10 lines, ill spit first, checkin asap, drop in 15 ight
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10 lines, ill spit first, checkin asap, drop in 15 ight
alright checkin in im write my verse now k ............g/l
yo dis da syckness, you be da witness//
leave ya defensless, knock ya ass senseless//
ill render you speechless, you show weakness//
my rhymes are featless, you cant climb there steepness//
i'ma blow this shit out of proportion, im beatin you so bad, ya face got distortion//
i inflict pain, as im upin my game, get fame, as im makin my name//
im a one and only prototype, better believe the hype//
i got revulsion, send ya body into convulsions//
yah you call me a bitch, ill kick ya why ya down just to watch ya twitch//
but at least you had courage, but i took ya out like yesterdays garbage//
^ your turn man^
check
5 minutes man ight
times up you past the dead line
aiyo kids it over. when im smacking ya kind
cuz u cant keep ya weight up..as if lagging behind
n fuck the critics its obvious my bars bossin ya
at the fork in the road, sick..like fuckin car nausea
speakin of bitch. im the type to beat ya whores clit
n why set a due date, when you dropped that premature shit
ya you know its over, Grilled then stored when
this bitch aint a hick. but gets cooked, n we all know texas formen
fuck you and your clique yall all get slapped
cuz for u, considering retiring is more serious then a heart attack
no effort.
ight people start ya voting please vote on this shit
upin 1 yo ppl we need some votes please
lmao. kid ur gonna burst, chilllllllllll
upin 2..............................
yo imma throw my vote down, afterwards hit up my battles in my pro, VOTE FAIRLY
Ok ill throw ya my 2 cents
yo dis da syckness, you be da witness//
leave ya defensless, knock ya ass senseless//
(ok punch)
ill render you speechless, you show weakness//
my rhymes are featless, you cant climb there steepness//
(good flow going)
i'ma blow this shit out of proportion, im beatin you so bad, ya face got distortion//
(pretty good punch)
i inflict pain, as im upin my game, get fame, as im makin my name//
(sorta some self glory)
im a one and only prototype, better believe the hype//
(some more self glory)
i got revulsion, send ya body into convulsions//
(self glory, weak punch)
yah you call me a bitch, ill kick ya why ya down just to watch ya twitch//
(weak punch)
but at least you had courage, but i took ya out like yesterdays garbage//
(ok ending, nothing special)
Punches: 7/10
wordplay: 7/10
structure: 9/10
enjoyable: 8/10
flow: 8/10
Total: 7.9/10
alright lets see..........
yo dis da syckness, you be da witness//
leave ya defensless, knock ya ass senseless//
tight*
ill render you speechless, you show weakness//
my rhymes are featless, you cant climb there steepness//
ok*
i'ma blow this shit out of proportion, im beatin you so bad, ya face got distortion//
alright*
i inflict pain, as im upin my game, get fame, as im makin my name//
ok but simple
im a one and only prototype, better believe the hype//
ok*
i got revulsion, send ya body into convulsions//
umm.....weak
yah you call me a bitch, ill kick ya why ya down just to watch ya twitch//
weak*
but at least you had courage, but i took ya out like yesterdays garbage//
simple*
da syckness you had some alright punches
kinda simple but they were okay
aiyo kids it over. when im smacking ya kind
cuz u cant keep ya weight up..as if lagging behind
weak opener
n fuck the critics its obvious my bars bossin ya
at the fork in the road, sick..like fuckin car nausea
wtf?seems like you just putting words together*
speakin of bitch. im the type to beat ya whores clit
n why set a due date, when you dropped that premature shit
ok
ya you know its over, Grilled then stored when
this bitch aint a hick. but gets cooked, n we all know texas formen
very weak*
fuck you and your clique yall all get slapped
cuz for u, considering retiring is more serious then a heart attack
weak closer
vote /da syckness
aiyo kids it over. when im smacking ya kind
cuz u cant keep ya weight up..as if lagging behind
(ok punch, sorta gay)
n fuck the critics its obvious my bars bossin ya
at the fork in the road, sick..like fuckin car nausea
(i liked the wordplay)
speakin of bitch. im the type to beat ya whores clit
n why set a due date, when you dropped that premature shit
(ok punch, loosing flow strength)
ya you know its over, Grilled then stored when
this bitch aint a hick. but gets cooked, n we all know texas formen
(gay)
fuck you and your clique yall all get slapped
cuz for u, considering retiring is more serious then a heart attack
(ok ending, probably better than his)
Punches: 6/10
Flow: 7/10
Enjoyable: 7/10
Wordplay: 8/10
strucute: 8/10
total: 7.2/10
v/da sickness
check out the links in my pro and give me and my opponents some fair voting
yo people thx for voting upin 2
imma have to vote for da sickness...
he had better punches, both had a good structure, but both also need to elevate with better punches and better vocabulary skillz..... da sickness had better punches, he had an overall better verse. saul, you just didnt hit hard enough with ya verse, try to ork on your flow and punches
vote/sick
yo upin 3
watcha ups homes hold on let me read the verses
o dam sykness merked in this one lol i agree with sykness and i think that he won it from his punches and vocab
v/sykness
yo upin yall get to votin
yall upin for da last times only need two more votes so please vote
thx you all for voting on this battle we apreciate ya votes keep at it
Here I go.
Aight..another one sided battle, D-S took this battle cause the kid had way better punches, metas, flow, struc, "vocab.", and the rhyme scheme is crazy.....
The otha kid...you was off bruh, and you knew that, thats why you posted no effort. MAybe you thought that was cute, and was tryna show off like you just had the battle down packed, well sorry bruh, news flash..consider this an L on your record..
V/D-S.
Vote vote vote .................................................. .........
yo we need votes people come on
i would vote for the sickness cuz my nigga str8 killed homie, he had mo structure flows and creativity
yo thx for votin yall still need votes though
sickness got this one for the fact that there was more imagination and a bit more clever tho i did actually like saul after i read it the 2nd time very close
v- da syckness (i cant vote yet)
vote for bruza vs............
krayawn
babyshante
My vote: Da sykness....better flow/lyrical composure/n punches. Do ya thang
well da syckness you need some elevated but good attemp your pucnehs need working keep practicing
saul-your verse ws pretty nice i liced your punches good shit but i dont have anough post to poll any ways keep dropen ayll no hate 1
thx for voting yall keep them coming
Here it is
Punches: Saul
Multis:Da sicness
Personals : none
Flow: both
structure : Saul
Overall: V/Saul
I liked both of your verses and this was a close match but Sickness was kinda talking about his self more than the other guy , saul , sickness keep up with tha multis and try to straight the other person instead of bragging about yourself . both of you guys have potential and try to elevate on Personals and keep up on the flow , structure , multis and Punches . get into the cyphers alot more and you'll be aight.
1
ight thx for ya vote man i appreciate it thx.
Da sickness won this battle
He had vocab punches that shit is good something i can't do
but i'm not hating both verse's where good
saul i like your premature line i was laughing off my ass.
and saul can vote fairly on me and flow battle peace
Battle DQ'd
Da Syckness over upped......
This is not what I'm here for but I just read the battle and saw these should be DQ'd wack fucking votes.
And you fucking hurbs that voted for Da Syckness must be fucking crazy. That shit was wack as fuck compare to other dukes shit. anyway, not my problem.
Battle DQ'd for over ups