10 Lines
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No Hate, Crew or d/r Votes,
30 Minutes, no later.
Blind spit.
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10 Lines
House Rules
No Hate, Crew or d/r Votes,
30 Minutes, no later.
Blind spit.
hmmm...
aite i'ma be strait up wit chu..
i despize u and all tha shit you do
oh what? you don't like me to? so what, woopty doo
I don't like me neither, to me that's old news
but i got over it coz i'ma soldier dude
and so should u, coz i'ma remain hasslin' you
callin you lame names, most may be crude
i'ma stay playin' this game and stay this rude.
want a list of the namez i can say? k here we go
lets have a gez at your title, and i'ma start my flow...
exact ay? what exaktly are ya?
a wanna b MC? well i'ma pull apart ya
take tha M and call ya Micro,
coz wen you've fully absorbed my diss'z
ur gonna need lypo suction
then i'll grab that C that's left, and call you Coco
Coz your gona shit yourself so much
you'd wish you were a no-show
ohhhhh fuck. yea check check woeva. stupid dum check crap
Thoughts..
....This kid's sexuality is undetermined, but a hypothesis is about to be made,
Thoughts steamrolled himself correctly, but still it seemed he couldn't get laid,
Because I'm like a thesaurus, and your name is a simile to a fag,
When you depart from this ride I'll garuntee you'll have jet-lag,
......Don't try me, it'll be controversy like the Piston's on the Pacers,
I'll leave you more green in the face than a Star War's light saber,
Now I just battled this kid because I thought I would give him some play,
But you suck so much, I think you should stick to the tutorials in Q&A,
You don't deserve this battle, so like an usher I think I'll try to seat you,
Can't believe you had the nerve to put that battle in your sig when Esculator plain beat you.
Upping for votes.
yo we need some votes pleez!
up 1
the dude Exact was ill ..he had the nice flow and better punchlines...the other dudes flow kinda wasnt hard and your lines are kinda messed up...
V/Exact...vote up on my battle..tecnique vs pilr1 . http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248945
flow-exact
structure-exact
punches-exact
everything-exact
vote-exact
thoughts-ive voted on most of your battles today and you have been improving but you need to step up in every level....and not battle someone who you knew was gonna murk you.
exact-u know what ur doin
he doesn't have better flow!! hiz lines are too long maken it sound outa timing
Upping for votes.
Hit Up My Sig
Exact-Betta Punchez................Flo............Multiz...... ........Personalz..........Metaz..........
Thoughtz-Betta Structure..........Homie u need 2 make loger linez urz are short and plain........
V/Exact
Plz Hit up my sig....Or ima have 2 Ko u ina Topical again Exact...i kno u kno who i am But Shh...ih u think u kno Pm me
Upping this.
naaa thoughts his rhyme was way better than yours lol you got owned, jus being true coz we crew, and im esculator but that account got banned, for posting on a chat thing like 4 times an a row, i was guted :( :(
thoughts too basic.. rhyme scheme to predictable.... almost like you aint try.. complexity zero....."I don't like me neither, to me that's old news" does sumone need a hug???m Exact good wordplay and vocab.....consitency nice as well... No this is not a D/R vote... juss obvious.....
Basic Battle Leaving My Opinion:
Flow: Ex
Punches:Ex
Wordplay:Ex
Stcure:Thoughts
Final:Exact
Exact came Basic but harder than Thoughts u need to work on ya Punches ect,,,, meaning everthing so keep it up you to ~1~
Everything i say exact was better now that i look at it
Exact = all
V///Ex
Way one sided, Thoughts your verse and concepts were way to simple. You had no personals, wordplay, multies, vocab...your verse was like a nursery rhyme. peep some elite battles and read the tutorials.
Exact decent drop, alot more than needed to beat this kid, i know you can come better but no need to in this case. Only thing i can say to you for improvement is to shorten your lines a bit, got a lil stretchy in spots.
v/exact
hit up the battle in my sig with a honest vote.