Crew Battle: Oh Word? vs. Lost Souls
ToTwoToo vs. Spicy_One
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Crew Battle: Oh Word? vs. Lost Souls
ToTwoToo vs. Spicy_One
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You guys agree on line limits. and check in is due today(EST).
Due date for verse is midnight tonight(EST).
Goodluck to both.
ch check! 10 lines..
10 lines? lets make it 12, and im good.........check.......good luck man......
alrite 12 it is..gl
drop somethin good spicy... i wanna see this shit yamean....
had to drop early
Wish we could battle face to face........
Cause its one only a mother could love, its a shame we aint saw it,
cause dude probably so ugly daddy carry that kid pic that come in a wallet...
Ur flow is like "who cares", and ur punches, well they "whatever",
maybe if ya take lessons form me, you might get a lil better...
I will always shine, and always put up some real good lyrical fights,
you...couldnt shine if it were dark, and you had on bright christmas lights....
Ima go easy, its over, and its not really worth typing either,
only time two could get the crowd jumpin, is spittin at a horror movie threatre...
Twos rhymes suck, and nope i dont think i can compete,(lol)
his rhymes is so tired n played, you had the "wake up show" fallin asleep...
You wanted to battle for slips, thinkin we would be petrified,
cause if we were, sorry to tell you, but ur crew woulda died...
~1~
sit on your pine, then watch me lift this kid like bench press
but he wouldnt even reach the top if he sucked at playin tetris
ill pop a cap at your head, like this kid is a jew
asked if he was packed, n he said i styl got a month before i move
hear spicy say hoe hoe hoe, cuz he know ima get him whored
your verse isn't pretty at all, like the type of guys you chase for
ill make him dance all his limbs off, once i start the beat
n when he runnin from gangs, the only time he hustle the streets
he prolly 30 years old, n wack, ugly n then some
how can you live with your self? oh wait he prolly live wit his damn mom
act like a vet, play your role but man you'll never beat me
funny how i put you in a cast, n i aint even got a movie
aint gotta try ;)
spicy- was not feeling your verse. your pucnhes was weak. try 2 make harder punches next time and uses better vocabs. also ur structure was iight, not that good but ok. just elevate more and be more direct and creative.222- pretty ok verse. liked some punches that u throwed at him and ur structure was iight 2. u had better wordin and uses of vocabs.
v/2
uppin 1
uppin 2
Listen u both got some good lines but damn think ur rhymes all the way through this goes to Spicy one not because he's better b/c he was way smoother with shit but both of are wackQuote:
Originally Posted by ToTwoToo
^stfu faggit. uppin 3
^LOL at this idiot. I killed him earlier in a battle.Quote:
Originally Posted by Prettyboy
Cause its one only a mother could love, its a shame we aint saw it,
cause dude probably so ugly daddy carry that kid pic that come in a wallet...
EH
Ur flow is like "who cares", and ur punches, well they "whatever",
maybe if ya take lessons form me, you might get a lil better...
K
I will always shine, and always put up some real good lyrical fights,
you...couldnt shine if it were dark, and you had on bright christmas lights....
OK
Ima go easy, its over, and its not really worth typing either,
only time two could get the crowd jumpin, is spittin at a horror movie threatre...
NO
Twos rhymes suck, and nope i dont think i can compete,(lol)
his rhymes is so tired n played, you had the "wake up show" fallin asleep...
OK
You wanted to battle for slips, thinkin we would be petrified,
cause if we were, sorry to tell you, but ur crew woulda died...
Ehh Finisher
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sit on your pine, then watch me lift this kid like bench press
but he wouldnt even reach the top if he sucked at playin tetris
OK opener
ill pop a cap at your head, like this kid is a jew
asked if he was packed, n he said i styl got a month before i move
OK
hear spicy say hoe hoe hoe, cuz he know ima get him whored
your verse isn't pretty at all, like the type of guys you chase for
ehh
ill make him dance all his limbs off, once i start the beat
n when he runnin from gangs, the only time he hustle the streets
Ok
he prolly 30 years old, n wack, ugly n then some
how can you live with your self? oh wait he prolly live wit his damn mom
No
act like a vet, play your role but man you'll never beat me
funny how i put you in a cast, n i aint even got a movie
Ok finisher
Alright to ok verses. Punches were pretty even. Totwotoo I think took it cause of the flow and overall structure a few of his punches hit a little harder, still pretty close battle.
V/To
uppin 4
had to drop early
Wish we could battle face to face........
Cause its one only a mother could love, its a shame we aint saw it,
cause dude probably so ugly daddy carry that kid pic that come in a wallet...
meh........snuk in off that face to face
Ur flow is like "who cares", and ur punches, well they "whatever",
maybe if ya take lessons form me, you might get a lil better...
oK
I will always shine, and always put up some real good lyrical fights,
you...couldnt shine if it were dark, and you had on bright christmas lights....
OK
Ima go easy, its over, and its not really worth typing either,
only time two could get the crowd jumpin, is spittin at a horror movie threatre...
no.....stretched/ok concept tho
Twos rhymes suck, and nope i dont think i can compete,(lol)
his rhymes is so tired n played, you had the "wake up show" fallin asleep...
OK
You wanted to battle for slips, thinkin we would be petrified,
cause if we were, sorry to tell you, but ur crew woulda died...
IIght closer.......need 2 finish strong
8/10
VS.
sit on your pine, then watch me lift this kid like bench press
but he wouldnt even reach the top if he sucked at playin tetris
nice
ill pop a cap at your head, like this kid is a jew
asked if he was packed, n he said i styl got a month before i move
OK.........fix structure up
hear spicy say hoe hoe hoe, cuz he know ima get him whored
your verse isn't pretty at all, like the type of guys you chase for
Meh
ill make him dance all his limbs off, once i start the beat
n when he runnin from gangs, the only time he hustle the streets
Ok
he prolly 30 years old, n wack, ugly n then some
how can you live with your self? oh wait he prolly live wit his damn mom
No/ again fix dat structure
act like a vet, play your role but man you'll never beat me
funny how i put you in a cast, n i aint even got a movie
Ok closer
8.5/10
Overall pretty close battle. but i think too had a little better punches that edged this vote for him.... spicey same to u most was on point but i thought u failed 2 come as hard.. above is what i thought so here's the breakdown
MY score card (by points)
1 point for good comment
.5 point for Meh comment
0 points bad comment
multipy total by 2 for a out of 10 score
LINK
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=228953
tutu won that better punches and shit like that
how do i battle
Spicy:
-you did alright but you wouldve done a whole lot betta if you just would've got off ya own dick...................nobody cares what you'll do to'em cuz this is the internent more then likely you will neva see this person but in damn near all of your lines you had an I or Me no punches, no witty wordplay, just a lil good at the structure overall 5/10
ToTwoToo:
-Pretty decent but the only thing i didnt like was that gangsta line thas kinda played you did at least punch and diss'd him and wasn't stuck on yourself so you got points for that structure was iight no witty wordplay for real it was just a decent verse nothing too special from both overall 7/10
v:-----:Two
aaa ya it the boy wit the guns/i even kill ya mums/put um in yo lungs/then i cut off ya tonges/no beef wit me/ill leve ya sleepin g/so peacefully/yo sell that shit in the city of tampa/ yea a big beat down what us niggas hand ya/
stfu fag^, uppin 5
Spicy - Decent verse, but that was it... You need to work on punches... Make them harder and make them connect... Feel me? Also, work on personals as well as self-glory... You can't put too much, to any self glory in your battles, especially when your not as great as you think... Decent verse though... Elevate!
222 - I've seen better from you, but like you said, didn't even try... Aiight punches and what not... I don't really need to comment on your verse, I know you can do better, but you did better than he did... Good drop.
Vote/ 222
Sig it! Thanx!