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no dickridin
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10-15 lines
no dickridin
u start?
I Drop-Bombs......'Over-And-Over'.....Like They Commin' Steady-N-Fast
The Race Was Over Before It Started......Cuz You Were Already In Last
U Wont 'Walk-Over-This' Cuz I'm Dark N Scary Like An Unlooked-Street
Last Time 'CS Spit Anything Raw' Was When He Ate The Uncooked-Meat
Faggot...We Know You Like Men...Cause Women Just Aren't Your Flavor
And When Somebody D/R's You....It's No Wonder You Return The Favor
I Drop *Lyrical Bombs* On You Kid...And You Know That I Pack-Gas
Just Like All Them *Speedy-Fuckers*.......You'll Get The Crack-Fast
That's Because You Like Ass-Crack...Cause You're Gay...Like Barney
And Bitch...The Only 'Free-Style' You Got Is From 'The Salvation Army'!
Bitch its funny u think u hot as hell
But just like a cow touchin an electric barrier imma leave u shocked as hell
Knocked out eyez bloodshoot n ur heart shot as well
Because each time i rhyme i spit bullets, killin all yo niggaz till ur block is hell
Effex u talk loud but ur words on me they got no effect
Like a Fed Ex package deliverin a jesus cross to a muslim sect
U think ur flow is hot but im the one rolling the dice
U suck so much U'd get beaten by this faggot Vanilla Ice
Ur rhymes are as slow as an obese in a wheelchair
N even if u was gettin pushed u'd still be an handicapped tryna be a gangster
U should get muthafuckin glasses, ur so ugly nigga its the only reason ur gettin glances
And a a pile of shit in the balance would weigh more than ur body u muthafuckin rap leprous
uppin!!!!!!
vote plz!!!!!!!11
uppin
a bit weak this, but effex gets it simply because he had more insults/punches. he actually had a pop at cs whereas cs u kinda just said alot of statements that weren't that funny or insulting. stuff like 'killing all yo niggaz till yo block is hell' isn't a punch, so it doesn't work here. effex came harder, with better structure, but both of u could use more multis and a bit of work on effective punches.
v/effex
hit up the sig battles please!
good battle man
votes please?
I Drop-Bombs......'Over-And-Over'.....Like They Commin' Steady-N-Fast hott
The Race Was Over Before It Started......Cuz You Were Already In Last
U Wont 'Walk-Over-This' Cuz I'm Dark N Scary Like An Unlooked-Street good punch
Last Time 'CS Spit Anything Raw' Was When He Ate The Uncooked-Meat
Faggot...We Know You Like Men...Cause Women Just Aren't Your Flavor daha nice personal
And When Somebody D/R's You....It's No Wonder You Return The Favor
I Drop *Lyrical Bombs* On You Kid...And You Know That I Pack-Gas
Just Like All Them *Speedy-Fuckers*.......You'll Get The Crack-Fast ehh decent
That's Because You Like Ass-Crack...Cause You're Gay...Like Barney
And Bitch...The Only 'Free-Style' You Got Is From 'The Salvation Army'! pretty good closer
v/ effex for just overall better verse n cs brought nothing .. ill vote on thiz shit in like 10 seconds i need like 4 posts
Battle wasnt that strong but idk
All Cats. go to effex he was just all around the better verse
Effex..4/10
CS...2/10
Vote goes to effex..return the favorite with the vote if you got 100+ posts
didnt really like how CS rhymed hell with hell, but over all i think effex had better meta's and punches
lol....some people obviously don't get my punches....4/10...my ass....ok vote up
COMPLETE MERK EFFEZ ALL CATS EASY
V/EFF
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...56#post3196356
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one more cmon
CS- Haha..first time I've seen someone rhyme Hell 3 times...That was about the dumbest rap I have ever seen..no metas-multis-bad structure-bad flow(because of lack of vocab) and you just flat out sucked ass here...I dunno if you think you're good in real life man...but jesus...either stay off the site....Or elevate everything about your style and multiply that by 12million....You're bad dude...
Effex- Decent verse here...had some good metas...multis used well (only when needed) had some weak and some good punches...but nothing was really needed against this kid...You should've battled someone more up to your standards...Nice spit tho..Keep it up...G'night
V/Effex for better everything...
effect won wit beta punches and structure the other kid used the same word to rhyme like 4 times....elevate..