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10-20 lines
check in by Wednesday, verses due friday
please vote on battles or a links rule will be enforced next week
if you no-show without a good reason you will be booted.
goodluck
I'm doing between 12-14.
Czek.
my verse were here i just edited so my verse isn't posted 3 times ight
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No opinions facts I won this untold herb is done I hurt-you...
sobe I ask for a well t.v battle but instead you brought commercial...
Talent is where i'm at you still elavating ....flow ass madafact you is-shit...
pity survive cause when the new orleans flooded it ain't bring you wit-it...
merking this butter nigga is manase honestly you a fool g...
been here for two years and you still considered a new-b...
you'll never make it so spray painting uppy's only time you signing a check...
damn sobe tell me what's worse.............. his avater or respect...
everybody know this brady bunch wanna be nothing but a floke...
Told him i'ma hand him a L dumbass said sorry I don't smoke...
and that little beginers respect you got bout to be fast gone...
and if pussy ain't gotta face then damn put a mask on...
this cat handed me burt bread when I said past the toast...
can't beat me in battling well at least you beat me in post...
I'll hand it to you right since wifey on my left...
wack only thing hot about you is your breath...
dog like roaches on kitchen tables young uh pluk ya...
I won wit punchline's fuck it let me give you a chance wit structure...
like darknening ya line's battling me was real bold...
but defeating me and taking a w now thats something untold...
Don't understand a line ask me
i dont get so did untold post up his verse
not yet but you could leave feed on mine then when he drop's you say who you think won
Wtf? We never agree'd on this many lines. I said 12-14... What is this bull shit and you posted your verse 3 fuck'n times. What the hell?
Just match'em
or just post 14 lines with at least 8 decent ones and you'll probably win.
^k.
Fuck it! I went 16 cause I could...
Most say I'm doper... Hell I'm predicted to win
So I guess RB resembles ya life...
... Even here you have no friends
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
Fuck feed'n off his verse, it'd just be a snack, b!
Fuck your verse...
I've seen better shit come out of my ass cheeks
Ya flow like rot'n food... Didn't mean to spoil it
Last time his shit was in rotation...
...It was swirling in the toilet
With Renegade. say'n it...
You want me to stoop low to his level?Quote:
Originally Posted by Renegade.
Just match'em
...Sorry, that'll never happen
Not only did you get hated on in predictions, kidQuote:
Originally Posted by SOBE plz plz plz
Its plain to see, you get shit'd on here again^
He ain't spit'n... The pussy's dry with fatigue
And your verse show'd us you suck...
...3 times more than anyone else in the league
And Jays retired... So hop off his nuts... Foo!
Cause we all know, d/r'n will result in you get'n a d/q
And if you don't get it, don't fuck'n vote!
nothing
vs.
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
v/ untold
nothing
vs.
Most say I'm doper... Hell I'm predicted to win
So I guess RB resembles ya life...
... Even here you have no friends
Fuck feed'n off his verse, it'd just be a snack, b!
Fuck your verse...
I've seen better shit come out of my ass cheeks
Pretty self-explanatory, Untold just came alot better.
v/untold
Talent is where i'm at you still elavating ....flow ass madafact you is-shit...
pity survive cause when the new orleans flooded it ain't bring you wit-it...
ight, nothing special
merking this butter nigga is manase honestly you a fool g...
been here for two years and you still considered a new-b...
no, whack
you'll never make it so spray painting uppy's only time you signing a check...
damn sobe tell me what's worse.............. his avater or respect...
huh?
everybody know this brady bunch wanna be nothing but a floke...
Told him i'ma hand him a L dumbass said sorry I don't smoke...
no
and that little beginers respect you got bout to be fast gone...
and if pussy ain't gotta face then damn put a mask on...
weak
this cat handed me burt bread when I said past the toast...
can't beat me in battling well at least you beat me in post...
ok
I'll hand it to you right since wifey on my left...
wack only thing hot about you is your breath...
whack, lmao
dog like roaches on kitchen tables young uh pluk ya...
I won wit punchline's fuck it let me give you a chance wit structure...
really shitty line, elavate
like darknening ya line's battling me was real bold...
but defeating me and taking a w now thats something untold...
no
vs.
Most say I'm doper... Hell I'm predicted to win
So I guess RB resembles ya life...
... Even here you have no friends
decent
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
nice
Fuck feed'n off his verse, it'd just be a snack, b!
Fuck your verse...
I've seen better shit come out of my ass cheeks
nice
Ya flow like rot'n food... Didn't mean to spoil it
Last time his shit was in rotation...
...It was swirling in the toilet
nice, good line
With Renegade. say'n it...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Renegade.
Just match'em
You want me to stoop low to his level?
...Sorry, that'll never happen
ight
Quote:
Originally Posted by SOBE plz plz plz
or just post 14 lines with at least 8 decent ones and you'll probably win.
Not only did you get hated on in predictions, kid
Its plain to see, you get shit'd on here again^
solid
He ain't spit'n... The pussy's dry with fatigue
And your verse show'd us you suck...
...3 times more than anyone else in the league
haha, nice
And Jays retired... So hop off his nuts... Foo!
Cause we all know, d/r'n will result in you get'n a d/q
aight, ok closer
This was an ok battle, young nov, had a weak ass verse, untold came pretty good his verse was kind hard to read, but it was tsill good, untold had better flow, personals, and pucnhes, and strurtur was a tie because youngs lines were stretched at times, and untold has fucked up struture...
v-untold
young hov u didn't come hard wazn't feelin ya punches son just wazn't there but flow waz ok and structure waz ok not much wordplay no vocab and ya personals were slackin during the middle hit harder next time
Untold u came wit a nice verse punches waz hitten and have to luv the wordplay and personals but ya vocab could of been better liked the flow and the metaphors keep ya game up
v/Untold cause he came harder in all categorys
vote untold easily.. no explination needed?
/v Untold
Young Hov came like ass, as per expected. Mad stretched lines with nothing hitting that much. Untold didn't come great, as in, alot of his shit was on that Front Lines tip: basic, bad wording, played, just plain blah..but he had a few ok lines, and enough to beat Young Hov pretty easily.
Young Hov, strectch lines, bad flow, not much on the creativeness,my 1st season in LLL jr and punches were weaker than what i expected.
Untold, decent verse, not as consistent as it should of been but a lil wordplay a few good punches and got at em wit a personal, flow was good, verse was respectably creative.
one sided v/untold
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
Good punch.
Fuck feed'n off his verse, it'd just be a snack, b!
Fuck your verse...
I've seen better shit come out of my ass cheeks
Played but funny
With Renegade. say'n it...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Renegade.
Just match'em
You want me to stoop low to his level?
...Sorry, that'll never happen
Good one.
Vs
Nothing.
Untold came consistent with better wit.Nuff said.
nuttin
vs.
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
v/untold
Strongest verse I've seen Untold come with... I think he was holding back on my battle...Anyways, untold had better disses and more creativity in his verse. Wordplay was better and structure was better...
Vote - Untold
V/untold, for much better punches and personals
nothing
vs
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
v/ untold
Stretched Nonsense
vs.
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
Untold
nothin
vs.
Most say I'm doper... Hell I'm predicted to win
So I guess RB resembles ya life...
... Even here you have no friends
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
v. untold.....pretty week on hova's part
...well, everyone's pretty much covered anything I could give as feedback.
Vote: Untold
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
vs
Nothing at all
Youngs verse was very newbish, horrible structure, bad flow.
Untolds styles getting better, still basic tho, had that one quotable that was okish
V/Untold
^How come I only see you on Thor now? What happened to Schiz?
v/untold.. still both verses can be improved 100000000000times though. untold took it easy though. its Record.
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
vs
...
--untold
nothing at all,.....sorry cuz
vs.
Hova in ya sig, but your still not spit'n that crack
Aint no one see'n Young's verse...
... I guess hes like Jigga, since it "Fades to Black"
this was a very one sided self explainitory battle
V/untold for a quotable
guess untold merked me fuck it
more votes..........yed i should of came harder
should of did my best .wat happens now am I elimnated or wat?
..............
untold wins (1-0)
Young Hov loses (0-1)