” so “kneel”//(sig)
Cause I got this shit “locked”, like weed in a “Ziploc” “bag”, wit a closed “seal”//
(mehh)
This is just a piece of ma “meal”, son u still an “orderve”//(orderve-snack)
Cause “dog”(dawg) I “shitted” u, im letting “rookies” “curb” this herb//
(mehh)
Kid Ur lines is weak, ma “punches” be leaving u “bruising”//
cause ill demolish ur “game” ”easy”, while mine is “still cruising”//(game ft easy e-still cruising)
(nice)
and kid u “born” to be “true”, while ur “royalty’s” a shame//
cause I “light” up like im “fusin”, murking a “vet” that has “noweight” under his “name”//
(lol nice personal)
and u answered my callout, now look how im leaving this battle like “Katrina” hit it//
cuz when u say u a “born vet”, u mean u “cure animals”, just admit it//
(lol nice personal)
vs
dude couldnt wait to lose,he was so ANXIOUS he had me CONFUSED
u beating me is ERELAVENT,so id jack em up and teach him his donts and do's
(meh)
i say FUCK dis kid,cause u not on my level my NIGG
fag ass MASTERBATIN that ERECTION to dat pic of 50 cent in his SIG
(alrite)
he PLOTTING on STOPPING me,so im a attack him VICOUSLEY
U TESTING ME? well my semiauto will put 100 holes in yo bumby ass white T
(na)
HONESTLEY i think u good ya flow tight yea u aiight.....SCRACTH dat u suck
somebody offered him 1mill for his rhyme book,he said i dont want to con u
.................................................. ........cause its really worth a buck
(lol nice one)
there wont be no hesitation,merk him to were theres no explanations
BOTTOM LINE theres no future for so go back to school and get ya EDUMACATION
(mehh)
yo my vote was on punches and personals also structure...born vet you is alrite but killa had gotten you with better punches and personals.tho u is still good.
BTW PLEASE CHECK OUT BATTLES IN SIG..
v/killa
thanks for the vote and ill be sure to vote in ur battlesuppin for more votes
uppin for more votes
uppin for honest votes come on people vote up ill retrun the favor
uppin
i give dis one to born vet just liked his verse better no hate go vote on my battles vs cocain and bjammin
uppin for votes
kkilla had better verse overall. more clever combos that hit.
that line about the rhymebook is funny as fuck though ( highly original)!!!!!!
this was a weak battle kkilla all of ur punches were weak except for tha last 2 bars born vet that rhymebook lines killed his whole verse imo anyways..that shit was funny as hell so u get my vote for having better punches no hate
v/bornvet
yo i say KKILLA takes this with just a lil bit more.......lil more punches and METAZ, FLOW, CREATIVITY, INTRO, CONCLUSION, VOCAB.............damn just a lil bit more....some where tie though honestly.........but justa lil more than BORN VET.
V/ KKILLA
RTF on the battles in my sig homes.................honest vote peace
Aigh Aight Aight AIght...
Killa- good punches some still strectched but its coo, you really need to work on that, I saw a lot of personals and what not a bit of wordplay but your punches lacked that pizzaz I see in other battles you've had...work on the wording and shit structure still noobish but whatever it doesn't take away from the punches so its straight...
Vet-your punches were blah...exactly blah...semiautos are no nos on the net, we are NOT net thugs thugs dont get on the net, they have better things to do...ya feel me?
So no Semiautos and shit putting holes in bummy white Tees...the rest of ur lines were meh but a couple were straight, so your verse wasn't completely bad..work on ur wording and dont stretch em so much...
V/Killa for better punches...
linx n mah sigg-e