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10-12 Lines
House Rules
No Hate, Crew or Dick Riding Votes
30 Minutes
You Spit First
Checking in.
ima check this battle out win i get my 100 post so look out for me=)
check...
About to drop in a second if you don't.
Exact aint one to borrow or beg, he just steals and recycles instead,
So ill leave this handicap deprived, like I just stole his prosthetic leg,
Fag, you don’t “rock”, that’s just a front to disguise his muscle spasms,
His 100 year old dick is withered, due to so many D/R inflicted orgasms,
I can tell you’re the leader of “Defiant Lyricists”, or you would have quit by now,
Cos you beatin me, is like an anorexic winnin a sumo wrestling bout,
This guys punches aint “Exact”, they don’t even ricochet,
Cos 5 dicks a day, is the only way Exacts losses stay away,
Ill divide your crews wins by the number of members, and still wouldn’t get close to anythin “mean”,
Cos ill chew your whole crew thread up, like I was a violent sewing machine!,
Yo,
Lyrical God is such a spoof,
...........This kid is straight from mythology,
Hoped and reached for the stars, and still didn't get proper astrology,
This bitch is pitiful, his loss column still hasn't reached it's full quota,
Because I'm gonna rewind this bitch and start from the beginning like DS Al Coda,
You need the proper restraints because your eyes get bigger than your talents,
When you're straddling the border line of defeat he's most likely to lose his balance,
In prior advance to this battle, you'd need to ante up your artillery,
Becuase nice guys finish last, I'll kill you if you display any chivalry,
Putting an eye out for one of your battles gives me an idea of what you're about,
Once you dropped that verse in LLL Jr, you brought shame to the thread courtesty of Lay Doubt,
You're not a god, I don't see the divine strength within your mind,
Becuase you're just a standard catch, like all the rest of Mankind.
this was a nice battle i like both verses but exact had better punches and thats what made his verse stick out more, both of u did really well its just i liked exacts punches moe
both continue to write because this was a really good battle
v// exact
flow/ god
vocab/exact
punches/tie
word/tie
personals/god
concept/god
vote/god
Upping.
ight ok battles well exact took this wit flo and a few good pounches need to still evalate .god had more personals thoguh exact u need more personals in it but u came harder wit pucnhes
omg @ this.
v//exact for coming doper than lyrical god in all aspects of this battle. damn...
Upping for more votes.
Upping.
voting god his punches hit harder to the person area
V//god
This was a stretched battle. Both of your verses ended up stretched.
Lyrical- That was weak. Those were some weak punches. I already stated that the verses were stretched. Your closing was horrible. A violent sewing machine? LMFAO. That was truely dumb and weak. The only thing left for me to say to you is elevate. Overall 5/10 for attempting.
Exact- Nice verse. Stretched but it was gravy. Your punches were good. You got him with the LLL jr line. Nice punch. There is nothing else for me to say. Overall 8/10
V-Exact
Why- Read what I wrote
this was a nice battle i like both verses but exact had better punches and beter rhymes..more compelx and more comple vocab which made his verse stick out more, ..lyrical..your rhymes were good but a lil too simple...punches were iight but not really effective..both of u elevate on strucutre and flow for sure...but booth of u did really well its just i liked exacts punches more
both continue to write because this was a really good battle
v// exact
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chedck out my sdig and vote on that battle..thansk
upping for votes
Upping for votes.
my vote is for exact becuse his flow and punches were da best in this battle...god had some nice hits but exacts were better both of ur drop were streched but its all good..V/ exact
punches-exact
flow-god
metas-exact
structure-exact
wordplay-exact
personals-god
vocab-exact
v/exact
heres the breakdown...
Exact aint one to borrow or beg, he just steals and recycles instead,
So ill leave this handicap deprived, like I just stole his prosthetic leg,
...i dont see where it rhymed, instead and leg dont rhyme, good meta though...
Fag, you don’t “rock”, that’s just a front to disguise his muscle spasms,
His 100 year old dick is withered, due to so many D/R inflicted orgasms,
...lol, nice here...
I can tell you’re the leader of “Defiant Lyricists”, or you would have quit by now,
Cos you beatin me, is like an anorexic winnin a sumo wrestling bout,
...nice personal and good punch homie...
This guys punches aint “Exact”, they don’t even ricochet,
Cos 5 dicks a day, is the only way Exacts losses stay away,
...i get it, but it seems like a filler...
Ill divide your crews wins by the number of members, and still wouldn’t get close to anythin “mean”,
Cos ill chew your whole crew thread up, like I was a violent sewing machine!,
...second line was nice... but punch missed for me...
overall:7/10
Lyrical God is such a spoof,
...........This kid is straight from mythology,
Hoped and reached for the stars, and still didn't get proper astrology,
...lol, really sick homie, nice meta...
This bitch is pitiful, his loss column still hasn't reached it's full quota,
Because I'm gonna rewind this bitch and start from the beginning like DS Al Coda,
...this sounds like it would be sick, but i dont know what ds al coda is...
You need the proper restraints because your eyes get bigger than your talents,
When you're straddling the border line of defeat he's most likely to lose his balance,
...really nice here, your coming hard with every bar...
In prior advance to this battle, you'd need to ante up your artillery,
Becuase nice guys finish last, I'll kill you if you display any chivalry,
...lol, strait, it was a lil childish but humorous non the less...
Putting an eye out for one of your battles gives me an idea of what you're about,
Once you dropped that verse in LLL Jr, you brought shame to the thread courtesty of Lay Doubt,
...nice personal, but you streched it so flow was off...
You're not a god, I don't see the divine strength within your mind,
Becuase you're just a standard catch, like all the rest of Mankind.
...lol, nice, good way to use his name...
overall:9/10
vote: exact(obvious reasons)