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a itee ain't gonna say shit but i think bobericc got this
mayb..LOL dats jus cuz i stay elevatin
checcin in>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
G/L bontic.... (ur like one of the only niggaz i say dis to, cuz u have a chance of beatin me.)
^You never seen bontic battle befor...This name im fire......When i battled you dictionary i went mad easy so trust me....Tho should be a good battle
check............................................. ..................................in
bontic...a piece of work, chunk of cake im eatin wit punches poppin n locc
piccs me out of the bunch, cuz cabbage patch dolls were outta stock
silly rabit diccs r 4 chiccs, so why is dere one on his head...a birth defect?
dont blame 8-9 on credz, can't beat dic-tion-ary, how u gun beat thee-best
i let "bruce lee" bontic rest, but now im bacc ready to precede his destruction
puns like bombs, he's the "drunken master" 2 tips he can't start punchin
bontic talks a good one, but he can't 'pop shellz' if he steps on clams
hes dim lika burnt-owt candle, cant paint da greatness if he had parent-trans(transparent and also a common chinese name lika bruce lee wannabe)
u dun know da defensive actions, when u get punched around like da bag
punchin me iz swingin fistless arms, talkin a moufless face how u gonna brag?
Last time you battle bontic you couldnt hit me with real-blows.
Swimin in third world contry rivers is only time u get up on a ill-flow.
So you said you improved tho you know thats uncorrectable.
Nobody can feel up ya 'illness' even if a doctor felt up your testicles.
nobody would stand by ya shit even if it was written on da constitution.
Your lyrics couldnt be written ill even if written on a girl in prostitution.
Its funny in his location he put DA BEAN NIGGAZ,wonder where u live.
Accecpt a battle wit me is like a dude in maury sayin the kid is his.
Did you pre write ya lyrics?Even so you couldnt pull up a victory.
Your winnin is all in the past,and ya record is history.
drop b4 30 min iz up nigga
okok lets get sum vote in dis mothafucca
yo man when i was writen this i couldnt start up a punch for like 8 minutes...i was like fuck.....nice drop...uppin 1
my vote is for botnic
need votes at
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...?p=3445497&pos
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3445497
uppin 2................................................. .............................
wat a diccride vote^^it doesn't count anyways checc dis
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248694
he got so madd he dropped 2ce bontic drop a vote 2
v//bontic
had a better verse more punches better wordplay, better everything
j-hood wat are u doing on this 1 get on j-hood u had o.k but not very effective
hit up the 1st battle in my sig needs 1 more vote 2 close.
i think bontic was good wit his flows but he lacked alot of creativity, i think bobericc_lyrics was good he had alot of metaphors, and meaning, i "got " his flow so when i can vote i will ova in dis joint
v/ bobericc_lyrics 4 betta structure, metas, punches were even.
^bobericc i mean Alysia_QueenBee are you sure about that???????
^bobericc dont be tryin cheat like that homie.....................uppin 4
umm why tha fucc would i make a gurls name jus think about wat u said providin that she is online right now???
uppins
DAMN thsi was a good close battle...both you guys came with good punches and flows..imma get my posts up quick to vote for this one...but in the meanwhile.
V/Bontic
bontic is good shot he took that won just had a really good flow
for yall that do have 100 posts or more ...vote up ..and close this like imma do for yall http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...82#post3449382
uppins again
jhood im just sayin they both had the same ip.........................come on homie....uppin 5
bontic won that one hands down. i dont have enough post.
WoRd^^^^^^^^^^^^^^Quote:
Originally Posted by Alysia_QueenBee
uppinz kiddies
structure-bontic
punches-bontic
metas-bontic
flow-bontic
vocab-bontic
multies-bontic
v.bontic
if yall can HONESTLY hit up my battles in my sig..
Bontic got this one because he had better flow, wordplay and punches. Both of them actually had good punches, but Bontic pulled it off with the wordplay in his lines. He also maintained a good structure all the way through, and that's what I liked about his verse.
v/ Bontic
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=250097
^^^^holla at that fo sure
bontic had a better flow, better word, but i wasn't feelin the structure. but i understood his verse better.
bobericc had better punches, and better structure, but both had an ok flow. but bobericc jus came a lil harder .
v/bobericc
bontic came stronger in this he had better punches and ones that were not played u need to get more creative and witty punches tho , u gotta get under the skin of ur opponent and not jus thro anything u can think of . use more vocab and metaphors
bob- u have wack punches and shit that doesnt hit cuz u could say it to anyone like "yo momma" jokes, so work on that ,also ur structure and flo needs lots of work , elevate and kepp practicing
descent number of words in each battle, yall keep doin your thing
wordplay-bob
structure-bontic
flow-bob
personals-bob
punches-tie
bontics verse seemed a bit too repetitive and needed to have some more concepts involved to have a more interesting verse
overall battle was close ish but Bob took out more cats for me
vote-Bob
for a more personalised verse..and stronger flow
pz
bontic took this he hit alot harder wit those funny ass liens lol //////
yall both could still evalate thoguh