10-16 lines, check in as soon as starts, ill spit first, drop in 45 min.
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10-16 lines, check in as soon as starts, ill spit first, drop in 45 min.
checking in
Checkin (chicken? -Bkaw?)...........................
yo dis L2D and ya wanna step ta me, please
I drop ya ta ya knees
but dont be greedy, im stealin fame from you quick and givin to the needy (me)
and nah im not poor, just tryin to make a name on RB "whore"
see you have post but still have no name, they dont even vote for you cause you have no fame
who's to blame, probally these other bitches who are the same
tryin to be big, but go out wit no bang cause as soon as i merc them ,that the end of tha game
but ill be gracious, ill just glimpse at your rap so you dont get embaraced to bad
so sorry you had to go down like this, live 2 die bitches and you just did
see i merked you wit motha fuckin confidence
so you say u can spit, to me u aint nothin but piles of dog shit
this is it and yes im lyrically blessed
i bench press niggas like you straight ova my chest
im da best lyrically, you mess wit me get fucked up spiritually
Yo aint my best........
i tried to warn ya, L2D, you fuck wit me, and you in too deep,
but i won't bore ya, as you'll see, i slaughter you just like a sheep
like freddy kruger i'll cause you pain, i burn you up and melt your brain
insomnia, you just can't sleep, i'm in your nightmares i'm ingrained
you have good cause to be in fright, you'se about to be alight
runnin round like a man on fire, you'll be 'burned' like ass for hire
what he got, syphlis, naw man, he jus got melt brain pissed
so i'll put you you back in your place, your eyes feel like they just been maced
well, now i know its ya first battle, ya flow sound like some dyin cattle
the only thing ya hears the rattle, of this shit it makes ya scattah.
so run away ya wannabe, ya rhymes dirtier 'n skeet,
they cover you up wit a sheet, and wonder how ya got so beat.
your done, the sun is going down. Ya shit in england ain't worth a pound
shit it ain't even worth a yen, and that's worth less than half a cent.
burned is slang for someone who just got an STD...
yo upin people cast ya votes now . . . . . . . . .
no shit to quick to spit shit neither of yall got no game
to be throwin around each others name
all i got to see was one rhyme but thats fine
cause at the end ayo time your name is mine
along with yo fame its a shame it took your girl
you now alone in this world so walk to bridge
and meet me half way look off in the dark alleys and see the chirlden dead in pathway
needles of hell infect there arms so i carry my glock so people know i barearms
im allways in mood to strut my blade an't even tucked up im ready to slit any hoes throat up
so what the fuckever dont be mad at me when my rhyme outdoes your B-A-T-T-L-E
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Originally Posted by J-sticky
:wtf: :Offtopic: :stupid2:
aight i voted on your shit, please vote on mine..............
heh heh, i posted on the wrong fucking link...........
yo upin
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idk... ima have to go wit melt on this one, good punches, altho L2D had flow
im votin L2D beta verse he had some nice puches in there beta then the otha guy
last up
uppin............................................. ....
well heres the breakdown
flow=melt
multies=not much but i'd go wit melt
meta=melt
structure=tie
punches=close but melt came harder
overall=melt
vote=melt
up................................................ .......
^^^^^agreeQuote:
Originally Posted by explicitot
melt brain...got this battle cause l2d's wasn't even insults bout melt brain...they were just bout how big n bad he is....both of em coulda been better with more thought process...but my vote goes to melt brain
Lt2-opener was wack
melts opener was ok and at least delivered a punch
after which i cant see any true punching by L2
and simply had nothing to test this
runnin round like a man on fire, you'll be 'burned' like ass for hire
what he got, syphlis, naw man, he jus got melt brain pissed
so
multis-?
flow/structure-melt
punches-melt
wordplay-melt
complexity-melt
L2.. i'd say sort out yo lines and deliver them in proper bars, and try to be a bit humorous with the content at least
Melt- i'd say, just dont post it it too much of a poetry form of stanzas, just let the whole verse kind of flow all the way home
overall vote-melt
if anyone voted in my battle can they no hit the voting box as i just added the option in
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Originally Posted by explicitot
^^^^agree
this was one very dumb battle they both maid me feel like this was a waste of time. i think they should not give up but just go back home an work up some new material. holla :stupid2: :Offtopic: :shoot:
well heres the breakdown
flow=melt
multies=not much but i'd go wit melt
meta=melt
structure=tie
punches=close but melt came harder
overall=melt
vote=melt
can you hit my battle in my sig up with a honest vote thanx