Illyness v.s The Hit Squad
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Drop by: Sunday 6th November; 11.59pm
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Illyness v.s The Hit Squad
16-20 lines.
Check by: Friday 4th November; 11.59pm
Drop by: Sunday 6th November; 11.59pm
Regular rules.
250 posts to vote.
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Checkity check.
King Cobra, I thought your rhymes were supposed to be poison,
But I wince at your loss column because your verses are plain annoying,
Half your members are just plain illiterate,
Where's your hypothesis? This crew is an experiment,
Expicitot? This bitch desperately needs a dictionary,
Becuase this fool clucked more than birds in an aviary,
Ante up King Cobra, or you're booted out the door..............
It's impossible for this kid to elevate,
........................His elevator doesn't reach the top floor
I guess he was blind the the challenges he was about to undergo,
His crew is amatuer, because it was started three days ago,
Illyness is the truth, and that's a dope diagnostic,
Because I need to break this rap down into an accrostic
Intermediate is the level that you need to advance to,
Losing is the only opportunity that I'll give you a chance to,
Leader isn't your title, I'm casting you away like sin
Losing this bitch like a fad and setting a new trend.
Exact lets battle ill show you some real rhymes that are exact
nice drop exact....it wasnt OD, but nice creativity at the end....once the other dude drop i will peep this again
YO iight this will be an easy defeat,
cuz this guy only "cums" hard when he beats his meat,
my words would put u in the room of emergency,
take ur heart and ur pride like a surgery,
dont worry ima heal u like ur rhymes................. "nursery",
So ur girls literally wears the "pants in the house" cuz u cant afford clothes,
think u nice cuz u in crews that nobody knows,wat are u ass poor loz,
u have a good rec cuz all u do is battle noobs from LateKnightRyder 2 t29000,Quote:
Originally Posted by ?Loz?
cuz if i were 2 rate u from 0-10 it would of be by the 0.thousandths
this cat flithy opposite of clean,
only time this cat spits fresh is when he spits out listerine,
u aint nice so realize that, cuz ill make u like "farve" and put 4 on ur back,
f..it ill put more holes on u then 50 cent,
how is it that ur crew got 1 dick and 3 pussies and still practices abstinence
fuck u all ur punches they jus filler,
so jus call me thekiller,Quote:
Originally Posted by Diputs Tad Sti
fuck quater nobody cares about that nig,
thats why even his crew member wrote his name wrong in his old sig.
jus realize ur wack exact, cuz u being in a good crew is wat u lack,
Upping for votes.
nice verse to both....cant vote obviously....but good battle
...BREAKDOWN...
Exact-Your verse was more or less basic. In terms of Punches i feel u lacked intensity with them..and although ya font was a different look, ya lines were kinda off an on length wise..but on the other hand, i did feel the flow and all of the personals..and the creativty at the end wit the accrostic thing was preety dope too...i dont kno if u put the last liine of ya verse in a whole new post on purpose..but seeing as u put no explanation as to why, i considered it an intentional action...and i found that creative as well...good job overall, but punches and wurd play would have made it all the more doper.
Kobra- You had sum good punches here and there, which is good...and ya personals were on point..but not extreme....i feel that ya flow wasnt on point consistnatly and ya structure was all over the place due to the quotes...preperation of ya verse is realy a key factor when u kno that ur gonna b putting in links, quotes, etc. The thing that killed it for ya verse was all the talk about the gunplay and puttin 4 in his back like Favre... i mean dont get me wrong..it was a hot punch, but save it for a murder track, not a internet battle...feel me.. no hard feelings but the more creativy and style u have...the more unique and doper u become...nice drop overall..but get rid of the murder lyrics...or at least put "LYRICALLY" in front of those type of lines..
vote goes to Exact for above explanations
Upping for more votes.
good verses form both of ya....
uppin to get closed..................................
uppin' for my dog.
Upping for these.
Good verses from both.
Upping.
Upping, please vote.
exact came with the stronger punches to his verse also the creativity came stronger as well.
king cobra, i see that you need to elevate on your pucnhes theyc ame okay but they came too basic and should have put mo creativity to your rhymes and disses to make them strong and not the basic shit. excat came with hot rhymes, aslo his structure came better filled out than kobra, king, work on your structure form okay sweetie also the flow and better punches
vote/exact
how is it that ur crew got 1 dick and 3 pussies and still practices abstinence
VS
King Cobra, I thought your rhymes were supposed to be poison,
But I wince at your loss column because your verses are plain annoying,
Half your members are just plain illiterate,
Where's your hypothesis? This crew is an experiment,
I guess he was blind the the challenges he was about to undergo,
His crew is amatuer, because it was started three days ago,
Intermediate is the level that you need to advance to,
Losing is the only opportunity that I'll give you a chance to,
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Exact brought stronger punches to this battle. he had more quotables and maintained a great flow. King Cobra had a great line or two, but just wasn't consistent enough to win this battle...
Vote - Exact
ight yo i saw a betta punch lines and shit in exact king ive seen sick shit what happened u had some poucnhes but ont enouhgh preety st8 il liked kings stucutre betta but still exact came out wit betta pounches and snd flo\
v/ exact for reasons above
personally ive seen harder verese from both yall but this shit was tight propz to both mc's on nice drops.both of you had nice everything, exact had more punches in this wich is wat really put him ahead both had nice strucuture and wordplay
v/exact
propz 2 both mc's for dope vereses
nice drop from both of ya...as i was reading ya verse exact had better flow 'n structure wit-a better diss...king u did good also but u didn't go hard enough to beat exact.....keep it up
v/exact