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12-16 lines
10min to check
45 to drop
No whack votes.... keep it real
aight.... checkity check check.................................
Check,
This is a blind spit....
claimin to be HIV infected
Harmin Individualz Verbally
as far as i can see, your harmin idividualz herbally
im raping your ass literally but i pratice safe Text
you such a bitch im not feelin gay cuzz you aint even the same sex
remember when you see my name this is what u get
If you survive me there will be none left
i do this for fun
just to get shit off my chest
you playin life like its checkers nigga this is chess
actin like a lady latley only thing about you gettin better is your chest
Bustin shit with Nursery rhymes poluting your lines
if they were'nt sold to the public yo ass would be convincted of so many crimes
probly a snitch nigga wouldnt even do time
just drop the dime on all the niggas in ya crew
damn i feel bad for the sorry few.
dont get un dressed
yo dude im so un impressed
I said safe Text
look at your punk ass Gettin' undressed
if you really got it
Needles in yo vains
shit you shot it
remember when you see my name, that this is what u get******
Im SUPRISED you "Put-up-a-fight-WOW" WHAT u give up...cuz i BEAT THIS FUCK NOW!?
You WACK....now get a pen and pad u need to "Write-Down" QUIT this rap game Before you BITE NOW!!
Cant keep up to the "Competition!?" not with ur PATHETIC "Compisitions" THE CLOCK IS TICKIN
Now you "Just-Wishing" i dont "Stop-to-VISIT" BJammin getting ROCKED EXPLICIT!!
Must be 'Nuts' Claim to "NEUTOR-ME"... Just cuz Im more complex den what "UR-COMPUTER BE!!
I wanna WACK this rapper.....looking at ya Text this cat can "TOTURE ME" U foldin up like a "SCOOTER-BE!!"
You only HAD 1 LINE .. like "X and O's", Ya Step up And "Test-The-Flow" BJammin is WACC..."THE-Rest-is-Told"
Cant HANDLE A HIT like ya "VEST-IS-SOLD" Keystyles LOCKED like yu cant "Shift-My-control!!
Ive Seen ICEBERGS drop "Hotter-Than-you", Mental Patients "Slaughter-this-Dude" thier SICCNESS "BROADER THAN YOU!!"
yu like a Picture "Caught-in-the-Tube" Ignored cuz i dont Give a SHIT ....like the "BOTTOM OF SHOES!!"
This "YOUNG-U"..Getting more than a "Run-Through" Cant Rhyme hes like A "MIME-in a thug SUIT"
Like you wanna "BUG WHO??!!.....you a waste of my time, aint Elevating (high) Try another "DRUG-DUDE"
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VeRDiCT :::: MuRDaH
Oh the shit at the bottom is not part of the Verse..... those were extra lines i forgot to erase......
Uppin fo votes
Upp
nothing
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You only HAD 1 LINE .. like "X and O's", Ya Step up And "Test-The-Flow" BJammin is WACC..."THE-Rest-is-Told"
Cant HANDLE A HIT like ya "VEST-IS-SOLD" Keystyles LOCKED like yu cant "Shift-My-control!!
vt=asmodeus no hate bjaminin
Ehh, what can i say....... HONEST VOTES EARN RESPECT NIGGA
--- Just hope everybody dont feel tha same way ---
yo this battle was iight but asmodeus had away better spit he had punches that hit and he had a good opening and closing
but
Bjammin your lines were to to short yo need to step that up punches were oooook but not as good as they coulda been but yall both need to step it up
no hate to none of yall but i vote asmodeus
vote-A
upp
I give da sht to Bjammin. Dat Amodeous nigga was real weak at first at got stronger wen he start flippin thru da pages of his written sht in da end. Both were pretty wak do. But Bjam had da safe text thing.
bj got this wit better punches and personals A ur shit was basic man u didnt have any metaphres or nuttin elavate
and can yall hit up these links in my sig and place a vote thanx
ok. honestly, benjamin got this one. wit betta punches. both ya'll had fucked up structure n "ama" had an aight flow but yo punches suck so...
v///benjamin.
uppin b4 i pass out...........
ben took it i feal betta flow and punches vote will go to him
Yo Yo Yo...................
D---i----ck---rhyd----a---z---------i---n------d---a-------h--o--ussssseeee
Uppin.....
Quote:
Originally Posted by el gallo negro
hmm seems like u didnt really get his wordplay my favorite linez wuz this from
Bjamming
nothing
vs.
Asmodeus
Ive Seen ICEBERGS drop "Hotter-Than-you", Mental Patients "Slaughter-this-Dude" thier SICCNESS "BROADER THAN YOU!!"
very nce wordplay if i culd vote it would go to Asmodeus
dis was a good battle but Bjammin u need to work on ur strucure
and harder punches
Amodeous had some sic shit man he had good flow hard punched good wordplay
good battle both of u!!!!
vote/amodeois
upp this shit.....................................
Ok good battle
Bjamin-You had good punches...you lacked in multis....the structure was good...good battle
Asmodeus-Your punches were lackin a lot...and strucure was bad...you did have a verse full of good multis that elevated the whole thing...and you did have a few good punches....it was a close one
V/Asmodeus-no hate Bjamin this shit was real close...good battle both of you
uppin fa one more vote ppl....................
CMON!!
i need 1 mo vote if som one vote ill then vote tis battle
vote in ma battles anill vote here when i get to 100 and im close to it
Uppin for votes.....
uppin fo one more vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DONT SLEEP..... TAKE NO-DOZE!!!!!
Upp
WoRd^^^^^^Quote:
Originally Posted by DaChosen1
this battle was close as fuck but Bjammin got the shit his cam out better 2 me keep up the good work niggas
uppin fo tha decider..............................
structure-bjammin
wordplay-bjammin
punches-asmodues
metas-bjammin
vocab-bjammin
v/bjammin for a better verse all around
Votes DQ'd - x krImInAl, EvilAndy, Dic-tion-ar-y, pilr1,
Unexplained.......
battle re-open, poll is 1-4
ups reset
wordplay-BJ
puns-bj
structure-bj
personal-asmodeus
metas-bj
overall-bj
v/bj
commentary- decent battle, had its uppz and downs, felt bj came a bit harder doe, good metas and wordplay from both
drop an honets vote in the link under "battles to be closed" in my sig thanx