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10 lines
5 min check
30 mins to drop
no h/v, c/v or d/r
no feeding
one.
check
YUP YUP you already know what it is
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Everybody know one way more than a stepbeyond this faggot
and best believe when this fake come around, I'mma bodybag it
leave him wonderin' how the fuck his last sight was his own mind
afterwards, run his broke ass pockets, this lil' gay only got one dime
thought you was really gangsta, but then lil' homie, where them assets?
yeah he bustin' tools, but he talkin' about infectin' homos in they asses
and harmin' one with ya verbals son, ain't neva gonna happen
but when you terminal in the hostpital, why even botha rappin'?
what kinda stupid shit this kid on, tryin' to roll with a crew diseased?
yeah you sick, but not in a good way, so I'm pullin' ya plug with ease
one.
I'll hit this up when he drops could you plz vote on my battle in tha sig.
Thanks
bloodz4life duck'ed and admitted he sucks...but i wounder-dawg'z
what makes you think u gonna have 1-up on me?.......................
when you already in UNDER-DOGS 1
yea i'll fold'em, words are subliminal, im a discreet talker
but punches kill................................
so if 1 miss'es, u'll catch the rest like playing tag with sleep walkers 2
up1 tactics are running bitch, i'll tilt the scale ova with heavy punches and rapid gunning hits
ya coming close to the end with the beat down 'inches away from ya ass' like 'catholic punishment' (bend over,ruler) 3
you aint stunnin bitch, like spark'in a wet match.. its gonna be one of those days
cuz you couldnt be up-1 with extra life in super mario games 4
u'r garbage, i dont care what you spit, honestly you shouldnt had started
just give up, cuz basiclly, the only time i'll say this "1-up",
is when asked where ya apartment....
(1-up, up 1 floor,)
dont get it dont vote.........
ups #1
1up
Punches-1up
Structure-1up
Word Play-one
Vocab-1up
v//1up
one had better personals and wordplay...up came good at the beginning but the heat diminished, one stayed constant...neither were great verses but battle was iight, only thing one did wrong with personals is you didnt get away from makin fun of his name...go back and find links and quotes to make personals out of, use his sig and shit, dont get stuck on the name it can make your verse kinda boring sometimes...
v..ONE
hit this up with a honest vote anyone: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247930
Punches-1up
Structure-1up
Word Play-one
Vocab-one
creativity-1up
punches wit disses r like the main thing in battles...both did good but 1up came harder
v/1up
Punches-1up
Structure-1up
Word Play-one
Vocab-1up
v//1up
^^^ these votes dont count..........
onestepbeyond = 1
1up = 0
who is the od so i can pm him to delet these votes???
EXPLAIN VOTES ONLY!!!!
uppin' #2...
ups #3
1up came wit structure. punches was cool too. they cud come harder tho. onestep ya verse was harder overall. i wasnt feelin ya structure. wordplay was decent, punches was cool. v/onestep
damn, no love from ma.
haha, s'all good, ups #4
one.
onestep i wasnt feelin your rhyme scheme , you had some creativity in ya verse and it had potential with tha concepts but needed to be worded different. 1up on the other hand had a more direct verse with personals and more consistent punches
v/1up
hit up my open battles with an honest vote
I think onestepbeyond took it. But that's just me.
Stfu.
last ups...
Yea One took this easily. You Were Just Talkin Bout How U Gonna BodyBag Him-Be More Creative Man N Dont Know How 1 Took Personals One Took That Too. Shit Ima Have To Post Voting 101 for these niggas.
PLEZ EXPLAINT TO ME SOMETHING.....Quote:
Originally Posted by .:KLePTo:.
HOW THE HELL DID YOU GIVE HIM PROPS ON PERSONAL WHEN I'VE BEEN ON THIS SITE FOR WHAT??? ALMOST 12 HOURS NOW???
and my verse was based off hes name mostly........
FUCK OUTTA HERE.... that vote would of got D/Q if it was up to me along with everyone who votes like this:
punch: him
flow: her
vote: him
we need ILLicit to SCHOOL THIS NIGGAS ON THE VOTING SYSTEM....
cuz these guys are so dumb when they vote its not even funny no-more...
un-less those are hes dick ryders/ alias.......
^^^Update yo sig fo here.
Mang, agreed. That voting system is hella gay.
V/ 1up
1up had better structure, flow, and punches... one you're shit was really badly organized, the punches didn't hit that hard at all, and the personals werent really all that much to make up for it. v - 1up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248192
more gay votes.......................................
yo i am going to give this one to 1up...he had a better flow and better punch lines...the word play wasnt all that good but it was there....
onestepbeyond-u had some good shit i some of your punch lines hit hard...but u had no word play and and the flow was hard to go with some times....
over all both could step it up...no hate....
v-1up
Holla at me if your battle needs votes tomarrow,
I will have 100 posts some time tomarrow....
Vote on my latest battle!
1up-Betta Verse........Betta flo.....................structure............punch ez..........personalz.........
one-u suck im srry.....only thing good waz ur wordplay
v/1up
hit up the battle in my sig
yo i am going to say the samething that i said last time cause thats how that shit went
yo i am going to give this one to 1up...he had a better flow and better punch lines...the word play wasnt all that good but it was there....
onestepbeyond-u had some good shit i some of your punch lines hit hard...but u had no word play and and the flow was hard to go with some times....
over all both could step it up...no hate....
v-1up
Damn what a pussy to get all those votes DQ'd and they where explain.
You Just Suck.
yo no hate r nuthin both of ya'll came hard it's just the i felt onestep flow a little better
2 me he had a overall best but ya'll both was good no lie thats honest
v/onestep
upp'in for explain votes only.............................................. ................................
one step really took every category in this one, he started out real strong but loosened up as it went on, 1up came ight but didnt have anything that caught my eye....
v/ 1
............And be sure to hit up the battle in my sig
1up
Everybody know one way more than a stepbeyond this faggot
and best believe when this fake come around, I'mma bodybag it
Weak Opener
leave him wonderin' how the fuck his last sight was his own mind
afterwards, run his broke ass pockets, this lil' gay only got one dime
Weak Personal
thought you was really gangsta, but then lil' homie, where them assets?
yeah he bustin' tools, but he talkin' about infectin' homos in they asses
lol Nice Punch
and harmin' one with ya verbals son, ain't neva gonna happen
but when you terminal in the hostpital, why even botha rappin'?
Come on Now Started Off Gd Ended Bad weak punch
what kinda stupid shit this kid on, tryin' to roll with a crew diseased?
yeah you sick, but not in a good way, so I'm pullin' ya plug with ease
Weak Closer
1 up a couple of ur punches wasnt hitting hard at all and ur personals were weak but u had gd flow and structure
vs
onestepbeyond
bloodz4life duck'ed and admitted he sucks...but i wounder-dawg'z
what makes you think u gonna have 1-up on me?.......................
when you already in UNDER-DOGS 1
Gd Punch But Wat The Fuck Is Wrong Wit Ur Structure
yea i'll fold'em, words are subliminal, im a discreet talker
but punches kill................................
so if 1 miss'es, u'll catch the rest like playing tag with sleep walkers 2
up1 tactics are running bitch, i'll tilt the scale ova with heavy punches and rapid gunning hits
Man u Gots To Elavate Foreal On dat Struture Weak Punch
ya coming close to the end with the beat down 'inches away from ya ass' like 'catholic punishment' (bend over,ruler) 3
you aint stunnin bitch, like spark'in a wet match.. its gonna be one of those days
cuz you couldnt be up-1 with extra life in super mario games 4
u'r garbage, i dont care what you spit, honestly you shouldnt had started
just give up, cuz basiclly, the only time i'll say this "1-up",
is when asked where ya apartment....
i got tired of reading dat shit cause da structure was so off it was making it hard to read ur rhymes u had some ok punches but u lost dis battle based on structure elavate bra
Punches-one
structure-1up
personals-tie
flow-tie
v/1up based on structure