Illyness v.s The Hit Squad
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Check by: Friday 4th November; 11.59pm
Drop by: Sunday 6th November; 11.59pm
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250 posts to vote.
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Illyness v.s The Hit Squad
16-20 lines.
Check by: Friday 4th November; 11.59pm
Drop by: Sunday 6th November; 11.59pm
Regular rules.
250 posts to vote.
check....lil 50 cent wannabe gettin' sonned
lol, check....
If droppin emcees is your job, then your living off unemployment checks
spoke shit, and your rhymes stink so Ill plug my nose like an aztec
Ain't mario so the only way to get deeper is to jump in a warpipe
Wantng your cyber beef, but this shit won't even live to its hype
This ain't 8 mile, but I can predict all of his notes
Saying how stupid I am, and bitching about quotes???
You got an impressing record, 9 battles, but 9 straight noobs
All I see is elavate on weak punches, and on the 10th you'll lose
Joined Hit Squad, because you were getting rejected as much as a veto
Time after time you spit gets cheesier, like the "NEW" extreme cheetos
...coming soon to 1ups title, Hit Squad: home of the worlds worst sig
saying that ain't true, It might not be because your sigs are damn big
21, don't mean shit cause you getting beat by people half you age
good acting, cause I see the fear in your ayes, and we ain't on stage
So fuck you, fuck your crew, and listen to Dat.....
Cause I just BOOSTED into your mind, and..."Where you at"
any time now....
I'mma straight clown this kid, have sauces leakin' all outta his wig
this homos pockets stay so skinny, he thinkin' 25 cent is really big
quarter's a small time guy, too embarrased to say his age n' shit
this faggot's only 14, so like I was R. Kelly I'mma piss on this bitch
get ya game right before you step to a dude who's done things
only noise this faggots responsible for is makin' the phone ring
what happened to ya sig kid? call peter parker to save ya ass again
this homo spend all day playin' with barbies, but his favorite is ken
y'all ain't shankin' men - only talkin' like ya plottin' on schemes
so homies gettin' chopped up, and I ain't talkin' bout triple beams
yea I'm servin' up quarter pounders, shits weigh over 100 grams dude
and not the kind with cheese, ya like albert so get ya mind off food
you seen this homo's last sig, bitin' lines from get rich or die tryin'
but he just a stay talkin', this lil' boy ain't no man, faggot just lyin'
where'd this gay get the impression a win is due, droolin' on tools?
shit is funny, cuz two dimes and a nickel worth way more than you
you know when I swing on this fuckin' homo, he gonna say he'll sue me
and talks real hard, but only cuz he heard it first in them gangsta movies
so from now on, just keep ya lyrically handicapped lines ta yaself son
who's the guy who's rhymes been diagnosed obscene & mentally ill? ONE.
only explanation necessary: this faggot previously had a spiderman avatar and a spiderman sig....
what's really good...
one.
IF I HAD NUFF POST MY VOTE WOULD GO FOR 1UP
FOR BETTER STRUCTURE, PUNCHES
WHEN WE COME TA WORD PLAY I SAY /TIE
V/1UP
even if ainty got nuff post
but honestly v/1up
up$ #1....forgot to mention, his spiderman sig had the ol' 50 cent line "I'd rather die like a man than live like a coward"...my bad for not mentioning that....straight drunk n' shit, just got back from my boys show.
one.
this was a 1 sided battle
1up ur punches were decent uhad gd structure and your personals were tight
gd drop nigga
qaurter ur punches were ok some of ur lines were basic though ur structure was on point but i wasnt really feeling ur verse on the real my nigga no hate but u got merked 1ups first 6 lines killed ur whole flow u need to elavate man gd drop though
v/1up
yo i am going to have to give this one to 1up for better flow and better punch lines...word play was good also...Quarter u had some good word play and so alright punch lines...but 1up took this one...
v/1
uppin' #2
thanks for the votes, but siker, can you poll your vote?
one.
Its not lose-veto.... u say it like V-Toe u got the pronounciationn wrong so that ain work for u quarter...
Quater- Your opening lines to ur punches were better than the punches themselves..... u kinda came half assed for this shii foreal.. eeven the veto line aint match wit the other word 2..... i mean ya shit was ok here........ ur flow was kinda fucked up..... u went from long lines to short ones back to long man step ya game up son....Had one quotable boost line mobile one=DOPE! lol
1up-ur punches were kind of simple and to the ppoint... lack of a lil wordplay....had aquotable..... mind off food one but tha wasnt better than the boost one.... ur flow was great... no longer den other non goin togetha lines... kinda par from u here too...
V/ Tie........ as of righ now.... ill vote on dis whhen i get from work.. cause i gotta think bout who won it..
this battles goes to 1up he had an all out better verse big ups my nigga
Quarter~ yo ya verse was str8 man, I didn't see n e thing impressive or n e thing u had no really solid punches
1~ tight verse bro, I seen a few hard punches I liked ya flow betta then dudes, still nothing impressive from either of u really but for harder punches n' betta flow...
v/1up
damn you people are either d/r or fucking stupid, the only ojne that knows what hes talking bout is mouse, but whatever uppin#1
Damn Quarter.
W/e, Upping for my homie and Illyness.
If droppin emcees is your job, then your living off unemployment checks
spoke shit, and your rhymes stink so Ill plug my nose like an aztec
good wordplay, solid punch
Ain't mario so the only way to get deeper is to jump in a warpipe
Wantng your cyber beef, but this shit won't even live to its hype
ehh okay
This ain't 8 mile, but I can predict all of his notes
Saying how stupid I am, and bitching about quotes???
decent
You got an impressing record, 9 battles, but 9 straight noobs
All I see is elavate on weak punches, and on the 10th you'll lose
makin a point but not really a punch
Joined Hit Squad, because you were getting rejected as much as a veto
Time after time you spit gets cheesier, like the "NEW" extreme cheetos
Creative Line, understood what Mouse was sayin, but its still nice
...coming soon to 1ups title, Hit Squad: home of the worlds worst sig
saying that ain't true, It might not be because your sigs are damn big
ehh okay
21, don't mean shit cause you getting beat by people half you age
good acting, cause I see the fear in your ayes, and we ain't on stage
ehh
So fuck you, fuck your crew, and listen to Dat.....
Cause I just BOOSTED into your mind, and..."Where you at"
good closer
flow was a lil off but not by much, good solid opener and closer, eventhough they werent all hard you stayed pretty consistent with your punches, would have like to see a personal on his crew name, good wordplay, creativity was there, other then that solid verse, have seen you come harder though
vs.
I'mma straight clown this kid, have sauces leakin' all outta his wig
this homos pockets stay so skinny, he thinkin' 25 cent is really big
good opener
quarter's a small time guy, too embarrased to say his age n' shit
this faggot's only 14, so like I was R. Kelly I'mma piss on this bitch
nope
get ya game right before you step to a dude who's done things
only noise this faggots responsible for is makin' the phone ring
back to back nope
what happened to ya sig kid? call peter parker to save ya ass again
this homo spend all day playin' with barbies, but his favorite is ken
good line
y'all ain't shankin' men - only talkin' like ya plottin' on schemes
so homies gettin' chopped up, and I ain't talkin' bout triple beams
nope mostly a filler
yea I'm servin' up quarter pounders, shits weigh over 100 grams dude
and not the kind with cheese, ya like albert so get ya mind off food
creative good line
you seen this homo's last sig, bitin' lines from get rich or die tryin'
but he just a stay talkin', this lil' boy ain't no man, faggot just lyin'
decent
where'd this gay get the impression a win is due, droolin' on tools?
shit is funny, cuz two dimes and a nickel worth way more than you
decent
you know when I swing on this fuckin' homo, he gonna say he'll sue me
and talks real hard, but only cuz he heard it first in them gangsta movies
ehh
so from now on, just keep ya lyrically handicapped lines ta yaself son
who's the guy who's rhymes been diagnosed obscene & mentally ill? ONE.
endin your line with ~1~ or "one" so your shit will rhyme is kind of played seen it way too much
good flow, punches werent as consistent, creative wordplay but not as creative, couple of good plays on the name, again no personal on the crew name. Overall a decent verse, you could have hit harder and not been so simple with some of your lines, then they wouldn have looked so much like fillers
v/quarter for creativity and consistency
good battle form both of you...
quarter- you had better flow, structure, and personals..so good verse from you I don't know how your down 2-0, but your verse was more creative and the better verse of the two, 8/10
1up- your verse was pretty good too, you had better pucnhes, and that was about it, your flow wasnt that good and you lines were a lil stretched out, like mouse said you had better pucnhes, but quarters closer as still the best, good verse, but you should've stepped it up to gte my vote, 6/10
v-Q
Ok...
Quarter, id say you ahd better personals, flow and structure and some good punches also.. You also had a good use of vocab and some decent wordplay also..
1up, Ypu had some good punches, but apart from that i think quarter got it in every other department, such as flow strcuture, personals wordplay and vocab..
So Vote/Quarter
up#2...
liked both verses really and truly but i would say that Quarter won for better punches and flow although, dont get me wrong, 1up u had some decent flow and some hard hitting punches....but i think that Quarter was more consistant with his but 1up, i have ta hand it to you....you were right there...if u had one more hard hitting punch i would have gave the win 2 you no doubt!
v.Quarter
so many dickriders, im telling tax to ban all the newbies.
v//quarter for being doper.
uppin for 1 more vote....
If droppin emcees is your job, then your living off unemployment checks
spoke shit, and your rhymes stink so Ill plug my nose like an aztec
3/5
Ain't mario so the only way to get deeper is to jump in a warpipe
Wantng your cyber beef, but this shit won't even live to its hype
2/5
This ain't 8 mile, but I can predict all of his notes
Saying how stupid I am, and bitching about quotes???
2/5
You got an impressing record, 9 battles, but 9 straight noobs
All I see is elavate on weak punches, and on the 10th you'll lose
3/5
Joined Hit Squad, because you were getting rejected as much as a veto
Time after time you spit gets cheesier, like the "NEW" extreme cheetos
3/5
...coming soon to 1ups title, Hit Squad: home of the worlds worst sig
saying that ain't true, It might not be because your sigs are damn big
3.5/5
21, don't mean shit cause you getting beat by people half you age
good acting, cause I see the fear in your ayes, and we ain't on stage
3/5
So fuck you, fuck your crew, and listen to Dat.....
Cause I just BOOSTED into your mind, and..."Where you at"
2/5
21.5/40
vs
I'mma straight clown this kid, have sauces leakin' all outta his wig
this homos pockets stay so skinny, he thinkin' 25 cent is really big
2.5/5
quarter's a small time guy, too embarrased to say his age n' shit
this faggot's only 14, so like I was R. Kelly I'mma piss on this bitch
2/5
get ya game right before you step to a dude who's done things
only noise this faggots responsible for is makin' the phone ring
1/5
what happened to ya sig kid? call peter parker to save ya ass again
this homo spend all day playin' with barbies, but his favorite is ken
0/5
y'all ain't shankin' men - only talkin' like ya plottin' on schemes
so homies gettin' chopped up, and I ain't talkin' bout triple beams
2/5
yea I'm servin' up quarter pounders, shits weigh over 100 grams dude
and not the kind with cheese, ya like albert so get ya mind off food
1/5
you seen this homo's last sig, bitin' lines from get rich or die tryin'
but he just a stay talkin', this lil' boy ain't no man, faggot just lyin'
2/5
where'd this gay get the impression a win is due, droolin' on tools?
shit is funny, cuz two dimes and a nickel worth way more than you
4/5
you know when I swing on this fuckin' homo, he gonna say he'll sue me
and talks real hard, but only cuz he heard it first in them gangsta movies
2.5
so from now on, just keep ya lyrically handicapped lines ta yaself son
who's the guy who's rhymes been diagnosed obscene & mentally ill? ONE.
4/5
21/50
quater litterlly killed him 1up only had 2 good barz but rest quater killed...honest vote...good shit
v/Quater