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10 line
no feed
I spit first
30 min checkin and feed
g'luck
200 post to vote
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iight checc>>>>> ill drop right after u
This Gonna B A Good Battle
Ok take a ride wit me to see how high this kid can elevate
That ride waz as long as blowin out candle on a birthday cake
Ur really not the brightest fellow for steppin up to the accasion
Only reason he won a battle is his technique aka Noob persuation
Harsin noobs to vote for u and the ur vote for the to return the favor
Be fuckin over noobs in battles to get good rep.......WHAT A RAPER
J hood must be another MC gonna wacker then still wanna be a rapper
U really convinced me u were a decent MC so become an actor
U fooled me into think u were a person that waz gettin better
Got a mouth that run like a gun but no bullets in the Berrata
Bullets mean punches and a Berratta would be his brain
Don't vote if u don't get it
first ur face iz redder than the code bytch'n(code red is his alias)//
now ur face iz blue lika drowned rat swimmin in piss and of no chances of livin //
yellow belly bastard itchn his cold necc cuz he smoked his cracc, now hes trippin//
im in da suburbs hood n he's stucc in an igloo pissin//
this niggaz frostbittin, stucc in slo-mo//
at least he spits, his alias is a no show//
ill keep this bytch on his blue toes, ur world has jus dropped from ya hands n u kno(the foundation on ur sig)//
im king of tha ice, uz a northpole begga, so bow at my feet right now//
ill end this shyt w/ him sayn "im merked, bye, bonjure, adios, chao"//
this nigga thinks hes elite material OH WOW, but thats untill he wakes up, half dazed stucc in my snow-plow//
uppin fa votes #1
uppn fa votes #2
Ok take a ride wit me to see how high this kid can elevate
That ride waz as long as blowin out candle on a birthday cake
Ur really not the brightest fellow for steppin up to the accasion
Only reason he won a battle is his technique aka Noob persuation
Harsin noobs to vote for u and the ur vote for the to return the favor
Be fuckin over noobs in battles to get good rep.......WHAT A RAPER
J hood must be another MC gonna wacker then still wanna be a rapper
U really convinced me u were a decent MC so become an actor
U fooled me into think u were a person that waz gettin better
Got a mouth that run like a gun but no bullets in the Berrata
Bullets mean punches and a Berratta would be his brain
Don't vote if u don't get it
sorry jhood but he got u homie
structure=both
punches=frostbite
jhood u came hard but come harder next time u usually never come this weak all the times i seen ubattle u came hard as shit
vote/frostbite
wow.. good battle niggs. aight
frostbite- you had a good everything, good wordplay, punchlines, structure, ya verse was easy to follow.
jhood- you had good wordplay too, usin his name as a topic. good verse.
both yall came hard at each other and its hard to pick someone. but i think i gotta give my vote to frostbite cuz his verse made me laugh more. but jhood you had a good verse too. good battle yall.
i left my peice on this battle so help me close mines aight? thanks.
this battle was okboth of ya had some gd punches
but jhoods was better he had more personals and
his flow was better and frostbite no hate but go back to
school and try to work on ur grammer man the misspelled
words made ur rhyme look stupid
but i vote for jhood cause he had better punches and personals
v/jhood
yall hit my battles up they need to be closed and vote honestly
uppn #3
DIS NIGGA VOTED 4 THA WRONG PERSON IN DA POLLS!!!
naw no i didnt they said i needed 200 post to vote so i couldntQuote:
Originally Posted by jhood_bobericc
Uppin
I posted on the rules 200 post to vote
this was kinda a tricky battle to vote on....frost had punches an structure, while jhood had the perfonals and flow....he also had some good punches too...so i gotta give this one to jhood...no hate...i was feelin his verse more....frost....that was a good verse it made me laugh......but i vote for jhood...for reasons above
v/ jhood
ummm this was a close battle...... foreal....
Id have to say that frostbires verse was vicious as shit for punches... but i feel anybody can write some punches and use um in a battle... but with j hood... i like how erything he talked about almost was ice cause ya name was frostbite.... i mean i feel he had that personal shit on lock foreal... frost bite had a great verse but no real serious personals... and i felt jhood had alot soo i gotta to give it to J....
i'll be honest i wasn't really feeling the punches from either side in this battle. jhood had more 'personals' but they were pretty inneffective here. u ran with the frostbite/cold/snowy references too much and it got a little boring. frost ur punches were kinda off. the actor line is ok but is kinda played. u need to be a bit more creative but ok. really the punches were even, but frost had better structure, even lines and was less stretched. jhood bonjour actually means hello so that kinda ruined that line for me. i gotta go with frost for flow and structure, cos punches were even.
lol baker im feelin your telibubi sig hahhaha nice yo this isa close asd battle yo
Thanx for the vote uppin
well i think both yall brought it but frosts puncez were hotter. he had mo of a battle verse. every line u waste self glorifying ur self takes ya score down. it's a battle u gotta atckk and be creative. therefore Frostbite took it.
Uppin
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uppn
Yo frost and j you were really close man you both blew me away with great punches and flow. But i cant vote for both of you now can i.?
Vote/ Frost for better punches and flow. Work on structre
Uppin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=241420
vote^
flow.....Frost
Vocab........Frost
structure.......Frost
metas........none
wordplay.......none
similes........none
complexity.......Frost
creativity.......Frost
Vote....Frost
This was so one sided. Frost easily got this. His verse was better in every aspect ESPECIALLY flow and structure lol wowzers
Please hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=241420
This battle was a str8 battle
Frost had a good structure, nice flow
Hood also had a good structure, str8 wordplay, bad flow
Vote/ Frost
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=240928
close that
v/ frostbite for better punches and strucutre