Criminal intension minded~ladie streetz

written 10/15/05

truth time to be spoken about my infamous ways & criminal intension
Half crazy/psycho my name alone even hard to mention
fuck them hoes fuck them bitches i'm the bitch bringin the heat
ya know i'm hot i can drop a 1o second verse and i don't need a beat
i murder nigga'z for fun and honestly i don't need a gun
my killah statis so outrageous i can even make lions run
fuck comin respectful & nice to mothafucka's fuck being kind & Gentle
fake hoes began to make my nerves ache see my personality go mental
by slicin necks open the accomplishment makes my mind anesthetic
might be addicted to seein blood from bodies dont consider myself pathetic
through hardest moments of life, outcome, is manic deppressed
ever since that nigga i shot 20 times, to crimes i became obsessed
never quote me as crazy recognize me as one of the psycho chicks
dudes underCross me cuz i'm a female they just dont know i also snap dicks
i bend em and break em watch these nigga'z yell & suffer
the more trouble pounded through my head my killin skill got tougher
no jokes i tell my shit i speak is well truthful & sinister
preach my word to these bitches not prime but im a crime minister
like to watch these bodies burn love seein the risin Flame
went from likin Barbie dolls to stompin necks how could i turn insane?
i'll tell you how it is people fucked & toiled with my emotions
now to see my happiness through gotta make crimes my devotions........

uppin for feed on this shit please........................

nice shit ladie but of course i waz expectin dat 4rom u gurl!!!!! i like it. u stayed on topic and ya wordz gave a somwhat good visual 2 go along wit tha wordz....all in all i really liked tha topic and although i've seen it done b4....u brought it in a diffrent way with ur own flavor so i commend u 4 that. keep doin u ma ~1~

thanks mami thanks for the feed back on this..... uppin for feed

Very nice drop ladie you really elevating girl.
Nice choice on the topic, the flow was nice and constant throughout the whole piece . You had some good wordplay in there and the structure was well set out. Some good imaginary in the piece but it was also pretty witty in parts. Was good throughout the whole verse. Was really creative thumbs up I was feelin that and vocab was nice as well. Only criticism I have is flow was off at some points and some lines were a lil forced but other than that it was all good.

like to watch these bodies burn love seein the risin Flame
went from likin Barbie dolls to stompin necks how could i turn insane?

Lol nice line keep it up ladie.

thnaks for the honest feed uppin for feed back on this shit......

wut up girl this ya boy tomkat, i liked this verse you had a lot of complexity and it flowed very nicely keep doin what ya doin,

i liied this drop...flow was tight and same with complexity and vocab...rhymes were also very tight.....in was feelin the topic, i enjoyed it, nicelt written, good drop....keep it up and keep droppin...peace

yo thanks for all the feed on this glad you all enjoyed this uppin

lady that shits hot....nice rhymes, thats what made it sound as good as it is, and your creativty was good on this....I'll give it a 9/10 cuase it was a good solid perfornance outa you........

thnaks for your feed imma about to hit up your other piece as well is aw that but i ahd to do sumthin so i didnt hit it up thanks glad you liked it uppin for feed

dammmmmmmm ladie thiz was tight, ya had nice vocab i imagined thiz shit thru out az i read thr rhymes was tight i was feelin that topic i might write somethin on that topic one day had the hotness in this liked the flo gyrlll

much love

yeah this is pretty hard ish... had some nice flow tho it seemed to go off a couple of times..vocab was decentish but a bit repetive on certain words.. had sum jokes as well and good character...like you flowing on sum mafia chick fosho
could of had a few multies littered throughout to titen the flow and give it a lift

still all together a nice joint with much aggressive emotion coming thru

stay up

thnaks for that uppin for feed back on this shit right here.....

THis Was a NicE PiEce Ladie Streetz
alrights comes nice But tha flow was
a lil off I 've seen better from you
but this piece was kinda hot

this piece was pretty hot, I liked tha emotion in this drop. Good topic, you stuck to it well and kept my attention.

tru true thanks for the feed back uppin for feed on thiz shit right here

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics you've replied to with decent feedback or this will be closed. Read the thread at the top of the open mic forum if you don't know how.

i've already left alot of links since yesterday i just now left a link in like two other ones

You had some good shit here...you kept the flow nice and stayed on topic...you never strayed away from the topic like most do...Your words were filled with emotion...It didn't make me feel like i was there because it was more describing yourself than someone else...but it still came out dope...You had some creativity here but mostly just a large vocabulary...Try writing 20-30 lines next topical you do just to make it a bigger piece and make it fun to read...Make people think their inside the action...Otherwise you had a dope piece here...break dicks huh? Wow your scary :(!

Lol Peace Ladie...

~Nash

So? You've got to put 2 new links in every new open mic you post. Kindly do so or i'll have to close this.

uppin for feed

this piece was good here.You had a good topic along with a good storyline.Also your Imagry was good and your emotion was good to.When I read this piece I could get a picture in my head.And your structure was good too here.And you had good wordplay.But overall I give this a 8.5/10 keep up the good work and check out my collab called "Inner demons" its pretty dope

thnaks for your honest feed..... glad you enjoyed this uppin for feed i'll hit ya shit up

Hot shit, i really liked it, not tryna dis u but if it had a topic itd be off da hook

Closed. you were warned.