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Killa-P a fagget ass nigga, everybody here know you wack
You like sadam on this site, you will neva attack/
And I aint wack, you the one everybody gone call lame,
you like a damn KID, wouldn稚 PLAY with SIDNEY or SHERAIN/
even at a house party, shit i知 the DON of the south,
I値l treat you like R-Kelly, shoot pissy nut in yo mouth/
and I know you値l like it, I知 smashin stupid niggaz I知 really maijor,
you couldn稚 get a date even if you stared on room raiders/
and elimidate, on this site bitch I eliminate,
saw you on cheaters askin yo man can yall start over with a clean slate/
but enough with the gay jokes, killa P I知 through with this shit,
I got a license to kill, you aint even earned a permit/
That痴 kind of funny, I知 laughin I bet you rap like a clown,
Fuck uppin like a movie critic, I知 given you two thumbs down/
ight my nigga lets see what you got
Cha bout to merk dis dude......
Look my dude i keep my shit hood ya know how dat go
I couldnt give you some matches and gasoline and ya carrer still wouldnt blow
So go my dude keep talkin dat shit and see if ya dont get filled up wit lead
You suck so much ya dude told me you was good at givin head
Fuckin garbage ass rapper i aint got time for this
Ill fuckin blow you brain out ya asshole and dats just wit da four fifth
So imagine what i could do if i had a fuckin sawed of shotti
I could give you a fuckin better blow out den dat grandson of john gotti
Right now though its back to you i see they call ya pressure
My flow elevates high as the sears tower yours a whole lot lesser
Fuckin chump been battlin all my life ya should of never dared me
Ill fuckin shoot you in da legs and run over ya body wit a jeep cheroke
When you get horny you finger a nigga
When i get horny i finger da fuckin trigga muthafucka
uppin uppin
uppin............................................. .
damn come vote upppin
can we get atleast one vote damn,
uppin,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i'm trying to stop freeposting you people are making it hard lol. vote
v/pressure...decent punches...but your verse was mad creative...good wordplay and flow.
killah..your shit was okay had decent structure and flow but you didnt really come wit the punches...no wordplay and creativity well zero
hit up my battles wit honest votes and feedback
ight pressure had better wordplay and punches
but he lost on tha flow
close...but my vote goes to pressure
thanx for the coments, uppin though lets close this
Agreed, the verse is creative with nice punches and a nice lil flow going on there, with the acception of a nice overall battle verse......Quote:
Originally posted by my nigga KLEPTO
v/pressure...decent punches...but your verse was mad creative...good wordplay and flow.
GOOD UPS......check out the battle in my sig...
thanks my nigga mad love shown. uppin ,,,,,,,,,
check out my battles below
I give one to pressure...he had better use of vocab...vould had harder opunches hto...and harder hittin punches ur's was...ok,,,killa P u need to concentrate more on battlin in a battle dawg...you was sayin some hot shyt but you and really even come at pressure...work on better and more direct personals...and better use of wordplay
thanks baby girl mad love. lets close this thang uppin .............................................fasho
aight my nigga you won keep it real.......
ayo vote on my other battle so i can even my score up cuz i merked dat otha nigga.......one
ight my nigga, ayo uppin i need anotha vote so we can close this
uppin already,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
vote on otha battles below
ayo i'm out. untill next time i'm out this thread, last post
so someone close this pleez.
pleez vote for otha battles below and close them if you will.
here i go.
Killa-P a fagget ass nigga, everybody here know you wack
You like sadam on this site, you will neva attack/
And I aint wack, you the one everybody gone call lame,
you like a damn KID, wouldn稚 PLAY with SIDNEY or SHERAIN/
even at a house party, shit i知 the DON of the south,
I値l treat you like R-Kelly, shoot pissy nut in yo mouth/
and I know you値l like it, I知 smashin stupid niggaz I知 really maijor,
you couldn稚 get a date even if you stared on room raiders/
and elimidate, on this site bitch I eliminate,
saw you on cheaters askin yo man can yall start over with a clean slate/
but enough with the gay jokes, killa P I知 through with this shit,
I got a license to kill, you aint even earned a permit/
That痴 kind of funny, I知 laughin I bet you rap like a clown,
Fuck uppin like a movie critic, I知 given you two thumbs down/
PRESSURE GETS IT ALL
IT LOOKED LIKE IT WAS TO EASY
STRUCTURE= PRESSURE
PUNCHES=PRESSURE