ok 15 line spit
10 min 2 checc
due 30 min after checc
no bullshyt (biting. crew votes, etc.)
blind spit
good lucc cuzin
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ok 15 line spit
10 min 2 checc
due 30 min after checc
no bullshyt (biting. crew votes, etc.)
blind spit
good lucc cuzin
checcin in like da villain i m
check you up first i wanna follow in yo footsteps....lol....
now that im here his hearts at a high rate//
take tha e from his name add a u spell it togetha JUSTA- LIGHTWEIGHT//
his fuccn shyt can't stand more chance den a blind elder ina highway//
dis nigga aint have a brain, so how can he be at a killa at mind-state//
going 140, this niggaz a clown dressed as a ball-jesta//
he can't entertain the king... me, so i should rightfully be-head ya//
well thats what they do in midevil times, its ok ill jus serv ya w/ my septer//
my mic, in the dust w/ a big L on ur head iz where i left-ya//
ya startin 2 pesture, so time 2 call pest control//
my niggaz w/ slugs, ready 4 a jesta's life 2 take toll//
his spits could sound like a oragami puzzle, but 2 simple, watch it unfold//
how u got in court? beatin off in public//
one hand lubed up ready 2 rub shyt//
when they asked him 2 tell truth by god he clutched his fists//
then he replied im a pussy unfunny jesta, plus an athiest//
ok u can drop now, oh n 2 clear dis up, in court he acted a fool, so that explains alot its in his sig, next an athiest is a group of people who dont believe in god, pesture means get on nervs of sum1...
ok den u can drop
how you reppin 4 Boston but dont get love from da Mass/you wouldnt spray paint naw but ya toe gettin tagged
You a lyrical ass its only bullshit in ya mouth/you a grown ass man that got beat by a mouse
im deep in ya spouse jesta fuck with ya partner/i shoot straight you jest got bricks like da carter
lil nigga make up shit ya whole style is mascara/i 9/11 tracks my records bringin you terror
this a new era and i aint talkin bout fitteds/but i put 2 holes in ya b like you rockin a fitted
i rock you diminish im assassinatin an executer/da only chips you gonna get is in ya damn computer
and damn a booster i pump crack in ya veins/relax and refrain from wantin 2 put da mac 2 ya brain
and still blow ya mind like im packin dem thangs---Ya Dig
ok ok uppn 4 dem votes den
what it do on da votes? 1 up on da come up wit a gun up til da sun up
umm ok if i get 5 votes i win the match n it shows on tha reccard n ill put u in tha ko list.
you mean ko'ed by when i got dem 5 right votes people
ok uppn 3 dont get offensive i was jus explainin what will happen when sum1 gets votes cuz u sounded like u didnt know what they did
so take a chyll pill guy
uppin i wasnt offended i was jest jestin i knew what you meant
uupn#4
final uppin PLEASE DROP A VOTE!!!(honest)
a i think this was a 1 sided battle jhood had alot more harder punches and personals
jesta ur punches were a lil bit to simple for me my nigga and ur structure was all over the place u need to come at ya oppenent wit some personals to
u need to elavate alot my nigga on basicly everything and then ull be set
v/jhood
ight its like this
now that im here his hearts at a high rate//
take tha e from his name add a u spell it togetha JUSTA- LIGHTWEIGHT//
(nice)(nice opener)
his fuccn shyt can't stand more chance den a blind elder ina highway//
dis nigga aint have a brain, so how can he be at a killa at mind-state//
(ight)
going 140, this niggaz a clown dressed as a ball-jesta//
he can't entertain the king... me, so i should rightfully be-head ya//
(nice)
well thats what they do in midevil times, its ok ill jus serv ya w/ my septer//
my mic, in the dust w/ a big L on ur head iz where i left-ya//
(ight)
ya startin 2 pesture, so time 2 call pest control//
my niggaz w/ slugs, ready 4 a jesta's life 2 take toll//
his spits could sound like a oragami puzzle, but 2 simple, watch it unfold//
(3lines where the 4th)
how u got in court? beatin off in public//
one hand lubed up ready 2 rub shyt//
(no)
when they asked him 2 tell truth by god he clutched his fists//
then he replied im a pussy unfunny jesta, plus an athiest//
(funny)
vs.
how you reppin 4 Boston but dont get love from da Mass/you wouldnt spray paint naw but ya toe gettin tagged
(no)
You a lyrical ass its only bullshit in ya mouth/you a grown ass man that got beat by a mouse
(you battle mouse and if you win you can say that)
im deep in ya spouse jesta fuck with ya partner/i shoot straight you jest got bricks like da carter
(no)
lil nigga make up shit ya whole style is mascara/i 9/11 tracks my records bringin you terror
(kinda sorta)
this a new era and i aint talkin bout fitteds/but i put 2 holes in ya b like you rockin a fitted
(no) 2 holes?
i rock you diminish im assassinatin an executer/da only chips you gonna get is in ya damn computer
(nice)
and damn a booster i pump crack in ya veins/relax and refrain from wantin 2 put da mac 2 ya brain
(nice)
and still blow ya mind like im packin dem thangs---Ya Dig
(no)
V//Jhood
uppin
da boston fitted has a capital B. a capital B has 2 holes in it. not that hard
i aint voting but yallz metaphores is off the wallz both of yall
uppin to get closed..................................
srry for free posting but jhood hit my links up man and place an honest voteQuote:
Originally Posted by Beans
oops freeposting but my vote is for jhood...
j-your wordplay structure punches and personals was on point....your metaphors were not explaind and had no reason to be. if ur good at metaphorically speaking u shuldnt hav to use explanations.
jesta-ur punches hit hard but were weakre than jhoods, that won him the battle, you need to elevate on puns. and your metaphores were weak, u used alot of fillers too
now that im here his hearts at a high rate//
take tha e from his name add a u spell it togetha JUSTA- LIGHTWEIGHT//
Vs
Nothing
jhood came more consistent and had more punches.
this battle came weak but i would have ta give my vote to jhood.
ounches came stronger also his flow came in his verse slightly better. jhood had nice punches though out as well as some ok personals. i say both need to elevate on flow and also most definitly the structure becuz you both fucked the form of the verse up. both had an ok flow but jhood came with the best flow and better comin punches
vote/jhood
pleeze leave honest vote fa my battle with chainblade i'd well appreciate that shitz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=246224
oopz didnt know you ahd to have 200 to vote oh well thatz juz my opinion then consider as that
v/ jhood he had better punches than jesta both ya'll structure was bad though take the//// out of it and it'll be straight
good battle
v/jhood
uppin for yall....daym jhood took this though disses was tight and daym flow was hot...
jhood had better pucnhes, and personals....
and he gest my vote....