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your lines contain only trash, they're what most factories bear
if i thought u drop hard, i wouldnt a' left my steel toes upstairs
just a newb, should quit battlin, RBs no where near ya house
im hangin with the big dogs, while ur still playin cat n' mouse
lil' bitch, fuck a man, u straight blow, through the tissue
forgetting, leavin the toilette seat up is never an issue!
you keep pushin poor shit, u'll end up broke, sleepin outside
soon the monsters under ur bed wont have a place to hide
coulda' put his name in the search, made em' my personal stool
but gave the idiot a chance, so i wouldnt have moron the fool
im original as fuck, my verses never got lows but highs
while yours are so ugly, they're just a CypherSoreEyez
look he's droped a recycled pre wrote and below is the evidence
kids shit is recycled more than dollar bills with pics of dead presindents
but lez get serious.....
We all sleep-on-his-shit, this cat only ‘wins against his penis’ coz he stays ‘beatin-his-dick’
You best take heed-when-I-spit, attack me? you wouldnt even ‘slap a crack fiend’ in ‘need-of-a-hit’
Youll lay-with-a-fixed-frown, only time he hasnt got a dick in his ass is when the gay-needs-to-sit-down
Im breakin-this-bitch-now, coz ‘2 for 1 sales’ is the only way that your ever ‘makin-a-diss-count/discount’
Not even your best-could-stress-me, and like ‘bottles at an alcoholics house’ all your threats-are-empty
I kill vets-that-test-me, so ill leave your style ‘deceased/d-seized’ like you was ‘rappin with epilepsy’
cypher! Youll learn-not-to-try-him coz for facin me, voters will confirm-that-your-dyin
Ill burn-you-with-irons, your like ‘newborn babies’, coz your ‘comin out this bitch purple-&-cryin’
k good battle.....bump^... .
lmao
up
v/Thor
Cypher had stretched lines and ive seen all ur punches 87535687638 times. Thor didn't come to hard wit the punches but at least they were original
um ok...bump......
from now on no less than 5 lines of feeback will count as a vote..
aight i gotta give my vote to thor cuz even tho i know he went easy, he was still original with a verse. cypher's your lines were hard to read cuz your lines were stretched out. but you did have some good punches in there. good battle.
v/ thor.
i did my part on this battle so help me close mine aight? thanks.
thor u had better verse overall. better flow punches, n structure. just up ya vocab n u'll go far aiight. cypher i liked ya verse but i also seen those punches too much ...u had a nice flow i felt dat. work on better punches aiight
thanks up
Cypher ur line were strech and that fucked up ur structure and flow but ur punches were ok I give u a 6 for creavtivity tho
If it wazn't streched u would of did good
6/10
Thor u had a nice flow and some pretty good punches but wut made ur verse better waz the structure and the creativity
8/10
v/Thor for better verse
yup
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close this shit
v/ thor for way baetter punchlines and worplay
ill poll when i ge 100 posts but for now can you close this?
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=240928&page=3
aight i got 100 posts
v/ thor as explained in the above post