12 line
no hate votes, no dick riding
lets get this ova bitch
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12 line
no hate votes, no dick riding
lets get this ova bitch
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checking in
lol ailright you lil bitch!!!!!!lol
lets git it!!!!
ight lol I laugh at shit like this.
Seck how you gone call me out with a record like that,
You only won one battle, that kinda mean you wack/
You aint jack I can tell, but youd probably tattle,
You been on rap battles since june and aint won one battle/
Get ya stats up bitch befo you say you a vet,
The only time you’ve seen pussy is on the damn internet/
Havin cyber sex with ladie streets, beattin off to her rymes,
You two couldn’t beat a nigga with one post if you two were combined/
I want waist my time, explanation voters don’t need,
In real life you’d really type ya rymes, becuz youd be afraid to speak/
Elite forces, killin you, I won this battle I might even get paid,
How the fuck you 17 teen and ryme like you in the third grade/
finished with this cat
where you at?..............................................
this bitch tryna battle me but he come at me wit shit that be pre written/
like ghetto hoes in my hood boy its ass fukn this lil hoe be str8t up git'n/
you dont know wut ya dealing wit and ya dont want none of this beef/
empty kleenx boxes and ya family commiting suicide cause there familys grief/
im wikid on the mic but more deadly when im battling fake mc'z having noo b fits/
if my raps wus a dick in ya mouth you bitch i bet ya punkass would suck and pull shit/
got ya confused wit my lyrikal linez and im ending your "im the best mc" fairytales/
heavy wieght on the mic homie a god like me be packing the glock and tip'n the scales/
run up on ya wit a heater put ya brains on ya homies brand new throwback and nikes/
suddenly rip you from ya dream state and into the real life and you in a killn spree/
naw homie this aint no punk bitch ya battling ya going against a dark side chief/
why the fuck im i wasting my raps on you after this youll be known as the "rap thief"/
you most likely gonna come at me wit the raps ya recently altered after its bought/
blind spitn at your ass so sadistic but ya typing ya prewrittin and that wuz ya plot/
lol at you cause ya think ya good butfor realz i know im better then youll ever be son/
the life of a underated god of the lyrikal way of life is here an you are out done!!!!!!
sorry bout the wait i had to get off to get my lil man outta the bath!!!!!!
well theres my blind spit!!!!!
good luck homie
i feel you on the kid and shit my nigga i got a daughter. but you spit more than 12 lines
huh?
1 line=2bars
or is it just 12 lines!!!!
should of pm bout your lines and structure
i think i gotta give this one to pressure, his verse made me laugh, it was more enticing to the viewers, but i think he had enough to win, an seks, the line limit was 12 lines, made me wonder if dat was prewrit, but mighgt not have, but i gotta give this to pressure for an all around better verse.....both of ya stay up...
v/ pressure
....peep the battle in the sig
You aint jack I can tell, but youd probably tattle,
You been on rap battles since june and aint won one battle/
if reworded it could have potential
vs
you dont know wut ya dealing wit and ya dont want none of this beef/
empty kleenx boxes and ya family commiting suicide cause there familys grief/
got ya confused wit my lyrikal linez and im ending your "im the best mc" fairytales/
heavy wieght on the mic homie a god like me be packing the glock and tip'n the scales/
boring/even battle,
vote/ seks
pressure won wit beta punches and structure.....seks u had ok punches but ur structure was crazy make ur lines even as possible also pressure remove the / out of ur verse.....both also try to make ur punches hit harder....
v/pressure (beta verse)
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ight thanx for the feed back 'll keep some of that in mind, in the mean time
uppin for votes,,,,,,
uppin #2 for some votes,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
uppin # 3 lets close this battle my niggs, and niggets
presure gets me vote he came harder. i felt both verses dont get me wrong but pressure punches was harder. sek u wrote mad line wen the limit was 12 too. gotta be focus man
ayo uppin # 4 lets close this battle ightzzzzzzzzzzzz
This Was A Tight Battle But In The End Pressure Came out Hard Both Versus Were Dope But I Was Feelin Pressure, He Cam Harder WIt Punches
v/pressure
aye peep my battle homie
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=244145
My Vote Goez 2 Pressure 4 His Better Structure
And His Punches
He Didnt Exceed The Line Limit
V/ Pressure
YO HIT THIS SHYT UP NIGGA
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...ght=TECHRHYMES