-Villain- {VS} Johhny C.

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srry to free post but can ya hit these battles up in my sig when u get time thanx and g/l to both of yall

Im makin an extension this aint Due Til 2Marrow Mournin cuz im out

Well Ima Post An Honest Vote Wonse Both You Spit Iight


Well In The Mean Time Can U Peep This Battle And Drop An Honest Vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248253


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aight, I'll have mine by tomorrow morning
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I'm feelin this boy's a Villain... he writes rules and bends 'em
an extention? Yea, He Defines Illness....... wit a case of influenza.
He won't turn the tables, but for his verse he'll need the varnish
cuz like the box in his sig, his raps are only carnage.
I've taken away his hopes... His Dreams, I tore apart...
but look at the bright side- he's still got his Wet farts.
Villain, just give up; your ego's just too big.
The only punches you can throw are from the smily in ya sig.

Check~In

I’ll Slaughter Ya Best, And Smash All Tha Rest, Til My Verse Ripz Thru Ur Chest
Cuz Your Tha Only Herb On This Site Who Treatz Rappin Like A Grammar Test
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Originally Posted by Johnny C.

and since when is 'tryna' a word?

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I Kno Ur Stressin A Vest Cuz These Tekz’ll End Ur Carrer Like Curtain Callz
And U Been Here Since 2003 And Im Still Packin A Verse With~out Personalz
This Shitz Crazy But Personalz Don’t Phaze Me Cuz Ur 5-8 How Good Can U Be,
Cuz Im Rippin U Lyrically And I’m Havin Ur Head Spin 4 Entertainment Like A DVD
Y Battle Me Homie, Itz E-z To See Ur Record Aint Phony, Battlin Me Will Ruin Ur Life,
Cuz The Only Way You Could Ever Get A "Holy", Is If You Was Bangin The Preacher's Wife
These Punchez Hit U Lyrically Right In Ur Face So I Might As Well Just Stop Carin Instead
U Stupid In~Bred, I Ain't Even Got To Attack All The "4 Angles" To Hit U "Square" In Ya Head

Fuck Tha Structure Read Tha Verse....(#1)............

This was jaaaaa iiiigh..... pretty good... im kinda cofused on who won... leem think on it and ill drop a vote soon..

johnny - your verse was very simple. str8 flow, good structure, no punches.
Villian had it overall . no explaination

Johnny C. Best
Villain, just give up; your ego's just too big.
The only punches you can throw are from the smily in ya sig

~Vs~

Villain Best
These Punchez Hit U Lyrically Right In Ur Face So I Might As Well Just Stop Carin Instead
U Stupid In~Bred, I Ain't Even Got To Attack All The "4 Angles" To Hit U "Square" In Ya Head

Johnny C. u got a couple multis- attempted personals- soft punches- 'tore apart... ...Wet farts'?- u gotta work on those disses-

Villain better multis- better personals- better punches- structure/rhyme scheme wasn't bad- but reword + tighten up ur lines to make that wordplay hit harder-

Vote: Villain

yo villain had this wit betta punches,better multies and betta personals,structure was a bit bad,but hey can't have evrything right

v/villain

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aight villian took dis shit it was easy.....he had a btter all around verse...........johnny only had like 1 good line but dope verse from villian i like da opener and closer and he had harder punches......vote villian return the favor

villian took this wit beter verse overall i liked ur opener but ur closer wasnt all that great i liked your wordplay more but u need some more personals like talk bout his avatar and his name and shit aight homie,Jonny u need to come harder ur verse was rly rly simple try some mo meta4s and shit cuz that was wak homie

v/ Villian no hate