Sorry bout that, i fucked up on the first battle set up.
same as before check in, drop whenever 12-16 lines
good luck
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Sorry bout that, i fucked up on the first battle set up.
same as before check in, drop whenever 12-16 lines
good luck
check............................................. .
chek can i paste wot i put in the other 1 jus finished thn got ya message
the only thing bout u like a firestorm isn't ya flow
burning is the sensation ur partners get after ya blow
the only time you drop ill is when ya fall down from ya herpes
melt ya brain like a seven eleven at the equator and ur a slurpee
this firestorm showed up on the forecast as inconsequential
you couldn't stir up a warm breeze even at ya full potential
i ain't a meteorologist but i can still predict tho
there's a 90% chance this will be taken by melt brain 5-0
as i start writing my next four lines of verbal abuse
i wonder how could you get so damned obtuse
maybe you'll come up with some bright excuse
like shit man, i couldn't type with my thumb in ma caboose!
as i come to my vicious close, ya sit shiverin in ya winter clothes
there may not have been a firestorm, ya know it ain't even warm
so i put on the weather control, turn that wind into a breeze.
a breeze exactly like this battle, something that i won with ease.
[B][I]melt u seem in pain ,course u in pain when im burning my ryhmes in2 your brain with a adjustable flame ,cuz my ryhmes are sum you wont forget cuz i wont let u 4get lil children always tryin 2 pet u this the childrens let me direct u in2 the adult area oh fuk this bitch got hysteria. i'll eject this mutha fucka bk in2 siberia cuz im the 1 hu puts the melt in yor name, i melt on your tongue lyk a icecube but nigga we all no u from a testube cuz im the numba newbe ready 2 test , ready 2 press this button 2 put u in2 cardiac arrest cuz this the manifest u shud wish 2 be as good as me cuz im 1 of the blessed wit this gift cuz i floated adrift and ended up lurking in caves , wher learned how 2 murk whilsty goin insane
yo nigga done
spit your shit dawg
yeah.............................................. .....
[B][I]melt u seem in pain ,course u in pain when im burning my ryhmes in2 your brain with a adjustable flame ,cuz my ryhmes are sum you wont forget cuz i wont let u 4get lil children always tryin 2 pet u this the childrens let me direct u in2 the adult area oh fuk this bitch got hysteria. i'll eject this mutha fucka bk in2 siberia cuz im the 1 hu puts the melt in yor name, i melt on your tongue lyk a icecube but nigga we all no u from a testube cuz im the numba newbe ready 2 test , ready 2 press this button 2 put u in2 cardiac arrest cuz this the manifest u shud wish 2 be as good as me cuz im 1 of the blessed wit this gift cuz i floated adrift unsafely and ended up lurking in caves , wher learned how 2 murk whilsty goin insane whilst learning the game cuz i had this hurtful pain in woz my nu trackies getting splatted wit your brain tissue u dint think i wud miss u go get 1 of your 3 yr olds 2 fist u and guess wot u just got fucking dissed u jew
good battle dogg now we need sum votes uppin 4 votes
good battle dogg now we need sum votes uppin 4 votes and ppl the last 1 my reel 1 ^
how'd you know i was a jew?................................
uppin, vote assholes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dunno : i honestly guessed lol
or im goin psychic 1 of them 2 lol
that or ur an alias............................................. ........
yup!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! must be !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
a decent battle but i gotta give it hands down to
melt brain
he had a better flow
better structure
stood constit (didnt get off topic to much)
had a few punch lines
mc FireSt0rm you gotta come harder and work on your structure its hard to read your shit like that and you need to stay focused on your oppent throw punch lines more often and stay on topic, yet u had a decent flow
good battle
vote: melt brain
ye s.i.c but he a fly weight innit im used 2 writin lyk tht cuz i never spit on tis web syt b4 but thanks 4 the feed back
sfe nigga
i think melt got this just. it was close. he had more structure. i think mc had better punches tho none of them were really hard. it was also difficult to read. melt had better impact on his first line. close battle. no hate mc
vote for bruza v krayawn
bruza v babyshante
kk................................................
yo melt vote on my other battle dogg plz peace .,.
any1 vote on ma other battle............................
yo uppin, this shit needs to close....................................
up................................................ ......
up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!vote !!!
not a bad battle it was pretty decent the only thing really that got me was the structure no offense mc fire but u have to elevat on ur structure i didnt like it u have the comma thing but it looked like one big long sentence othere thatn that it was good
v/melt
RIGHT.......
Firestorm you had no structure to ya verse man.....try not to run all of ya shyt together...read some other battles and figure out some structure....
Melt brain you won this one no contest....you had overall better punches than this kid...
example
the only time you drop ill is when ya fall down from ya herpes
melt ya brain like a seven eleven at the equator and ur a slurpee
vs.
B][I]melt u seem in pain ,course u in pain when im burning my ryhmes in2 your brain with a adjustable flame ,cuz my ryhmes are sum you wont forget cuz i wont let u 4get lil children always tryin 2 pet u this the childrens let me direct u in2 the adult area oh fuk this bitch got hysteria. i'll eject this mutha fucka bk in2 siberia cuz im the 1 hu puts the melt in yor name, i melt
hold up.....WHAT???
Vote for melt brain for better structure and harder punches....
hit this up with a honest vote fellas
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=235549
the only time you drop ill is when ya fall down from ya herpes
melt ya brain like a seven eleven at the equator and ur a slurpee
(nice spit melt)i liked dat line
mc- u had nothin i cant even catch a flow on yo shit u need to break up ya lines
V=melt...need i really explain??? firestorm ur shit was trash, u need to take ur whole shit bak to formula, melt had a way betta flow, punchez, and wordplay....my V goez to him