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10 lines
I spit first
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30 min checkin
30 min spit
no BS vote
g'luck hommie
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Ur a dream snatcher and ur name speaks real shit
Ur dreamin a win but ur lyrics r covered in bullshit
This not a battle is a it's like Dave in the lions den
But god don't got u on this one just hopes and dreams within
U think u dope but punches r rollin shit like a fuckin Dung beatle
The only dope shit u can get is stuffed in a herone needle
U need a doctor prescription for bein so wack
Ur name and ur rythmes in the same category [Off Track]
This fool is the only dude the only orgism on RB without a mind
U must of lost it when u were born of just that lyrically inclined
I let da dog take the "Bite", and the bowl recieve da "Frost"
Melt this dude with a match, give em 50 cent without a cost
how u gonna spit hot, when there aint no heat in FrostBite
Maybe text aint ur thing Fam, keep ur Flow outta sight
holes u in your Neck, got nothin to say cuz u got a Puncture
find your verse wait aint nothin there u forgot ur Structure
Found this dude on top of a mountain, over a water fountain
frozen with frostbite, left his life on 0 im still countin
Add an "L" to your record even if we in the same Crew
I still smuther u like Clam Chowder, mixed with Frosted Stew
grrrr nothing great but good luck man
Nice verse hommie
U still a lil rusty tho
Uppin
I thought this was a good battle...i've been votin on some newb battles so both of you all looked good...lol
Nah But,
Frost...I liked ya verse...u was consistant with ya punches
Ur a dream snatcher and ur name speaks real shit
Ur dreamin a win but ur lyrics r covered in bullshit
I liked ya opener too, i thought it was some good shyt
Both of you have good structure...Not to complex like people are tryin to get
Dream: I thought u had a few decent punches to, but i just don't think you came as hard as frost did in this one...I did like this punch
how u gonna spit hot, when there aint no heat in FrostBite
Maybe text aint ur thing Fam, keep ur Flow outta sight
yeah...this was hot...
But Overall I gotta go with frostbite...
Just harder punches and consitancy...
Yeah thanx
yo sup fellas im a newbie sry lol let me kno how this ryme is thx..
Come on bitch u wanna ball
Shit youl take a big ass fall
Im 6 foot tall
U bout to cry bitch go give ya mama a call
im all skin n bones i stay throwin blows liek roy jones
Rollin on teh floor screamin that shits wack
Just go turn ur back
only 1 ur impressin is jack black
hiss ass dont even give a shit
go fuck his man tits
boit im bout to break u into itty bitty bits
That verse sucked dont eva post again
Anywayz thanx for vote man uppin #1 peace gl frost lol i probably lost but o well Writers Block has been gettin to me these past 2 weeks good luck fam peace
Need more votes ppl
good battle but i liked frost verse better he had better flow also good punches there could have been some more puches and multies dreams shit was a little played out where as frost had alot of originality overall thes was a good battle but both could elevate a little more v/frost
A yo, not for nothing, but you cats are both weak as Shit!!!!!!
Uppin
................................................ni ce verses from both but cant vote frostbite in my crew......
10 lines
I spit first
no feed
30 min checkin
30 min spit
no BS vote
g'luck hommie
Crew votes count also
[b]frost
Ur a dream snatcher and ur name speaks real shit
Ur dreamin a win but ur lyrics r covered in bullshit
nah
This not a battle is a it's like Dave in the lions den
But god don't got u on this one just hopes and dreams within
ok
U think u dope but punches r rollin shit like a fuckin Dung beatle
The only dope shit u can get is stuffed in a herone needle
ok
U need a doctor prescription for bein so wack
Ur name and ur rythmes in the same category [Off Track]
ok
This fool is the only dude the only orgism on RB without a mind
U must of lost it when u were born of just that lyrically inclined
no
nice...like 5.5/10
Dream
I let da dog take the "Bite", and the bowl recieve da "Frost"
Melt this dude with a match, give em 50 cent without a cost
nice opener
how u gonna spit hot, when there aint no heat in FrostBite
Maybe text aint ur thing Fam, keep ur Flow outta sight
ok
holes u in your Neck, got nothin to say cuz u got a Puncture
find your verse wait aint nothin there u forgot ur Structure
ok
Found this dude on top of a mountain, over a water fountain
frozen with frostbite, left his life on 0 im still countin
maybe
Add an "L" to your record even if we in the same Crew
I still smuther u like Clam Chowder, mixed with Frosted Stew
nah
nicer...like a 6/10 for good opener and bettah flow...everything else was equal
vv//D
yo frost i have to say you get this one, i liked the way your rhymes flow and ya punches connect. you did great man like frosted flakes lol.
vote frost
check out me vs saul goode needs closing so i can battle some more
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=234292
Frostbite:
U had a good verse, sum nice punches and word play... structure was ok but it coulda used a lil work here and there... rhymes and multis were ok but also coulda used a lil tuning up on... but all in all it was a decent spit
Dream:
U had good structure and good multis... it wasnt the greatest on the punches part, that could hav used a lil elevation... u had ok wordplay but u need 2 work on that a lil more... prolly not ur best effort but i think u know that... good battle
it was close but ima giv this 2 frost cuz of better punches....
hit my battle in my sig up fairly...
~1~
Frost took this in my opinion overall better verse and punches....both had good flow and structure...could of been lil uppin of the vocab but Im not hatin...and I thought Frost punches had a lil more creativity.
V/Frost
hit these up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=234415
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=232351