flavin (1-0) vs. untold (1-0)

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

check.......16 lines

Kontext vs. G.
phillycannons vs. WTf Man
Thor vs. Renegade.

16? Whatever.

Czek.

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...7&page=2&pp=15
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...16#post3430816
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...23#post3430823
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...38#post3430838

Been contemplating jokes so I could rip and whore a G
But then I read ur verse, and realized u did it for me
I think ive heard of u before, Im having these hunches
A Classic Huh? Wow, Good job reppin ur punches
Its funny, No one ever told me ur dope, name suits you
The only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you
U a hypocrite? Trying to get up with a name like that
Fuck, u should become an undercover agent………..
…………………………..and follow ur concepts path
Take advice from ur poetry let suicide thoughts consume you
And trust me, ^^That’s not so I can win, That’s to help ur verses dude
Im expecting you to get more laughs then me, as a matter of fact
Now here, let me teach you the difference between with and at
Heres some advice kid cange ur name, I’ll call u the bird
Cuz you flying in a league of ur own, LLL the 3rd

edit: forgot a comma where i needed it to flow

Get whored and stay in bed... Nigga, rest in peace
Tol Flav's bitch to get at me... He let her off her leash
Be deceased, your last battle was only won by luck
Flav's rollin as big mac, when hes under the truck
I'm a blaze this foo... Yea I'm burnin the joint
Flav ya life's like broken pencil tips...
... Theres really no point
Ya death's like The Fugees, softly kill'n you, G!
As for being well-endowed? Yea, Flav's hung...
But only when from a tree
Dawg, I'm get'n down and dirty just for the win
Just like when you got screw'd with that weed ...
...Your get'n fucked here again
Bitch I beat you once, your ineed of some help
^^And I guess they weren't lyin...
When they said "History repeats itself" ^^
Fag, you more harmless then a garden snake
Flav's got more of a false image than Artifake
So fuck it! I'm gonna go 16 just cause I can

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Originally Posted by flavin
do u have a myspace???

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Quote:

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Originally Posted by flavin
actually........thats not what i was going to use it for i was gonna add u to my friends....ive battles lots of people from here with myspaces and never used them in personals.....but wateva :2thumb:

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And I knew you only had a life on the net...
But I didn't know the same went for your friends

I went 16... Most of the personals are links and the quotes are all real. Don't believe me, do your research. Also, don't get anything, either ask or don't vote. Good luck!

0ne.

he only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you
good

vs

Bitch I beat you once, your ineed of some help
^^And I guess they weren't lyin...
When they said "History repeats itself" ^^
nice

Now really its the "Boots you" line vs the "history repeats itsself" line, They both are played, but the History line is a personal so V/Untold

Very difficult to choose, i was guna say Tie, but you would both get pissed to I just chose.

Flavin had a stronger flow to me and his opener and closer were ok but to me lacked punches that really connected though the boots lines did make me giggle a bit

untold to me hit harder with his lines as he used more punches even the concept behind them were old and he had some ok personals and the quotes were a nice touch because he actually used them in the verse so with that said im gonna have to

Vote - Untold

flavin- solid verse , it sounded like u were dead serious and i could feel ur verse homie. u had good personals and dope punches , flo was there , vocab was decent , structure and creativity was there.

untold-no hate but it seemed like all ur punches were forced or played. the rhyme was too nursery , the creativity and structure was good tho


vt/flavin

sorry nothing special. just decent but elevating

vs

I'm a blaze this foo... Yea I'm burnin the joint
Flav ya life's like broken pencil tips...
... Theres really no point
Fag, you more harmless then a garden snake
Flav's got more of a false image than Artifake

damn flav.. u post fake pics.?

v/told

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Originally Posted by Record.

damn flav.. u post fake pics.?

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nope

Flav
damn kid you didnt come hard enough.

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Untold
tight verse untold..shit was great , punches killed it.

vote untold

Vote/untold

the links made his a stronger verse

Wow.

No hate but this battle was weak. I found nothing quotable really. Flavin @ some points in his verse was stretched as fuck while Untold used gay links. Having links in a verse is gay as fuck you shouldn't need to bring up links to make punches unless its someones pic. I was expecting to see another decent/above average verse by Untold but, here it was pretty weak by both.

Its funny, No one ever told me ur dope, name suits you
The only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you
^Closest thing I found to a quotable so..

v/ Flav

Vote Untold


very clearly got this nice drop tho


Flav didn't come hard enuff

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Originally Posted by flavin

nope

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Yea... You do.

he only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you


vs


Bitch I beat you once, your ineed of some help
^^And I guess they weren't lyin...
When they said "History repeats itself" ^^

untold had better punches

v/untold

ima have to go with untold, he came more creative and had some good lines with the personals. Flavin had a pretty good verse, but I didn't really feel he came as hard as untold. Flav's verse was kinda off and on. anyways...............yea

v/ untold

Bitch I beat you once, your ineed of some help
^^And I guess they weren't lyin...
When they said "History repeats itself" ^^


vs.

Its funny, No one ever told me ur dope, name suits you
The only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you
^ The only one worth quoting, keep trying F

V. Untold

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Originally Posted by untold

Yea... You do.

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i dont have any pics up dumb fuck...go ahead.....give me the link

Its funny, No one ever told me ur dope, name suits you
he only thing that will ever remember you is lays shoe….
………………………………………after he boots you


vs


Bitch I beat you once, your ineed of some help
^^And I guess they weren't lyin...
When they said "History repeats itself" ^^

v/ untold

good battle

only thing da'll uh remeber you is lay's shoe after he boots you
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guess it wasn't a lie when they said history repeats itself

Untold i've seen way better from you in this you really didn't have hard punches or persoanls mean ya structure was straight but I would expect more than this from you...verse wasn't great should of came harder.....................flavin ya verse was good alout og ya lines made me laugh specially that lays shoe line.you had decent punches and personals and good structure I liked ya verse you were creative........vote flavin for harder punches

Click the link in my verse, its under the word "image". Its a fake pic of you, thats why you don't have any pics of yourself on here.

Duh!

omfg...that pic.....laugh my fuckin ass off...wow......of course that wasnt me u have to see the picture...its a short fat kid with a lunch box that says aint jamama fan club...lmfao...the kid in the pic is 6 fuckin years old...lmfao.........u got that shit screwed up man...lmfao

^Naw... Cause really, when you think about it, you still'd posted a fake pic, so it sticks. Stop sway'n and g/l!

0ne.

yo man this battle grade=C
vote= untold
flavin didn't come like he post to holla!!

I got to give this one to untold for havin better punches although there weren't that many in the battle...flavin came weak wit weak punches
v/untold

vote untold, umm

not too good here, link punches suck that just sum advice, people shouldn't have to open a link to get a punch, cuz well you can't do that in audio

falvin you would've won but alot of lines were stretched your best punch was stretched, which was the boot/ memory punch. untold edged it out tho

untold wins (2-0)

flavin loses (1-1)