VerbaL AssaulT vs. Poetic Justus
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VerbaL AssaulT vs. Poetic Justus
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My life’s stuck at a dead end,
All the way I try to bend……the rule
Of death, acted the fool, acted all cool,
When I knew I was terminal, I tried to drown ma self in the pool,
Physically I can’t the virus fend,
Mentally I know my life’s stuck at a dead end.
It all started back two years ago,
It all crashed though in a moments few,
My whole life came at a standstill, brain a curfew,
Riots all around, didn’t know what to do,
Kept asking God why, I wanted a clue,
Why I got aids, whatever bad did I do?
There was nothing I could mend,
Because I know, my life’s a dead end.
When my wife crashed in a tree,
I was told she needed blood, exactly pints 3,
She was dying and I couldn’t assist,
Twist back the handles of time, to god I wished,
If somehow my blood to her I could lend,
But I couldn’t…Aids put my wish there to a dead end.
I have talked of aids and the problems it bought,
But I haven’t still told you how I was caught,
I was in Florida, enjoying the view,
When a woman lay beside me, asked what in the evening will I do,
I couldn’t stop myself being attracted to her,
I was like a flea attracted to a beautiful dogs fur,
She took me to her room and took off her clothes,
My heart started to bloom while my blood pressure rose,
She walked and talked…me into bed,
We made love all night, safety issues at that time weren’t in my head,
When I awoke, she was gone; she left me a letter though,
It was like an ending to a sad love song,
Only three letters was all it took,
“I have aids”, her words my whole body shook.
And all my thoughts went to the bend,
Then I knew our love…had come to a dead end.
Later on in life I thought the infection was passive,
It came and went, nothing that massive,
But I was wrong and soon to find out,
Couldn’t hand out my blood, I tried to shout
The virus away but it wouldn’t sway, so I tried to pray
But it went to waste, because AIDS was here to stay,
I have to tell you though how we met, me and my wife,
Before the Dead End got stamped on my life.
We met during a party, me and her
Her beauty was so radiant; it made my heart stir,
I had forgot about my symptoms, thought this girl was a gift,
U know, a gift like gold, silver, frankincense or Mur
She looked at me and said,
“Boy take me home”, I replied and told her,
“Girl you’re already spinning in my dome”
Two years later we were made one,
A hymn was sung, vows were made, and the bible was read, under the holy sun,
I had moved on in life from my first mistake,
I was going to be loyal, full devotion…..not give and take.
We lived happily but I couldn’t make love,
I knew that I was engulfed by aids…..like a hand in a glove.
She didn’t mind, kissed me without fear,
Tried to keep her away, but our love bought her near.
Then one day we went on a long drive,
Cruising coast from coast, hive to hive,
We went to the beach had one 2 a dive,
On the way back though…..my truest fear came alive,
A crash took place and my wife needed blood,
But what pulsed through my veins, was as good to her as mud.
I should’ve helped, but I was tied, I tried
And tried but the doctor wouldn’t abide, told me
“U have aids sir, u can only bring her more harm”,
She was my wife and I was useless, aids put on the calm,
Before the storm, I heard my wife scream her final scream,
It droned on like when a kettle releases its steam,
Now I too want to die, not get cured by alcheme.
Because my life is on a downwards bend,
Truly, I am approaching my own dead end.
1 month later he died, Life’s dead end is death.
check in....just seen nice drop...always a story lol great view long as hell but was interested the whole time propz bruv i'll drop soon just busy lately...get in soon
victims to the lifes roads....closed and blocked off,
washed up...hosed and lost....,
no t-sections...or alleys to sidetrack,
as lifes roads are unlike no other don't deny that,
they are viscious...treacherous and the ends decided by you,
violent but true......and quite mysterious wen the silence seeps thru,
unknown to others the highway your on,
no indicators or miles...to show where you've gone,
roads 60 years long....miles aint included but wrong,
as your brain closes....and mind secluded thru song,
you don't understand whats happening when the doors close on you,
but no neglegance ya feelings pour on true,
what to do???
but suffer with no opening.....no clue,
visions unclear...like enraged but mislead friends,
looking back on your life...like a street directory,
as your roads are read again,
but your times up...the roads finished...a obvious dead end,
and unlike wall ornaments...with life you can't "turn back the clock",
as once you reach that dead end...you mayaswell be burned and shot,
but you got the key...to open them bickering doors,
make a decision...turn away from the sickening cause,
be a cleanser...and wipe your floors,
but these roads are harsh...to be taken serious,
they own your laugh...make you delerious,
they are the reason...your life come to be this way,
just follow these roads wisely...don't fall astray,
be honest....and show that you care,
let the only dead ends...reside in your hair
done....cooked it up just now sorry audio absorbing me...g/l to you bruv..peace
uppin for votes please
uppin#2 hmmmm another one slept on..........waste of time
vote for the pilr1 vz thoughts battle please..............
Uppin' #1
Uppin #2, come on vote the battle dogs
uppin 3, come on dogs vote
uppin 4, fuckin vote, where are y'all
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Hit Uo That Link and once i seen u voted i'll hit this up
uppin for votes...........
uppin for votes.............................
i wudda qwote but its 2 good 2 long... both of ya guys had emotion stil.. but pak's verse was slightly better.. i liked ur wordin in this.. but dam! u have improved alot since this battle.. the way u expressed ur feelins was good i liked it.. my vote gonna go 2 pak for overall better verse..
pak stayed on tha topic all way and his verse was jus better with more emtoin so my vote goes to him
holy hell that is long as shit but it was tha better overall it hit tha topic on many levels and had xcelent wordplayQuote:
Originally Posted by Pakaveli
I give that shit to pak....It was a lot more poetic...but the other dude had a nice drop too.Hey ya'll can vote on my shit if ya'll want
damn this was an exciteing battle but i think pakaveli took this hands down with imgaery and wordplay nice battle
Vote pak
Pak Came Ill In This Battle, Good Wordplay And Strong Vokab Stayed On Topik And Didn't Falter To Much
Verbal You Had A Good Flow But I Felt The Wordplay Was A Little Played Out
V/ Pak