10-20 lines ill spit first, check in asap, spit within 50 min.
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10-20 lines ill spit first, check in asap, spit within 50 min.
yo checkin in
check....lets get it.....ready when you are...are you..drop!
check into our battle you stupid bitch............
let me make this (real thorough), i bury bitches like you under burrows//
I think you go issues, here wipe ya tears wit dis ( box of tissues)//
this battles about to get physical, bout to "bounce ya off da wall" like (mystikal)//
i study physics it doesnt (matter) how good this bitch is at lyrics//
see ill merc you, eat you up like chinese eat tofu//
give ya whole crew a pestilence merc yall vit vigilance//
better watch how ya cards are dealt, catch ya cheatin ima take ya belt//
im like a judge whats ya plea, guilty, not guilty,you tell me//
yo you all can analyze this, analyze how bad this kid gets dissed//
youll be missed from Rap Battles, now your up shit creek wit out a paddle//
diss a battle people come from all around to watch ya head rattle//
your losing, ya mind is sick, you cant handle the weight or my rap like lyrics//
im just lyrically blessed, just practically better than all the rest//
i can do better.........................
damn tight verse L2D lets see what this kids got..
had somein to do bruh.....but here I go...
Yo this bitch aint my slave,but u kno i got this "ASS WHIPPED!!"
And u get put in the trash 4 droppin "TRASH SHIT"
U dumb bitch, dont be around wen my my "GUN CLICKS"
cuz wen its war,L2D can only do one thing ..."RUN QUIK!!"
This battles ova, its easy to see like a "CANDLE AT NIGHT"
U must be from las vegas, cause you sit and "GAMBLE YA LIFE"
Rappin aint ya thing, so give it "UP TRICK"
only thing u shuld be spittin iz cum afta u "SUK DIK"
And I rhyme fukin Fabolous, so i kno u shuld be "LOV'eN Em"
This bitch is GAY., cuz wen he see Bitches he dont wanna "FUK WIT THEM"
U think u gangsta cuz u "MIGHT BE RUDE"
but i kno ur crew got rats in it like "CHINESE FOOD"
Plus i take shots with this "CANNON FOR U POSERS!!"
and i aint talkin bout the camera, this bitch shakin like "ANALOG CONTROLLERS!!!!"
Imma eat this bitch, lemme go "GET MY UTENSIL's"
Fill u up wit so much lead, u can use ur "NIPPLEZ 4 PENCIL's"
Ur shit aint Ill, so ull neva be as "SIK AS ME"
with the heat i got A.I.M, so get my message "INSTANTLY"........nuff said.
Good Battle Kid.....but I Believe I Need To Be Uppin
yo upin this shit needs votes ppl so get to votin
dam that was a tight verse tho lol haha use ur nipples for pencils
upin 2 and real thorough nice flow i like it great battle
yes zir....nice battle...try out for LS bruh, we can use heads like you, but UPPIN though.
yo upin yall we need some votes up in hurr, how do i try out man i will though
yo upin 4 we need votes up in hurr yall so vote please
UPPIN FOR MUHF......VOTES YO.....all you gotta do is go to crew hook ups and scroll down to Lost Souls and tryout...Shellz will tell you whats up, or just link this battle is your sig.......
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Originally Posted by Real Thorough
um sounds stupid but i dont even know how to link on my sig yet so how? :help:
hey real, u know u can only have 3 battles out at once right? ur u loose... read the rules noob
L2D all the way mutha fuckass.....................
Look you young, non battle winnin nuhfuckas....get the fuck out, freepostin and shit...get a battle going......and I'm a noob.....oh-k, wait till a couple battlese over.
UPPIN
would vote but im in lost souls so i cant vote for my own clan member lol
Well shit, somebody can........lets get votes......
Votes,,,,,,,,,votes,,,,,,,,,,votes,,,,,,,,,,,votes
VOTES PLZ...........VOTEZ PLZ.......VOTES PLZ.......ALL I NEED IS 1 vote, like Nas to 1 mic, like a dick ta 2 dykes.....1 vote!
vote-real
punches-real
personals-didnt see alot
flow-real
multies- didnt see any....
explanation- this was an okay battle .....although real can be way better ,........neways didnt feel like L's punches were hitting look like he key-styled it ........but like i said real can do better but atleast he had kinda good punches and flow..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=234136
ooh yea hit dat up fairly.......
No Doubt Son I Got You Now....uppin For 4 More Votes Please, Either Here Or The One Against Miss Split, All I Need Is One More Vote There And Against Jay One...help A Nigga Out.
I need votes in here....I need them quickly.......
look at it..........fadin...slowly but sholly....damn,wher is the voters....
Ehy........lets Get Some Votes This Mornin......its 10:43 Now...should Have At Least One More In 30 Minutes.....
nice battle both did killer verses
real had nice flow nice punches
l2d had a nice flow nice structure
v/real
real thorough won. he had better structure, l2d ur structure was poor, lines too short to rhyme that way. not many punches of any consequence. real ur drop was weaker here than i've seen from u in the past, but ok. some punches hit others were played or statements, and although u didn't bite, it really pissed me off that u flipped that BIG L line to nipples (someone was bound to notice) but u were the clear victor. work on ur concepts and u'll be alright. l2d just read battle verses by vets and study how they write.
real, if u got 700 posts hit up my battle with supernatural (sig) if u got time, cos it needs votes.
Aiight, Thank Yall And Needin 2 More For The Closin.....lets Get Em!
yo real through can you vote? if so check out these links.
vote/real through, better structure, better punches, more enjoyable, nice flow to it and i liked the thing about the nipples.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=234292
still need votes yall, I return em when I see em or you drop a link. need votes
This battles ova, its easy to see like a "CANDLE AT NIGHT"
U must be from las vegas, cause you sit and "GAMBLE YA LIFE"
Plus i take shots with this "CANNON FOR U POSERS!!"
and i aint talkin bout the camera, this bitch shakin like "ANALOG CONTROLLERS!!!!"
U think u gangsta cuz u "MIGHT BE RUDE"
but i kno ur crew got rats in it like "CHINESE FOOD"
v.s
nothin
l2d u had 20 lines 2 spit somthin hot or just decent and u failed badd....real i think is da best ive seen u do some of ur punchline concepts were played but a few were original i like ya ryhme scheme also keep it up fam..
v/real thorough
Chea! Needin One Vote Now To Close This Out...can I Get Some?
hmmm that can use your nipples for pencils line, seems like a flip off Big L's "fillin niggas with so much lead they can use their dick for a pencil" line.. so I don't know what to vote.
If I voted, I would have given the battle to Real Thorough, though. I felt like both mc's came nice, however, Real Thorough edged it with a couple of lines; which in particular are the cum line and the rat line.
Ahh fuck it , I'll drop a vote- Real Thorough.