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What up dude? You good, aight, lets have a good battle!
10-25 lines
House Rules!!!
Meanin crew votes, hate votes, and d/r votes, you know.
check in, then drop bout an 1 later at the max.
You spit first.
That about it, drop a good spit for a nice battle.
let me drop 2morrow cuz im in a battle now
cuz u responded 2 late my fault dog
Its all good......Just let me know when you ready, then PM me...good luck in ya otha battle.
.....................check.....................g'l ......homie
Real through u should be dq for feeding,
ur excuse is "nah man im jus typin wat im reading",
my punches hit harder than Jeremiah Trotter,
got some many tricks up my sleeve call me a harlem globetrooter,
this cat 19 and doesnt know how 2 drive a car,
"bend u like beckham" show u a true wresting star,
ur RB career is not going 2 far,
got me spiting 10-25 lines when u dont deserve half a bar,
got ur self asking "who" are u like jae millz,
while i running u over like corey dill...........
on, jus give up cuz no1 is cheering u on, cuz u ugly and wack,
ull never get a girl cuz u got more wrinkles then my nut sack,
ppl call me jax the way i shake the ground,
ppl call u an amateur boxer the way u barely last round 2 round,
dog jus act like allan houston and retire,
cuz im the new franchise like channing frye,
call me the rock the way i taunt it,
cuz u as gangsta as the star of malibu's most wanted,
dog i already smokin u like a philly blunt,
pussy put u next 2 a mirror show u wat a cunt,
is,
i aint david spade but i jus showed u the biz,
ness bitch
gl dog go i know u here homie
*OPEN IT UP*
Face it titch, You wont win this ..
Your chances are slimmer than Kate Moss, after one of her coke binges.
Everything this guy drops is a failure ..
so I知 winning hand over fist, like we were playin Rock Scissors Paper.
This place is my home, you just barged in quick ..
think youre part of furniture here? Well thats cool - cos Im an arsonist.
All your bars are flipped, im the king of the castle ..
Total Murkage!? HA! Your crews named after what ima bring in this battle.
Now listen man, I aint tryin` to start ..
But you could win Rear Of The Year - cos you`ve got a face like an Arse!
*TIME FOR WHAT I DO*
I know why you call yaself King Cobra, cause u like 50, yall love them Snakes|
You know how it is when I battle, so you wanna prove that u got what it takes||
You a fag. fah certain wack, not on my level, I値l thrash and hurt this little brat|
Exposing the BITCH in this King of Snake nigga when I drag the curtains back||
Like ya sexuality to ya mother,..... my verse is 2 much for ya Pride~To~Manage|
Like cooton stripz, I値l put you inside a bandage you cant Survive~The~Damage||
And even if u was workin at Atkins Factory, you still wouldn稚 have FAT~LINES|
So I知a smash~u~casually n now n forever till death,haunt you like Past~Crimes||
N this aint just rips~n~spices I知 the nicest n u Tone Death like Broke Mic Devices|
This shit aint righteous, you cant beat me, but they let you battle me, and cant fight it||
When I知 done his boys値l be like, he hasn稚 been on since that day you scared him|
Shyt, you know how I do, well you dont, still, some one should have prepared him||
And like unsafe sex son, you値l never on RB.com in a million years reach protection|
Cause I知 syntaxin my rhyme one at a time Real Thorough untill it reach profection||
Aight mane...I'm good......nice battle huh...sure....votes
Oh, and no I aint go over the lines...I got like one more, thats 24, 12 bars...
okay though real had a fucked structure & flow wasnt too good he nice punches to come with the rhymes was hot as well, cobra, your rhymes were okay but your punches were weak & U could have did better with flow because the flow, i was not feelin that so real gets my vote for the decent punches along with nice vocab with the verse, cobra elevate n improve you skillz with the flow and better punches
vote/real
aight this wuz an almost even battle
king...yer shit wuz dope except fer da lines where u rhymez wit like half a word....for example:
got ur self asking "who" are u like jae millz,
while i running u over like corey dill...........
ya i wuznt feelin dat.
Real....mane wut can i say? yer shitz alwazy dope.
V//Real Thorough
werd...thanks for the feed back, and I think its safe to say good battle wit out a nigga gettin the big head, and UPPIN #1
Very Nice Battle Here, Can We Please Get Some Good Feed Back, And Votes.
*SIGHS HERE ALSO*
Another good battle being wasted, this shouldn't get towards the bottom of the thread
King - Your verse was aight. Your punches were ok. But you didnt have any personals. Well not any good ones u mentioned hes 19 but i dont see that as being a good personal, far from it.
Real - Your verse was aight too. Your punches hit harder than ya opponents. U included personals about his name which were aight. (in my opinion if u dont use personals u aint gonna win a battle)
I thought both of your flow was ok i understood both of them.
But im givin it to real for harder punches but mainly for better personals.
v/ Real thorough
If yas have got d time 2 vote fairly on the battle in my sig wud appreciate it.
my bad i cant poll my vote i thought it was 100 posts to vote.
my bad, i suppose its a bit of feedback for yas anyways.
Good battle when i elevate i want a rematch dog iight real
u in my crew now right?
Yez zir, same crew...........I dont do rematches cause when you battle you 'pose to bring it, but I may accept it. UPPIN
*OPEN IT UP*
Face it titch, You wont win this ..
Your chances are slimmer than Kate Moss, after one of her coke binges.
Everything this guy drops is a failure ..
so I知 winning hand over fist, like we were playin Rock Scissors Paper.
This place is my home, you just barged in quick ..
think youre part of furniture here? Well thats cool - cos Im an arsonist.
All your bars are flipped, im the king of the castle ..
Total Murkage!? HA! Your crews named after what ima bring in this battle.
Now listen man, I aint tryin` to start ..
But you could win Rear Of The Year - cos you`ve got a face like an Arse!
*TIME FOR WHAT I DO*
I know why you call yaself King Cobra, cause u like 50, yall love them Snakes|
You know how it is when I battle, so you wanna prove that u got what it takes||
You a fag. fah certain wack, not on my level, I値l thrash and hurt this little brat|
Exposing the BITCH in this King of Snake nigga when I drag the curtains back||
Like ya sexuality to ya mother,..... my verse is 2 much for ya Pride~To~Manage|
Like cooton stripz, I値l put you inside a bandage you cant Survive~The~Damage||
And even if u was workin at Atkins Factory, you still wouldn稚 have FAT~LINES|
So I知a smash~u~casually n now n forever till death,haunt you like Past~Crimes||
N this aint just rips~n~spices I知 the nicest n u Tone Death like Broke Mic Devices|
This shit aint righteous, you cant beat me, but they let you battle me, and cant fight it||
When I知 done his boys値l be like, he hasn稚 been on since that day you scared him|
Shyt, you know how I do, well you dont, still, some one should have prepared him||
And like unsafe sex son, you値l never on RB.com in a million years reach protection|
Cause I知 syntaxin my rhyme one at a time Real Thorough untill it reach profection||
^^^ verse that won way better flow and metas like the vocab good shit holla at me if u wanna battle aight thorough?
iight feel me man...
king- ur flow was off. i liked how u came out swingin n tried 2 swing in everyline cuz dat remind me of me. ur use of metas were iight n i c u elevatin. ur struc sucked but betta den otha dudes...
real- flow was off 2 man. struc was a definite no no. punches were iight but u flowed a lil 2 basic man. yea u hit w/ good personals but u aint really showed lyricism by includin good use of metas. u betta then dis man, i seen u battle b4.
slightly even battle in my opinion but king get da W 4 creativity in his punches
v/ king
rtf honestly on my battle in my sig please n thanx if u do it
Iz dude serious....about my rhyme..to basic.....wow! more votes wit feed back please....Aint no fuckin way.....my shit iz Thorough man......itz all good, but dude could have said other then somein about my rhyme.
Votes.
Uppin for my hommie
come on niggaz vote for 1 of these niggaz
bumpin for my nigga Real
we need votes u need votes lets share them votes together u feel chea!
uppin for my nigga.....................................!
You Already See What The Bitness Is.....lets Get Some Votes...in All Like 5 More, For Me 2...what You Think?
uppin for real ...
King Cobra - dMan, you did your thing, but the punches were somewhat primitive. You didn't put enough time in the battle. You had a full hour. Next time, write a more concentrated verse with some clever wordplay. Punches were medicore, but flow was well maintained.
Real Thorough - Your verse was way better. Structure was solid, multies were a bit forced. Never the less, you had the more creative punches and your put more thought into your verse.
Vote - Real Thorough
thanks For The Honest Feedback, Always Appreciated Like 5 Dolla Hoes!!! Yez Zir...lol, But I Need A Vote!
V/real....i'll Give You A Cookie!
V/real....i'll Give You A Cookie!
Nah not a cookie, but an honest vote back!
King Cobra:
Real through u should be dq for feeding,
ur excuse is "nah man im jus typin wat im reading",
just sayin that line right there had me DYING dog.. haha lmao.. good ass line.. but any ways..
cobra came with some sick punches but i think real took this with even better punches. good veres both yall tho.
v/ real thorough