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Nigga ya is a newb so how are ya clamin ta be DA CHOSEN ONE
I dont know why i accepted ya challange cuz beatin up newbs aint no fun
But i did so ima let da beatin begin and jerk 10 lyrical bullets into ya skin
The day BIN LADEN hands himself in is da day a battle you will win
But dats not today so ima have ta split ya down da middle like a dutch
Damn havin 2pac in ya sig come on nigga dats a little bit too much
Cuz comin close ta pacs skills is something that will neva be
Afta i kill ya in dis battle you gonna be wonderin how like will dey mourn me
Bitch man dis was to easy and i just leaft you a fuckin bloody mess
Dis aint MTV or a DATING SHOW but you fuckin suck so NEXT
uppin for dis nigga ta check at least
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Nigga ya is a newb so how are ya clamin ta be DA CHOSEN ONE
I dont know why i accepted ya challange cuz beatin up newbs aint no fun
-Doese not rhyme- 3/10
But i did so ima let da beatin begin and jerk 10 lyrical bullets into ya skin
The day BIN LADEN hands himself in is da day a battle you will win
--haha-- 6/10
But dats not today so ima have ta split ya down da middle like a dutch
Damn havin 2pac in ya sig come on nigga dats a little bit too much
-haha-- Tight... Even though pac is tha shit -- 6/10
Cuz comin close ta pacs skills is something that will neva be
Afta i kill ya in dis battle you gonna be wonderin how like will dey mourn me
--haha-- 5.5/10
Bitch man dis was to easy and i just leaft you a fuckin bloody mess
Dis aint MTV or a DATING SHOW but you fuckin suck so NEXT
-ok- 4/10
24.5/50
holla at me when the other Rip is posted.....
aight, you claiming to have pac as my sig is a lil to MUCH! /
but u got 3 grown men as yours, so tell me how many bitches have u FUCKED?/
answer is zero mayne and with a flow like that u can expect NOTHING MUCH//
i wonder wich is greater my margin of victory over you or da numbers of DICK U've SUCKED// u bitch, talking about poppin people over the web man your a INTERNET THUG/ i bet when niggas stretch they hand out for dap ur faggot ass gives um HUGS//
now this white boi wanna go all out n talk about his favorite MTV SHOWS// well i can bet mtv ready 2 make a TrueLife: lifestyls is an INTERNET HOE thats right pussy i just exposed you youse an ELEMeNTARY DROPOUT/ u should be embarassed at what u said bitch so just LOG-OUT/ dont come back to this forum son i heard at jack in the box they ready to HIRE// cause spittin is a job and like donald Trump,mothafucka U FIRED//
um in my box it was only 12 lines. i spaced it out .... lets get some VOTES
UPPIN for some votes....................................1
UPPIN for some votes..................................2
uppin 3 ..........................................
uppin 4.................... wtf wer the votes at ?
Uppin For The Last Time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
lifestyl/ it was kind of hard to understand ya verse cuz it really didnt connect right.elevate though and MAYBE ull be better
chosen/ i gotta give u ya props. u had some good punches up there and shyt.guess all newbs aint wack.
ya flow was good, ya verse was just way better.
overall/chosen
man this battle was o.k but i dont think da chosen one is a newb cuz he had better punches the other guy had none he also flowed better and his structure was way better thats why i give him the vote in this battle
aight firme. LETS GET SOME MO VOTES PLEEZE!!!!!!!!
agreeQuote:
Originally Posted by babytori489
wow real good battle really liked it but i gotta give dis one to chosen he had some good punches so did the other guy but not as many
go vote on my battle vs bjammin first page of front lines
aight cool. lets keep the votes coming ......................
come on only 1 vote to close this ish out!! vote people fuck!!!Quote:
Originally Posted by DaChosen1
wer the fuc the votes at? 1 mo to close it. cmon!
1 more vote please. vote honestly though....................................