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another light to shine,i smother mics with rhymes
while i cover right behind,my safetys precise divine
feelin lookin straight up towards tha ceilin,anger buildin
no ones makin milllions,too bad pac didnt fake tha killin
we could use better influence and poetry,rap shit supposedly
comes to those whos chosen see,to be a froze emcee
those who fell and arose to feet,to speak about beef
and beats and hard streets,how to roll and charge sweets
dress playa pimp with a hard crease,all about ice and blowin weed
sellin snow indeed,too much dust no breathin,fiendin
for this green and seasons change its TreaZoN blamed
for thoughts below a gangsta and a hustler
dont sell drugs but i aint no busta,dont sport bright clusters
no diamond dustas,i dont stay strapped just laid back
listenin to played tracks,but tha point to make is simple
all we true emcees only need a bag of weed and some instrumentals
a pad and pencil,these emcees physique's complete
why we gotta be stereo typed and bleek.
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i feel u dog i hate bein steriotyped. my dad lives in a rich community and when im out side those parentsdont let there kidz hang wit me jus cause i were baggy jeans and long shirts and fiteds
deep shit could have been longer u could have really wrote a master piece wit dat topic.
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couldve but it was spur of the moment and untill the next SS tourney starts im just bullshittin
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Damn, i really liked this one; it was tight. Great rhyme scheme, nice multies, AND
it made sence! One thing tho, some of that line with the insturmentals and pad and pencils... Dr. Dre had a line REALLY close to that.... I ain't makin accusations of plaidgerism, i'm just saying that he did a line like that too. Also, if you honestly never knew about that, then you're obviously writing like him :thumbup:
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alot of rappers drop shit that sounds familiar too other peoples shit,lots of music start from pladgerism in a sense,lots of rap music has roots to old music even similar choruses...ever heard that song "I always feel like,somebodys watchin me"that was takin from an 80's song...its all tha same,but yea ive heard that before but i wasnt intentionaly takin that ecxact rhyming part..just a coincidence..thanks for tha replies.~1~
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That was a pretty tight flow, good concept. Keep it up homie.
~K-JaBz~
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leave longer replys or get banned
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Like K Said Nice Concept. Had Well Multies, Your Flow Was Tight At Some Times. You Had Amazing Structure, And I Felt This Piece Also U Talk About The Problems In The World. True Piece.
7/10
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I liked your rhymin' and basic strudture, the multies and all, but it didn't come to me as the title said it would. I hate being stereotyped as well , so i agree with you. It's not like the topic didn't go through but it took a while to get in. Overall it was good but try to make this into a long er piece.
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this isnt gonna be a longer piece this is just what it is..short and simple...nothing major.
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This was real tight....
topic was creatvie and very different it was interesting....complex vocabulary was used and rhymes as well...flow was smooth continuesly and strucutre was even the whole time makin it easy to read .....nicely done....tight..overall this was like a 9/10..keep it up..peace and leave on my drop heres the link http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=249493
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this is a gd piece, and so what if a line was similar to one of Dre's, that just shows that you hav got skillz if u wrote it out ure mind. the structure was good, and for a 'spur of the moment' piece, i really liked it.keep it up
8/10
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thanks for the replies......up.
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