Hard niggas

And you liable to see me Dolo, icing the Rolo///
Burner under the Polo, alot of y'all is homos///
Funny style niggas never down with me/////
Type that go to the bathroom, sit down and pee////............................////////What you know about getting shot, letting the drip dry///
Letting the spit fly,/// seeing sparks whiz by///
Putting a M*A*S*H on niggas like Klinger and Horgi///
So soft you smushy,// I blast 'til your shit is gushy///............Right now I'm tryin to charter a jet///..////
Fuck this you whack hit the Panama Canal and i can get a harder connect///..////

just stop. i mean.. please never post again.
are you even trying here? only way to fix that is delete it!
Go read as many posts as possible. read the feed back.. and take the advise they give. look at the good stuff that is pointed out and try doing that stuff when you post.. if you dont do any of that.. take my first request and never post again!

Stop fucking hating my shit wasent bad you must dont know how to read Retarded ass nigga

That was dope playa...you signed yet?

whens ure text album coming our Gawd?....can i copp that..

you the dopest on the site...that M*A*S*H line...i nearly shit my pants dunny..

you got stupid style gawd,...word..

not the dopest player I'am

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Originally Posted by Paid in Full

not the dopest player I'am

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word you both dope..

you should relase a joint text album..with OM's and FL battles...word

style is wierd words didnt hit but the flow was straight keep elevating i wanna see some more shit good luck peace

na i aint signed yet man

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Originally Posted by Evil_Joey

just stop. i mean.. please never post again.
are you even trying here? only way to fix that is delete it!
Go read as many posts as possible. read the feed back.. and take the advise they give. look at the good stuff that is pointed out and try doing that stuff when you post.. if you dont do any of that.. take my first request and never post again!

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Rofl I was bout to tell him to die.

That shit was weak, please elevate ASAP

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Originally Posted by Hurricane Game

And you liable to see me Dolo, icing the Rolo///
Burner under the Polo, alot of y'all is homos///
Funny style niggas never down with me/////
Type that go to the bathroom, sit down and pee////............................////////What you know about getting shot, letting the drip dry///
Letting the spit fly,/// seeing sparks whiz by///
Putting a M*A*S*H on niggas like Klinger and Horgi///
So soft you smushy,// I blast 'til your shit is gushy///............Right now I'm tryin to charter a jet///..////
Fuck this you whack hit the Panama Canal and i can get a harder connect///..////

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wow you must watch M.T.V...


man the future is so dead.

ok let me leave a reply-
either quit or change your whole style here.
Elevate your vocabulary. Use way better
word usage so readers can atleast believe
you have some type of intellect.
Try some indepth meaning , some substence.
Talk about reality on a positive tip something
original nothing stupid, childish and rediculous.

if you don't take my advice then just retire-

What started you to emcee?, you should be slapped twenty damn times by Bruce Lee if you actually wrote this seriously...First of all write something that means something to everybody, everybody dont think of hard niggas..........Listen to real music and try to pick up shit from them, learn...But anyway elevate

uppin this DOPE holy scripture..

im nominating this for legends..

I feel worthless when i read this astonishing, astounding, bang-up, best, breathtaking, cool, crack, dilly, doozie, extravagant, fab, fantastic, fictitious, first class, gone, greatest, groovy, immense, in spades, inconceivable, incredible, legendary, marvelous, mind-blowing, out-of-this-world, outrageous, peachy, phenomenal, primo, prodigious, rad, remarkable, spectacular, striking, stupendous, super, superb, terrific, top drawer, tops, turn-on, unbelievable, unreal, wicked, wondrous DOPE OM..

So wack

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Originally Posted by Hurricane Game

And you liable to see me Dolo, icing the Rolo///
Burner under the Polo, alot of y'all is homos///
Funny style niggas never down with me/////
Type that go to the bathroom, sit down and pee////............................////////What you know about getting shot, letting the drip dry///
Letting the spit fly,/// seeing sparks whiz by///
Putting a M*A*S*H on niggas like Klinger and Horgi///
So soft you smushy,// I blast 'til your shit is gushy///............Right now I'm tryin to charter a jet///..////
Fuck this you whack hit the Panama Canal and i can get a harder connect///..////

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ayt to be specific and sumtimes spit horrific...
this verse your lyrics,sounds like yo flow is finished

ayt i aint gonna carry on, anyway this should be closed for being wack not following the rules and about a thousand other reasons. Read the rules homs, apart from that NO it cant be elevated unless you go to rb help desk and elevate yo shit!

And you liable to see me Dolo, icing the Rolo///
Burner under the Polo, alot of y'all is homos///
Funny style niggas never down with me/////
Type that go to the bathroom, sit down and pee////............................////////What you know about getting shot, letting the drip dry///
Letting the spit fly,/// seeing sparks whiz by///
Putting a M*A*S*H on niggas like Klinger and Horgi///
So soft you smushy,// I blast 'til your shit is gushy///............Right now I'm tryin to charter a jet///..////
Fuck this you whack hit the Panama Canal and i can get a harder connect///..////


I can't fucking believe you dawg who the fuck you think you fooling I ought to give these people the link to that shit you biting off of sheek damn you whack get a life man wtf is wrong with you like ain't nobody gone figure it out or something I going to spare you this one time but remember I watching you

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I can't fucking believe you dawg who the fuck you think you fooling I ought to give these people the link to that shit you biting off of sheek damn you whack get a life man wtf is wrong with you like ain't nobody gone figure it out or something I going to spare you this one time but remember I watching you

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i Can Not belive someone would bite this horrid crap!!!!!!
For get uppin ur skills.. just fuckin shoot your self! :thefinger

yea now i knoe ya niggas iz hating yea dat was a test jus cause im new yall wanna hate and dat wasent even my flow so i cen tell yall hatin now that was sheek loch lyricks so i know know yall hatin on me on some hard shit cause i took a pro's lyricks and his shit is nice so yall haters besides joey

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Originally Posted by Hurricane Game

yea now i knoe ya niggas iz hating yea dat was a test jus cause im new yall wanna hate and dat wasent even my flow so i cen tell yall hatin now that was sheek loch lyricks so i know know yall hatin on me on some hard shit cause i took a pro's lyricks and his shit is nice so yall haters besides joey

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man.. ur lame.. we bitch cuz ur biting people.. thats not hating.. and for god sake if your going to bite someone.. bite some one whos good.. this guy sucked.
and last.. fuckin talk normal.. i mean mispellin shits cool i cant spell even when i try .. and when rhymin word play is cool.. but your takin the text ebonics a bit too far. i mean i do it a little bit dont ad g to ing a lot.. and other little shit but you doing it evry other word. your trying to hard to be cool.

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Originally Posted by Hurricane Game

yea now i knoe ya niggas iz hating yea dat was a test jus cause im new yall wanna hate and dat wasent even my flow so i cen tell yall hatin now that was sheek loch lyricks so i know know yall hatin on me on some hard shit cause i took a pro's lyricks and his shit is nice so yall haters besides joey

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word GOD...your the truth son....word..

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Originally Posted by Hurricane Game

And you liable to see me Dolo, icing the Rolo///
Burner under the Polo, alot of y'all is homos///
Funny style niggas never down with me/////
Type that go to the bathroom, sit down and pee////............................////////What you know about getting shot, letting the drip dry///
Letting the spit fly,/// seeing sparks whiz by///
Putting a M*A*S*H on niggas like Klinger and Horgi///
So soft you smushy,// I blast 'til your shit is gushy///............Right now I'm tryin to charter a jet///..////
Fuck this you whack hit the Panama Canal and i can get a harder connect///..////

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the only thingdats mashed is ur brain i piss on dat trash

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Originally Posted by Murkage

word GOD...your the truth son....word..

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strucutre was way off tune but the wordplay was ight, wouldnt consider it the best but wasnt the worst lol, elevate on the majority of ya skills n jus keep gettin at it, but manily elevater in for god sakes get that strucutre worked on.

lol u lettin RB intimadate u...just a test huh...kill that 1 my man...but anyway it does feel like i heard somewhere before especially the line about sittin down to piss I KNOW i heard that 1...but u started out wit a smooth flow...and then u lost me somewhere in the middle...lyrically umm alright u was goin somewhere for a minute but you fell off...maybe if the piece was longer it would have been better...but just keep elevatin doin ya thing and drop somemore dont let ppl intimidate u my man...control yo own music just dont drop stuff so predictable to where cats can say its bitten write about what u want its yo music but just come with different approaches something that stands out from the rest...1

wut up im new hit it up peace


Im hearin tsunami this, a lil hurricane that,
Natural disaster, but were the ones packin the gat.
From the bay to Iraq, it doesn’t matter where its at,
We're destroying the land and creating corpse stacks.
Its not the world that's killin us but visa versa,
Mother nature never had plans of spreadin a curse on us.
Im droppin bombs, but not weapons of mass destruction,
Spreading evil and corruption, now follow my instruction.
I got heavy utility, spreadin joy and tranquility,
Driven by soul with this God given ability.
This beat is reality, go head and try to battle me
You're not a rattle snake so dont think you can rattle me.
Im not scared to speak the truth the whole truth and nothing but the truth,
So help me God, im reaching out to only you,
For the answers, puttin people in trances,
High on life singin a chorus, intoxicated by dances.

im gonna say DO NOT POST ON THIS SITE UNLESS U HAVE SOMETHING USEFUL OR GOOD TO SAY OR SHOW....THAT SUCKED COMPLETE DICK.......I DONT CARE IF YOU WROTE IT OR NOT....THAT WAS JUST GAY!

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