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10 lines
Votes must break down both verses and an overall explanation.
500 posts to vote.
Due ASAP.
Checks due today.
aight Twizted lets do this shit
Chezeckin in
check.
ill kick ur ass put a blunt in ur mouth like Kin Kade
u got 53 wins but ur a smod......
and uve been winning since u found out u can edit the uve made
Pound for pound duke? I'm beatin down this dude...
Till he resembles scuba divers & is left breathin outta tubes...
Plus I kill queers, & now we all know this cat blows fellas...
I'll put a hole in ur chest big enough to make ur asshole jealous...
lol u wuz my dog long ago but now i got a cooler cat
wen BTK left the site
.................u stopped writing verses,how fuked up is that?
Yea, he's as gay as they come, always lookin for tha next guy...
He only wants to be in *Front, when talkin bout his sex life...
MY TYPOS
ill kick ur ass put a blunt in ur mouth like Kin Kade
u got 53 wins but ur a smod......
uve been winning since u found out u can edit the verse uve made
Pound for pound duke? I'm beatin down this dude...
Till he resembles scuba divers & is left breathin outta tubes...
Plus I kill queers, & now we all know this cat blows fellas...
I'll put a hole in ur chest big enough to make ur asshole jealous...
lol u wuz my dog long ago but now i got a cooler cat
wen BTK left the site
.................u stopped writing verses,how fuked up is that?
Yea, he's as gay as they come, always lookin for tha next guy...
He only wants to be in *Front, when talkin bout his sex life...
Lol @ you.. faggot.
Goddamn this bitch is wack..he comes this way time after time
n' I'd say everything you did wrong, but I don't got enough lines.
You learn from the wackest sluts... And prolly dropped out in allignment
And I aint gotta be a teacher to know even dumb fucks fail the assignment.
Your wack yo, I'll murder you too... Cuz your rapping skills are partly
In the end I'm throwing this hodown like an old west party.
Now shut the fuck up, how do you expect to be protected by your crew
When half don't know they in it, and the other half dont know YOU.
Your like a world with eyelids... Cuz really there aint no girls winkin'
n' two wrongs don't make a right.. so wtf were your parents thinkin?
word pz bitch
i hate to say it but the fag twizted took it.
but i cant vote because im in your crew. lmao.
first of all assignment your typos fuked u up your lines were ok your punches were shit
now twizted u went to easy i have seen 500 times better from u but u still won this wit good flow and some good punches and nice vocab
but i cant vote but if i could it would be for twizted
twizted hit it with personal after personal... assignment, ya verse was wack dog... twizteds wasnt amazing, it was okay but his punches hit harder for sure...
v...twizted
ayo, hit this up with an honest vote plz: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247930
That was off da hook. Pure beef battle...imma have to say twizted took it by far...but Assignment brought some interestin shit to the table. Just not hard enough..good battle both yall-NOT A VOTE JUST FEEDBACK
as much as i would like to beat twisted.:rolleyes:...........i will have to say he took this easily with better punches,....assignment you came good, he jus out did you
Pound for pound duke? I'm beatin down this dude...
Till he resembles scuba divers & is left breathin outta tubes...
vs.
You learn from the wackest sluts... And prolly dropped out in allignment
And I aint gotta be a teacher to know even dumb fucks fail the assignment.
My vote for Assignment
v// Assignment
^ LOL you retard.
Don't be pissed besides my vote don't count so why you gotta call me names and hurt my feelings???
Pound for pound duke? I'm beatin down this dude...
Till he resembles scuba divers & is left breathin outta tubes...
Vs.
You learn from the wackest sluts... And prolly dropped out in allignment
And I aint gotta be a teacher to know even dumb fucks fail the assignment.
Your wack yo, I'll murder you too... Cuz your rapping skills are partly
In the end I'm throwing this hodown like an old west party.
LMAO.
Now shut the fuck up, how do you expect to be protected by your crew
When half don't know they in it, and the other half dont know YOU.
Very True.
v/ Twizted
i couldnt vote even if i wanted to which i did but i couldnt since i aint got 500 post...
twizted won by far, better flow and more witty punches
twizted is the only decent cat i've peep so far on this site
^ I didnt try at all. but thanks.
ill kick ur ass put a blunt in ur mouth like Kin Kade
u got 53 wins but ur a smod......
and uve been winning since u found out u can edit the uve made
HE HAS 54-56 wins. hes not a smod. you cant edit in FL/EFL
Pound for pound duke? I'm beatin down this dude...
Till he resembles scuba divers & is left breathin outta tubes...
played
Plus I kill queers, & now we all know this cat blows fellas...
I'll put a hole in ur chest big enough to make ur asshole jealous...
lol
lol u wuz my dog long ago but now i got a cooler cat
wen BTK left the site
.................u stopped writing verses,how fuked up is that?
BTK didnt leave. hes on right now
Yea, he's as gay as they come, always lookin for tha next guy...
He only wants to be in *Front, when talkin bout his sex life...
played
vs.
Goddamn this bitch is wack..he comes this way time after time
n' I'd say everything you did wrong, but I don't got enough lines.
not played yet, but it should be, so you're lucky
You learn from the wackest sluts... And prolly dropped out in allignment
And I aint gotta be a teacher to know even dumb fucks fail the assignment
nah
Your wack yo, I'll murder you too... Cuz your rapping skills are partly
In the end I'm throwing this hodown like an old west party.
nice
Now shut the fuck up, how do you expect to be protected by your crew
When half don't know they in it, and the other half dont know YOU.
rofl
Your like a world with eyelids... Cuz really there aint no girls winkin'
n' two wrongs don't make a right.. so wtf were your parents thinkin?
roflmao!
ok battle twisted ya shit ya good..i cant vote yet but id vote for twisted for better punches and a better verse all aroudn and assignment ya shit wasnt bad but those typos fucked it up worse
twisted definitly took that. better punches, and structure
v/twisted
Twizted took it at the check in ... you put 5 hunit on this? Assignment's verse is worth negative posts to vote.
V/twisted. Better punches, actually tried ... a bit.
But since I ain't got 5 hunit posts, I guess it don't matter.
cant vote but id give this to twizted...i hate it when people do this text battle thing and have no rhytem what so ever....just cuz its writing doesnt mean u can just go off beat....so im givin this to twizted...he had a very constant flow goin and all his shit made perfect sense....not to mention his last 4 lines were the ultimate finisher....
check out my battles and 3 songs in my sig...
electro
v/twisted
flow_twizted
punches-twizted(work on them they were alright)
personnels-twizted(both of u need to work on them not hard at all)
entertainment-twizted
v/twizted
Goddamn this bitch is wack..he comes this way time after time
n' I'd say everything you did wrong, but I don't got enough lines.
THIS HERE WAS NICE LIKED ALOT
You learn from the wackest sluts... And prolly dropped out in allignment
And I aint gotta be a teacher to know even dumb fucks fail the assignment.
THIS WASNT THERE THAT MUCH YA KNOW DIDNT FEEL THE PUNCH U WANTED TO GIVE
Your wack yo, I'll murder you too... Cuz your rapping skills are partly
In the end I'm throwing this hodown like an old west party.
YOU JUST WANTED TO RHYME IT I GUESS DIDNT REALLY FEEL IT
Now shut the fuck up, how do you expect to be protected by your crew
When half don't know they in it, and the other half dont know YOU.
THAT WAS IIGHT GOTTA A PUNCH BUT COULD OF BEEN BETTER
Your like a world with eyelids... Cuz really there aint no girls winkin'
n' two wrongs don't make a right.. so wtf were your parents thinkin?
WEAK EXITS DIDNT FEEL WAT U WERE TRYING TO SAY 6/10
ill kick ur ass put a blunt in ur mouth like Kin Kade
u got 53 wins but ur a smod......
GAY OPENER DOG COME ON
and uve been winning since u found out u can edit the uve made
Pound for pound duke? I'm beatin down this dude...
IIGHT
Till he resembles scuba divers & is left breathin outta tubes...
Plus I kill queers, & now we all know this cat blows fellas...
THATS SOME WAT BETTA RHYMES ARENT THERE
I'll put a hole in ur chest big enough to make ur asshole jealous...
lol u wuz my dog long ago but now i got a cooler cat
wen BTK left the site
WAS NICE AND THEN WENT BAD
.................u stopped writing verses,how fuked up is that?
Yea, he's as gay as they come, always lookin for tha next guy...
WEAK DONT LIKE
He only wants to be in *Front, when talkin bout his sex life...
COO NOT THE GREATEST
5/10
cant vote just lettin everyone who voted for the other guy they probably dont know how to batttle
need vote on these battles to if u can their in ma sig please
would have to give it to twizted if I could vote....
uppin' for a straight battle.
Pound for pound duke? I'm beatin down this dude...
Till he resembles scuba divers & is left breathin outta tubes...You learn from
vs
the wackest sluts... And prolly dropped out in allignment
And I aint gotta be a teacher to know even dumb fucks fail the assignment
punches-twiz
flow-twiz
metas-twiz
structure-both
enjoyment-twiz
i gotta say twiz took this battle cause he had better punches and personals structure was on point so was ur flow
assi ur verse was ok but ur punches wasnt hitting as hard as twiz ur structure was tight and ur flow was gd but im a have to give this to twz for better punches
v-twiz for better punches
damn i cant even poll
Lol thanks yall. guess you liked the battle. =) Britty D just didn't get my punches.
britty D didnt even analyse the lines right.. what an idiot...
anyways twisted took this, i cant vote.. but its obvious he came harder
i liked the personals and the ending was cool.. haha.. good battle
though assignment too... both ya shit was good, but theres gotta be a winner..
Holla at me if your battle needs votes tomarrow,
I will have 100 posts some time tomarrow....
Vote on my latest battle!
lol twizted i respect u im them only light weight who battled u and uve been nominated for legends lol..............................................i m watching u.. :coolio:
twizted hit it with personal after personal... assignment, ya verse was wack dog... twizteds wasnt amazing, it was okay but his punches hit harder for sure...
v...twizted
dammit!
i need 500 posts!
Lol Up 4... Yeah. S'all good.
Twizted
Nice punches as usual.Creativity was there.Originality in punches and wits there as always.The personals were very nice.
Ass.
Your verse was pretty ok for you.You just need the concepts to make ya puynches better with wordplay and better wording.
v/Twizted.
What da fuck at only two votes being polled.
Goddamn this bitch is wack..he comes this way time after time
n' I'd say everything you did wrong, but I don't got enough lines.
alright, good opener 2.5/5
You learn from the wackest sluts... And prolly dropped out in allignment
And I aint gotta be a teacher to know even dumb fucks fail the assignment.
nice nameplay 2.5/5
Your wack yo, I'll murder you too... Cuz your rapping skills are partly
In the end I'm throwing this hodown like an old west party.
ha. nice 3/5
Now shut the fuck up, how do you expect to be protected by your crew
When half don't know they in it, and the other half dont know YOU.
ok 2.5
Your like a world with eyelids... Cuz really there aint no girls winkin'
n' two wrongs don't make a right.. so wtf were your parents thinkin?
lol nice closure
vs.
Assignment
ill kick ur ass put a blunt in ur mouth like Kin Kade
u got 53 wins but ur a smod......
and uve been winning since u found out u can edit the uve made
ok opener 2/5
Pound for pound duke? I'm beatin down this dude...
Till he resembles scuba divers & is left breathin outta tubes...
ok 2/5
Plus I kill queers, & now we all know this cat blows fellas...
I'll put a hole in ur chest big enough to make ur asshole jealous...
once again.. ok 2/5
lol u wuz my dog long ago but now i got a cooler cat
wen BTK left the site
.................u stopped writing verses,how fuked up is that?
stupid 1.5/5
Yea, he's as gay as they come, always lookin for tha next guy...
He only wants to be in *Front, when talkin bout his sex life...
ok.. good closure 2.25/5
v/Twizted.. for the above reasons.
still open, wtf?!
v//twizted damn, easily.