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Gods Of Destruction
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3411463
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...73#post3411473
Were given space; to live and make; kids who take
The world through fate which swirls our face; learn optic traits
Visions of a life so vivid, clear… tempted to drift a smear
Of Mischief, dishin fear… to hearts while wisdom disappears
A place of sugar coated smiles, where gratitude will go a mile
Where the burglars are the only ones who’ll pull a trigger on a dial
Our minds grow bigger for awhile, while our body shapes
Then oddly we wait until it cringes to let our mind escape
But the times it takes from birth to death
To understand; hurts my head..
asking if its worth it. Do we deserve to work the steps?
Paint your perfect picture.. Colors lies and fade the blush
Its such a touchy topic, So sense of logic isn’t touched
Instead it’s a sense of profit. Money u need to survive
But the sun and seven seas agree its funny your alive
Living when you know you die, still you roam and try
You feel obligated to give it your all before you die
But why? Because your trained that that’s the way to live
If I had a day to give for every disobey; id run away from sin
When you leave enough people curious they turn anger
Into a weapon that hurts strangers with a flirt of danger
Enough souls leave their bodies and they take over
Like the three of us who crowned ourselves a make over
There is no peace to death every soul that leaves its chest
Has to rest knowing they lived a lie through every single breath
So of course were upset and were closing the gate
Not knowing your fate is a growing mistake that will slowly deflate
The world will suffer… no soul will ever rise again
Instead it will spend its time with sin trapped alive to sit
And truly feel the grasp of evil.. Its an evil you know
The same evil that tricks your mind into the people you grow
There is no heaven for you... no religious support
Your left with nothing but forgiveness after your own abort
And are finally able to rise above earth and gaze upon
A maze of wrong with days, so long they; stay till dawn
Its time for change.. And since your already living a lie
around laws petty and light
if they talked would be heavy on goodbyes
Fuck your lives! Swirl the clouds and burn the grounds
we'll Turn your life around so that all your smiles frown
Let darkness cover the sun and leave the planet hiding
Behind the shadow which doesn’t take anything lightly
The end is near for all of you… deaths in days or weeks
When you get here ask for us.. Cuz we saved you a seat
this is the end of the world as we know it...
Gods of Destruction
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this verse was good...i liked the flow alot its what ke[t me interested in the peice...your structure was okay but it coul be worked on but other than that i think this was a very good,descriptive peice...well done keep writting.
peace.
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topic was insane...i was feelin it...nicely done man
complexity was aiight but rhymes were good and the stroy theme was cool
i enjoyed it..nice drop..flow was smooth and strcuutre was good..
keep it up...peace
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yo i was feelin that whole joint man ur vocab was there u had good structure and u spit excellent i have nothing bad to say so imma say this keep it up aight man lookin forward to more of ur drops
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i wanna do a collab with u so if u want to u could just pm me aight son
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very nice topic here i like the view you took on it... and you also had the flow to go along with it... dude nice peice here... you should check out wilderness crew... just cause i wanna make it the topical writing/ audio spitting people who are active... nice peice though... and just an offer :P
keep it up.
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how heck i seeing 13-14 yr olds dropping sick hot verses...dayum!
in-fact i'm inclined to believe thats not your true age..lol
-A place of sugar coated smiles, where gratitude will go a mile
Where the burglars are the only ones who’ll pull a trigger on a dial
thats just great i must say
Paint your perfect picture.. Colors lies and fade the blush
Its such a touchy topic, So sense of logic isn’t touched
my type of ish right here
painting pictures
your sure good at it
advice uhm?... well forget that..just feek free to give me advice on my pieces when you see them... yyoung as you claim to be
dope joint
ups
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Yo, this topic was deep man…nice shit…flow was on point…structure a lil off….vocab was good…multis were there…overall a pretty damn good piece….I can see you’re a good topical writer…Keep It up…pz
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Nice peace...goood multis,imagery,structure was decent and vocab was...all u need to do is work on the structure and u'll be straight...keep up the good work
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upping!!
goddamn peep it people
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that was deep..i was impressed by ya structure and how everything flowed plus u used a great topic shit really kept me in until the end...great closer by the way keep it comin.
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Good drop man....vocab was real good in this one....imagery was there...caught ya multis in it...flowed real nice...also had an interestin topic.....shit was dope...good drop man....hit me up for a collab....peace.
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nice drop..
.. the vocab set this off, it had very nice imagery to.. which made it fun to read. i never got bored while reading it, and thats what i look for in a piece. the flow was very nice to. same with structure. this was a all around dope piece. keep the shit up and i look foward to seeing another OM by you.
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check out the drop people
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aight critisism
flow-wasn't bad but had its moments were it waz mehh
structure-4 tha most part decent
vocab-can't complain it waz good
only thing that got me were 2 lines that to me seemed irrelevant 2 tha whole thing other than that nice.
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this wasn't bad... flow was text like... don't know if it would go over in audio to well... the opening didn't really grab me... it was sort of choppy... all in all good context... super new underground vibe though...
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A place of sugar coated smiles, where gratitude will go a mile
Where the burglars are the only ones who’ll pull a trigger on a dial
But why? Because your trained that that’s the way to live
If I had a day to give for every disobey; id run away from sin
these r tha 2
I liked this one this line was nice
And truly feel the grasp of evil.. Its an evil you know
The same evil that tricks your mind into the people you grow
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thnx av, and thnx arsensist as well
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Good topic, you took it in the right direction and ran with it, found this peice to be very interesting, vocab was good, could have done a lil better with the flow/rhyme scheme, but overall a good piece...enjoyed it
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