Eddy Ft. MC Pussy Eater - Concrete thoughts.

Eddy

lost all my faith, lacking the enduringness to escape..
never on one place, my life is just moving in curved shapes
stuck and trying to move, with nothing to prove..
.. yet everything to improve
but it was not something simple it couldnt be precooked
& it became harder every breathe i took
shocked and i looked up ..`my life flashed by as in a 2 paged book
without an ending, my life was depending
on all those oppurtunities i never took!
my eyes closed, tears struggled
.. to find there way
i cant stay, my ship tryed to sail, but stayed at bay..
having these visions focused on my opponent..
but standing stunned and proponent
..just to observe the purity not undiluted with emotions
the duel moves with slow motions.. moves in directions of every kind
..but the notion of disguise is associated with disaster from my own mind

MC Pussy Eater

Life’s do-or-die, n lately i been contemplatin’ suicide…
…between you-and-I, - I feel like im pursuin’-a-lie,
Its like my every effort-is-thwarted, im out my depth-n-exhausted…
…and I don’t think I’ll feel at ease, until my death-is-awarded.
Theres prolly a method-toward-this, madness-n-insanity…
…but I cant go on livin’, in a world of sadness-and-tragedy,
Were living in a Mad World, y’all have heard-the-song,
Some squirm-along, while others choose to burn-the-bong,
I learned-the-wrong way, life aint what its cracked up-to-be…
…Im a father deprived of his child, cos the mother won custody.
It sucks-to-be, trapped here. This aint life, Its-enslavement…
… but I’ll make my Concrete Thoughts known,

When my face hits-the-pavement.

*Jumps From Top Of Apartment Building*

Fix up the 'ftont' error at the beginnning. nice verse bro.

This was a very nice piece, i was really into this collabo. Edicuis came in very deep, i liked the vocab and the way you rhymed . Mc Pussy Eater came in with deep rhymes to and the last few lines were dope-very true!! Overall i liked this piece and is one of the best collabs i seen on here. Not too long not too short, good 1. piece

word

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This was sick. Both of you came raw and i muzt admit it was hood.


eddoo

stuck and trying to move, with nothing to prove..
.. yet everything to improve


and mc you killed it. dope flow.

Its like my every effort-is-thwarted, im out my depth-n-exhausted…
…and I don’t think I’ll feel at ease, until my death-is-awarded.
Theres prolly a method-toward-this, madness-n-insanity…
…but I cant go on livin’, in a world of sadness-and-tragedy,


woo dem boyz got heat. return the favor on Feel The Soul

swalla bak

Good song about life and u guys came good even though MC pussy had more vocab in his then the other dude...Some emotion was there and the topic was ok...I think it was overall a decent piece and worth a read...GJ

^lmao stupid idiot.

MC, get to me on aim or pm .. ill help you elevate further.. ; ) you got some potential.
Let me know if your interested.

Pz.

This was a little good piece right here, nice vocabulary from both of you guys but i like MC Pussy Eater's because he just come up there....dope

I enjoyed you'r also Eddy, but i think you could have came better than just a basic rhyme scheme and at some points i was looking for it but overrall i enjoyed this piece and it would be nice to see you guys hook up again. But eddy came real nice as i reread it and you know, the dude had a nice little story going on, so mc...you guys should mos def....hook up!


Could you do me one little favor and just close this battle for me

all i need is one vote and its over


http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=220755


Thank You and Have a blessed day

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Originally Posted by Edicius

^lmao stupid idiot.

MC, get to me on aim or pm .. ill help you elevate further.. ; ) you got some potential.
Let me know if your interested.

Pz.

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yeah im here to learn. ima jump on every collab i fucking can to make my name known and earn their respect.

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elevate the text dorks...lol...j/p

liked this alot, edi's verse was nice, liked the with everything to improve line..nice topic and both verses were structered well...edis verse was more simplicstic in patteren, but in my opinon, had superior content...the other dude came with the multis and the flow...

overall solid text drop..

return the favor thugmania
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=221846

Pretty cool guys, pretty cool. I dug the topic you rhymed about and found the ending pretty twisted. You had a good mixture of styles between Eddy's more abstract rhymes and Pussy-Eater's (lol) multi driven style. I think you could've expanded the story a little but the imagery and vocab was there. A dope little piece guys.

Keep on posting.

Eddy I haven't seen any of your writing in a long time, nice to see you've maintained that same style that we all love. I like the abstract aspect of your writing, it's something I enjoy reading. You wrote well here, I enjoyed it.

Pussy Eater you also wrote well. Yours seemed to have more of an audio feel to it, and a slightly different style from Eddy's, but what can you expect from a collab in such a style. I haven't seen your writing before, or maybe I have without realising it, what with name changes and all, but it was good.

If you could leave feed on "No More Than a Story" I'd appreciate it... Links in my sig...

thanks you :^)

i cant realy see any point to it for the most part.. the second verse had a bit more emotion and some played out lines

goodbye

damnit!, dope piece from both sides, the style of both writers matched perfectly, the flow was consitent on both sides, and the imagery was cool, I especially liked the last line, that whole thoughts hitting concete as my face hits the pavement wordplay was dope

good OM and a really good collabo, will wait and see if there are more

Peace

Rofl at Eddy getting outshone by MC Pussy Eater!