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Check in's are due by Wednesday.
10-20 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by Friday 11:59 PM eastern.
Vote on 3 battles and leave links. I'm checking.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
[only those with a battle this week]
come out swingin.
i'm in.
my tounge i'll beat ya 2 death, put a knife in ya chest, by God im blessed, holding the british crest, from the underground of southampton town, holdin the crown of da british sound, and where proud fuck the euro keep the pound, dont adjust your sight, yeah im white spit lines the are tight, i'll do it all night, you aint nothing to me, your lines are empty, y'all only flea, i'll make you go crazy, how can show your face, cutting off below your waist, you disgrace... :flipoff:
i'll smack ya face to the pave. when i'm smashin' you'll fall and lay
& turn hens into such a groundhog..he'll be declared a national holiday
n i can call him gay. girls? you aint seem to know when to stop
he'll spit game..& see a dame dash like the bitch was ceo of the roc
this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
now seek support, cuz this axe..when i hack it's an evil sport
that'll make hens' chest judge hatchett's..w/o being on people's court
fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door
so just hop this board. cuz fa' real i'm tired of the movement
see..if boys will b-boys. then this kid'll just cry when he loses
can't slide from my shootin. get burnt with ya outlandish hopes
hens'll catch dramatic mug shots..like he was watching spanish soaps
sav is dope, but six leagues..come on you'll be soon empty major
if ur looking for another champ in leagues...you can just pm me later
sorry..lol..i just COULD NOT come up with the 20th line
because of these mexicans in my house....they do no
stop talking.
I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
If you plan on goin toe to toe..
... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
Who ARE you?, .. don't even try to match me.
No joke, after i beat $pit i had cats tellin me i won the title LAST week.
And when this fag speaks, i can't say you're stoppin me.
Cuz i'm hittin Sav.. more than he does when he stumbles on gay pornography.
I got asked to describe your skills, an' i'll say it in rhyme.
It's not cuz i didn't have an opinion..
.. but when i answered.. i said nothing came to my mind.
We're not too familiar, so what ur observing is hunches.
Yea, i know I need personals, but YOU need wordplay, wording and punches.
I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant.
MY hits connect, and they'll do more than damage ya nose.
See.. the Direct Effect'll be so bad MTV'll fuckin cancel the show.
You're just a kid, man. couldn't be hard if you tried.
Spit said come out swingin...
... but ur preoccupied with the monkey bars and the slide.
.
.
This was too easy. look my lines up, they should help.
But yo, i'll let you keep the belt... as long as you use it to hang urself.
lmao@ the two come out swingin lines, good shit Savir, good luck.
I figure a champ match always deserves breakdowns. So here we go...
vs.Quote:
Originally Posted by Savir.
I dunno. First thoughts, I'm saying Savir took it... which is really surprising to me. It just didnt seem like you [Hens.] put the time you normally do into a verse. You didnt seem as creative as you usually come, and then you had a few played lines, ie. grave mistake, direct effect. I'm gonna go with the weed, and say Savir, but I'll come back later to check it out again, make sure I feel the same way.Quote:
Originally Posted by J.Hens.
vote - Savir
i'll smack ya face to the pave. when i'm smashin' you'll fall and lay
& turn hens into such a groundhog..he'll be declared a national holiday
Nah
n i can call him gay. girls? you aint seem to know when to stop
he'll spit game..& see a dame dash like the bitch was ceo of the roc
nice
this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
Nice
sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
LMAO, Nice
now seek support, cuz this axe..when i hack it's an evil sport
that'll make hens' chest judge hatchett's..w/o being on people's court
Not feelin
fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door
LMFAO, Dope
so just hop this board. cuz fa' real i'm tired of the movement
see..if boys will b-boys. then this kid'll just cry when he loses
Lol, nice
can't slide from my shootin. get burnt with ya outlandish hopes
hens'll catch dramatic mug shots..like he was watching spanish soaps
alright
sav is dope, but six leagues..come on you'll be soon empty major
if ur looking for another champ in leagues...you can just pm me later
nah
I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
If you plan on goin toe to toe..
... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
Nice
With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
Seen the concept before, nothing special
Who ARE you?, .. don't even try to match me.
No joke, after i beat $pit i had cats tellin me i won the title LAST week.
Lol, nice
And when this fag speaks, i can't say you're stoppin me.
Cuz i'm hittin Sav.. more than he does when he stumbles on gay pornography.
Nah
I got asked to describe your skills, an' i'll say it in rhyme.
It's not cuz i didn't have an opinion..
.. but when i answered.. i said nothing came to my mind.
Lol, nice
We're not too familiar, so what ur observing is hunches.
Yea, i know I need personals, but YOU need wordplay, wording and punches.
Dope
I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant.
NICE
MY hits connect, and they'll do more than damage ya nose.
See.. the Direct Effect'll be so bad MTV'll fuckin cancel the show.
Coo
You're just a kid, man. couldn't be hard if you tried.
Spit said come out swingin...
... but ur preoccupied with the monkey bars and the slide.
.Nice
.
This was too easy. look my lines up, they should help.
But yo, i'll let you keep the belt... as long as you use it to hang urself.
Dope
I got Savir taking this one. Ive seen Hens come much better. Savir surprised me. Hens came more consistent, but Savir came nicer, The lines of his that i liked, I liked more than Hens`s. If you know what i mean. Savir came harsher.
Nice battle
v/Sav
honestly, that breakdown made no sense cannabarz.
your breakdown of hensley's lines:
Nice
Seen the concept before, nothing special
Lol, nice
Nah
Lol, nice
Dope
NICE
Coo
Nice
Dope
your breakdown of savir's lines:
Nah
nice
Nice
LMAO, Nice
Not feelin
LMFAO, Dope
Lol, nice
alright
nah
figure it out. =/
i was thinking the SAME thing. lmfaoQuote:
Originally Posted by Lay Doubt.
wtf stop copying other people's vote and make your own damn decisions
trendy newbie voting muthafuckas
n i can call him gay. girls? you aint seem to know when to stop
he'll spit game..& see a dame dash like the bitch was ceo of the roc
this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
now seek support, cuz this axe..when i hack it's an evil sport
that'll make hens' chest judge hatchett's..w/o being on people's court
fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door
vs
I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
If you plan on goin toe to toe..
... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant.
MY hits connect, and they'll do more than damage ya nose.
See.. the Direct Effect'll be so bad MTV'll fuckin cancel the show.
You're just a kid, man. couldn't be hard if you tried.
Spit said come out swingin...
... but ur preoccupied with the monkey bars and the slide.
LOL, i liked both of the Come out swingin punches, nice flips on that, anyway, this was close, Savir came dope, and for a guy who seems to hate wordplay, u used it alot and pretty well. Hens started off fire, but kinda started to weakin through the rest of the verse, He finished strong though. I would like to jus say its a tie, but nobody wants that, so ima reread the verses again.......*Plays Jeopardy music*....................shit, after rereading the verses i felt Sav's other lines that werent quotable were > than Hen's so my vote goes to Savir for consistency, good showing by both, but I felt some of Hen's other lines were to bland IMO. Good battle foos
Try reading underneath. I said i felt the lines i liked of Savs > Hensleys.
cool cool, 0-3.
i'll smack ya face to the pave. when i'm smashin' you'll fall and lay
& turn hens into such a groundhog..he'll be declared a national holiday
this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door
vs.
I'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
If you plan on goin toe to toe..
... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant
v/ sav
i'll smack ya face to the pave. when i'm smashin' you'll fall and lay
& turn hens into such a groundhog..he'll be declared a national holiday
^^meh
n i can call him gay. girls? you aint seem to know when to stop
he'll spit game..& see a dame dash like the bitch was ceo of the roc
^^kinda cool
this herbs toast. better drop hot or get smoked where it most hurts
so this battle's over due to hens..cuz he's badly overdue of a dope verse
^^kinda forced, but not bad
sav'll spray carnage, & john? well look what this gay done started
people bit off him..and then all of a sudden Lay became garbage
^^lol, cool
now seek support, cuz this axe..when i hack it's an evil sport
that'll make hens' chest judge hatchett's..w/o being on people's court
^^nice
fucking faggot, he likes the dick shit. so ima bop this whore
spit said to come out swingin'..& hens broke his hands on the closet door
^^lmao
so just hop this board. cuz fa' real i'm tired of the movement
see..if boys will b-boys. then this kid'll just cry when he loses
^^muddled logic in IMO, but saw what you were trying for, nice idea
can't slide from my shootin. get burnt with ya outlandish hopes
hens'll catch dramatic mug shots..like he was watching spanish soaps
^^lol
sav is dope, but six leagues..come on you'll be soon empty major
if ur looking for another champ in leagues...you can just pm me later
^^heh, ok
vs.
'll show this hoe that he doesn't have luck in store.
If you plan on goin toe to toe..
... you're gonna wind up with a tag stuck to yours.
^^meh, ok
With your stupid verses, it's no surprise this dude is worthless.
Don't call this a grave mistake... cuz i meant to bury you on purpose.
^^cool
Who ARE you?, .. don't even try to match me.
No joke, after i beat $pit i had cats tellin me i won the title LAST week.
^^meh
And when this fag speaks, i can't say you're stoppin me.
Cuz i'm hittin Sav.. more than he does when he stumbles on gay pornography.
^^blah, ok
I got asked to describe your skills, an' i'll say it in rhyme.
It's not cuz i didn't have an opinion..
.. but when i answered.. i said nothing came to my mind.
^^lmao
We're not too familiar, so what ur observing is hunches.
Yea, i know I need personals, but YOU need wordplay, wording and punches.
^^hehe, cool
I go to new leagues so other heads can try their best with John.
I saw you were the king of RB's and now i know why i never liked the restaurant.
^^blah
MY hits connect, and they'll do more than damage ya nose.
See.. the Direct Effect'll be so bad MTV'll fuckin cancel the show.
^^ok, but seen idea before
You're just a kid, man. couldn't be hard if you tried.
Spit said come out swingin...
... but ur preoccupied with the monkey bars and the slide.
^^hehe, kinda funny
.
This was too easy. look my lines up, they should help.
But yo, i'll let you keep the belt... as long as you use it to hang urself.
^^not really a diss
close, but v/Savir
battle me
:thefinger
v/ hensley
wittier verse. sav disappointed me :(
good battle hens
& feeb..chances are my verse for MM will suck also..cuz i've
been winning with garbo..gotta do what works..eh?
and u gotta set up matches..spit is gone..need help? holler.
omg @ this voting, lol
& i was thinking bout joining
hens even has dickriders who join just to dickride, lol.
*dead*
yeah they're gay. i voted for hens more on the fact that you disappointed me than the fact that i liked his verse. you better come dope next week hoe or i'll cry :(