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no freeposting
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Voting Ends on Monday
now check in
Im really annoyed.
damn.
whatever, lets just do 12.
Sorry to do this.
mikey fresh yep: where you from
mikey fresh yep: new jersey? :-)
Sofakingfreshson: ypu.
Sofakingfreshson: Yup8
Sofakingfreshson: where u at?
mikey fresh yep: delaware
Sofakingfreshson: oh
Sofakingfreshson: In newark right?
mikey fresh yep: how did you know?
Sofakingfreshson: In newark delaware?*
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
Your AI fam, So it’s love, Champs? Nah I wont laugh
But the day you get the belt..Well..Savir will vote Daz
Its not happening, It never has, it doesn’t even matter chuz hey
You&him got something in common. I just didn’t know the rapper was gay
who’s great as Daz? The glass ceiling..ima scrape ya ass
plus ya sex drive? Motherfucker Keith sweat couldnt Make It Last
when we first talked, told me bout lacrosse, scholarships,I was wowin it kid
Not because of the money.
But you play with sticks and balls and your ACTUALLY PROUD OF THE SHIT?
I live in the bricks, Newark, NJ, where im livin is wild
You fucking mime. First M~M’s style now you mimic my town?
nah.. I hate to do this to you.
bitch ya dumb punches. quick to be coming with some ruckus
your verse seem rushed bum. guess that's why it's easy to bum rush it
beating you is no task. ass.. when I burst it hurts text
why try when Vy beat YOU. n' I beat HIM with my worst verse yet
bitch just stop with ya fighting. original? propping the biting
listen, ain't no one mimic ya style.. they just mocking your writing
Daz was this old vet. ill.. dope.. a battle with him was worth it
^ yeah that concept does fit well. with all of your played verses
get cornered with ease.. Immigrant is in some order to see
that the vet state of mind has kept his ass out with boarder police
you're a character man. but whatever you chose, fact is
you won't find the hole I doug funny..
if you have another episode of wackness
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
Ha...funny opener...
Your AI fam, So it’s love, Champs? Nah I wont laugh
But the day you get the belt..Well..Savir will vote Daz
Hehe...nice-ish...
Its not happening, It never has, it doesn’t even matter chuz hey
You&him got something in common. I just didn’t know the rapper was gay
Eh...funny, but weak...
who’s great as Daz? The glass ceiling..ima scrape ya ass
plus ya sex drive? Motherfucker Keith sweat couldnt Make It Last
Ha...
when we first talked, told me bout lacrosse, scholarships,I was wowin it kid
Not because of the money.
But you play with sticks and balls and your ACTUALLY PROUD OF THE SHIT?
Another gay joke...decent, but also eh...
I live in the bricks, Newark, NJ, where im livin is wild
You fucking mime. First M~M’s style now you mimic my town?
Didn't rhyme...decent closer though...
VS
bitch ya dumb punches. quick to be coming with some ruckus
your verse seem rushed bum. guess that's why it's easy to bum rush it
Decent...saw it coming though...
beating you is no task. ass.. when I burst it hurts text
why try when Vy beat YOU. n' I beat HIM with my worst verse yet
Haha!
bitch just stop with ya fighting. original? propping the biting
listen, ain't no one mimic ya style.. they just mocking your writing
Cute...yeah, I called it cute!
Daz was this old vet. ill.. dope.. a battle with him was worth it
^ yeah that concept does fit well. with all of your played verses
Eh...
get cornered with ease.. Immigrant is in some order to see
that the vet state of mind has kept his ass out with boarder police
Forced to me...
you're a character man. but whatever you chose, fact is
you won't find the hole I doug funny..
if you have another episode of wackness
Eh...
Gotta go with Daz...
Felt he held it together longer...brought more wit...was less obvious.
Nice battle...close...just felt Saul fell off at the end.
Vote: Daz
Peace
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
Nah
Your AI fam, So it’s love, Champs? Nah I wont laugh
But the day you get the belt..Well..Savir will vote Daz
Nice
Its not happening, It never has, it doesn’t even matter chuz hey
You&him got something in common. I just didn’t know the rapper was gay
Lol, dope, not seen nothing like this before
who’s great as Daz? The glass ceiling..ima scrape ya ass
plus ya sex drive? Motherfucker Keith sweat couldnt Make It Last
Not feelin
when we first talked, told me bout lacrosse, scholarships,I was wowin it kid
Not because of the money.
But you play with sticks and balls and your ACTUALLY PROUD OF THE SHIT?
Meh, gay joke but not bad
I live in the bricks, Newark, NJ, where im livin is wild
You fucking mime. First M~M’s style now you mimic my town?
Wild and Town? hmm, Not feelin
bitch ya dumb punches. quick to be coming with some ruckus
your verse seem rushed bum. guess that's why it's easy to bum rush it
Nice
beating you is no task. ass.. when I burst it hurts text
why try when Vy beat YOU. n' I beat HIM with my worst verse yet
Lol, coo
bitch just stop with ya fighting. original? propping the biting
listen, ain't no one mimic ya style.. they just mocking your writing
LMFAO nice
Daz was this old vet. ill.. dope.. a battle with him was worth it
^ yeah that concept does fit well. with all of your played verses
Nah
get cornered with ease.. Immigrant is in some order to see
that the vet state of mind has kept his ass out with boarder police
Nice. Fresh
you're a character man. but whatever you chose, fact is
you won't find the hole I doug funny..
if you have another episode of wackness
Na not feeling
Pretty close battle, Not too bad either, but i think Saul came a lil more consistent.
V/Saul
Yo' good fuckin battle y'a'll. lol this
was hilarious. Daz you should do this
all the time. You'd get respected alot more.
And Saul.Goode u shoulda came like
this last week against P. It's like two different
people, lol
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
--LOLOLOLOLOLOL.
Your AI fam, So it’s love, Champs? Nah I wont laugh
But the day you get the belt..Well..Savir will vote Daz
--LOL again. Man..I never notice that shit.
Its not happening, It never has, it doesn’t even matter chuz hey
You&him got something in common. I just didn’t know the rapper was gay
--quit dissing me hoe. n...kinda corny here.
who’s great as Daz? The glass ceiling..ima scrape ya ass
plus ya sex drive? Motherfucker Keith sweat couldnt Make It Last
--i don't like these types
when we first talked, told me bout lacrosse, scholarships,I was wowin it kid
Not because of the money.
But you play with sticks and balls and your ACTUALLY PROUD OF THE SHIT?
--'s aight
I live in the bricks, Newark, NJ, where im livin is wild
You fucking mime. First M~M’s style now you mimic my town?
--nah
vs
bitch ya dumb punches. quick to be coming with some ruckus
your verse seem rushed bum. guess that's why it's easy to bum rush it
--nah..i used a bumrush line a long time ago..and a lot better
beating you is no task. ass.. when I burst it hurts text
why try when Vy beat YOU. n' I beat HIM with my worst verse yet
--didn't people say it was your best?..eh
bitch just stop with ya fighting. original? propping the biting
listen, ain't no one mimic ya style.. they just mocking your writing
--coo
Daz was this old vet. ill.. dope.. a battle with him was worth it
^ yeah that concept does fit well. with all of your played verses
--nah
get cornered with ease.. Immigrant is in some order to see
that the vet state of mind has kept his ass out with boarder police
--eh
you're a character man. but whatever you chose, fact is
you won't find the hole I doug funny..
if you have another episode of wackness
--nah..not feelin the wordpizzy
vote-daz
^ you honestly hate me lmao. every battle I have you vote against me, I'm not complaining, just find it hilarious. When it's even written in Daz's verse.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Saul.Goode
what in the fuck.
EVERYBODY is saying that. Jay Walker, Key, Daz..now you?
I don't hate!!
seriously though, I don't notice this...I just vote and shit..lol.
it's cool. lmao.
Quote:
Originally Posted by Savir
Ur going to get the belt now.
wtf @ btk and savir. saul won this pretty easily. i'll break it down later. but he's getting robbed.. wow. pz.
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
who’s great as Daz? The glass ceiling..ima scrape ya ass
plus ya sex drive? Motherfucker Keith sweat couldnt Make It Last
vs
bitch just stop with ya fighting. original? propping the biting
listen, ain't no one mimic ya style.. they just mocking your writing
you won't find the hole I doug funny..
if you have another episode of wackness
^U a-hole! I was tryna figure a way to make that punch but forgot all about it. I liked it though, witty, and fresh. I dont know why no one else liked it.
V/ Daz after rereading, I jus was feeling his verse more.
lol.
2-2
Am I the only one who notice that you always do this shit? Man up and make a vote. You wait until the last minute to pick somebody..after everyone else has voted. Stop doing that ish.Quote:
Originally Posted by Mister Key
V/ me
*Edit*
If we count the tie its 3-3 yo
MY B. i aint see lay's vote.
I dont always do it actually, I vote in like a third of the battles, and maybe 1 a week ill vote a tie, cause there actually close. Its not a matter of manning up. Its a matter of what I think. And what I think after rereading the verses :2thumb:Quote:
Originally Posted by .Nique.
Oh yea, my vote has been edited in.
4-3 me.
Daz
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
vs.
saul
beating you is no task. ass.. when I burst it hurts text
why try when Vy beat YOU. n' I beat HIM with my worst verse yet
i didnt feel much from daz really, tha gay jokes were pretty corny to me. closer wasnt my type of line. just not a verse i liked. saul's verse was better, i didnt lik ethat bum ruch line or mocking line. but ur concepts were alot better. that doug funny shit woulda been realllly tight if it had a better punch.
v/saul, he came better.
tie.
yup.
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
Your AI fam, So it’s love, Champs? Nah I wont laugh
But the day you get the belt..Well..Savir will vote Daz
when we first talked, told me bout lacrosse, scholarships,I was wowin it kid
Not because of the money.
But you play with sticks and balls and your ACTUALLY PROUD OF THE SHIT?
I live in the bricks, Newark, NJ, where im livin is wild
You fucking mime. First M~M’s style now you mimic my town?
v
bitch ya dumb punches. quick to be coming with some ruckus
your verse seem rushed bum. guess that's why it's easy to bum rush it
bitch just stop with ya fighting. original? propping the biting
listen, ain't no one mimic ya style.. they just mocking your writing
Daz was this old vet. ill.. dope.. a battle with him was worth it
^ yeah that concept does fit well. with all of your played verses
get cornered with ease.. Immigrant is in some order to see
that the vet state of mind has kept his ass out with boarder police
v/ Saul
ur up 1.
Vote - Tie
bitch ya dumb punches. quick to be coming with some ruckus
your verse seem rushed bum. guess that's why it's easy to bum rush it
get cornered with ease.. Immigrant is in some order to see
that the vet state of mind has kept his ass out with boarder police
you're a character man. but whatever you chose, fact is
you won't find the hole I doug funny..
if you have another episode of wackness
vs
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
who’s great as Daz? The glass ceiling..ima scrape ya ass
plus ya sex drive? Motherfucker Keith sweat couldnt Make It Last
when we first talked, told me bout lacrosse, scholarships,I was wowin it kid
Not because of the money.
But you play with sticks and balls and your ACTUALLY PROUD OF THE SHIT?
And I can`t pick lol. Sorry dukes. Nice battle.
tied.
^ I was up 1. that means it's like 6-5 me....
yeah.
more?
yeah, um.......I would have to say I went with saul on this one....
both verses were good, let me break it down....hammer time!
Daz:
Daz you came good man.....you had some pretty hard hitting punches, and others were not as decent.........your structure was decent....
but what really bugged me is how stretched your lines were......I mean, you frantically crammed your lines....other than that, verse was pretty good!
Saul: As for you buddy.......same thing, good verse.....you had pretty hard hitting punches....personals were good.....structure was good.........the way your verse flowed to me was better...
so anyways, on a scale of 1-10
Saul: 8.5/10
Daz: 8/10
Close, But I Have To Give It To Saul For Better Punches(Harder Hitting)
Go Vote On Mine Bitches.....
Pz.
your up 2.
I <3 you daz.
*smacks*
you better.
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
when we first talked, told me bout lacrosse, scholarships,I was wowin it kid
Not because of the money.
But you play with sticks and balls and your ACTUALLY PROUD OF THE SHIT?
I live in the bricks, Newark, NJ, where im livin is wild
You fucking mime. First M~M’s style now you mimic my town?
vs
beating you is no task. ass.. when I burst it hurts text
why try when Vy beat YOU. n' I beat HIM with my worst verse yet
bitch just stop with ya fighting. original? propping the biting
listen, ain't no one mimic ya style.. they just mocking your writing
v Daz. just more consistent imo =/
marv n frame is done.
your up 1.
daz
fav lines
You came from no where, M~M’s protégé, I’ll murder this geek
M~M’s spent, he’s tired of writing two fucking verses a week
^ lol
who’s great as Daz? The glass ceiling..ima scrape ya ass
plus ya sex drive? Motherfucker Keith sweat couldnt Make It Last
saul goode
beating you is no task. ass.. when I burst it hurts text
why try when Vy beat YOU. n' I beat HIM with my worst verse yet
bitch just stop with ya fighting. original? propping the biting
listen, ain't no one mimic ya style.. they just mocking your writing
^^this was cool
rest was weak ...daz had those two lines and couple other lines that were better then saul goode's...not a great battle here...both have came better before...but...better personals and more enjoyable verse
vote-daz
Tie.lol@ this seasaw battle.
*see-saw
;)