"Broke for Jesus Christ or for Me?"

they call it blind faith but I see perfectly
all the things behind the scenes; brainwashing & hurting dreams
anxious to see whose offerings greater
they give to God all they have, not caring if there’s suffering later
and not a single nerve on them’s tense
cause some where down the line, faith replaced common sense
these christians are a bit too odd
they work hard to earn money, and are quick to give it to God
but nothing that’s mishandled is fair
a man’s mind is fragile; deceived easily when handled with care
nearby and afar there are threats
it’s always hunting season, when those with faith are the target
you call it God’s word as I mock it
the bible is just a tool, that’s simply used to get in your pockets
see I’m a pastor and the rumors are true
I make more leading a church, than doctors and movie stars do
it really is the truth that we fear
I don’t work for money, other people work and give me theirs
and nothing could be more funny
all you Christians are broke, while I’m fixing my life with your money

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I'm not Christian, but better a broke Christian than an ignorant Muslim

I'm not muslim, not religious at all. but yea your right.

I used to be a pastor of a christian church though.

oh word, i thought you were tryn be racist and shit, i understand what youre sayin but, i jus dont think theres any reason to judge one group when its made up of tons of individuals wit tons of unique reasons, I honestly liked the peice but i jus dont feel for ass holes, but i take back what i said, i understood your peice i jus aint understand you direction, but word, lookin for more drops. again, dont get me wrong, i like the peice, jus got a lil confused, keep droppin ill be lookin for it

p.s. ima nominate this for hall of fame

thanks alot man. appreciated.

well hell I'm am christian and i take that shit real seriously. If ur broke in every way as a Christian, ur either being tested or u just ain't doin something write with ya life. u can be a aetheist if u choose 2 be I can't stop u, but don't disrespect my Father. If u don't speak 2 Him He won't help u. God wants u to be rich and have all the things u want. but ask urself something. If u got all u wanted and more, would u be satisfied? hell no.

k, cool.

i really liked tha whole concept of it and ur structure was really great 2 keep doin ya thang man

gracias.

it was pretty interesting read, i'm a christian I see what your trying say....but at least i'm broke with salvation..

niceness.

I don't agree with what you're saying but props for the writing skill portion of it.

I liked it...It seemed kind of nice...good concepts good flow....structure sort of bugged me to read...that one line long one line short one line long thing....Didn't like that...try a different structure next time...Your vocab was awsome...This seems pre-written...was it pre-written? Did it just kind of Pop into your head or did you try to write about it, cause it seemed kind of random...Good Lyrics go...Peace....................Keep elevating and writing more

I personally think that gods an asshole

I mean if he is so powerful and can create the world in 7 days then why the fuck do we have to thank him so much

If he has so much power then i think hes obligated to do the shit he does without us thanking him every meal, before we go to sleep, and every sunday.
Now either gods a little control freak or some shits been misinterpreted



Also one thing that really makes me sick is when i see that 9 out of 10 churches have a painting of jesus and hes white
....Who.. the ... fuck are you to portray him as white
thats like a muhfuckin KKK thing, what you think that because jesus was good he must have been white cuz white is good

man im sick of these fuckin racist churches

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Originally Posted by ND

I personally think that gods an asshole

I mean if he is so powerful and can create the world in 7 days then why the fuck do we have to thank him so much

If he has so much power then i think hes obligated to do the shit he does without us thanking him every meal, before we go to sleep, and every sunday.
Now either gods a little control freak or some shits been misinterpreted



Also one thing that really makes me sick is when i see that 9 out of 10 churches have a painting of jesus and hes white
....Who.. the ... fuck are you to portray him as white
thats like a muhfuckin KKK thing, what you think that because jesus was good he must have been white cuz white is good

man im sick of these fuckin racist churches

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woh,

I Think this piece has potential, it was an ayt piece. You done good, the whole concept of it is what i was feeling. You got potential some deep thoughts and facts quoted in this. Although i am a christian there is alot of questions i have ask and not enough answers i have got. But keep it up... :drink:

Allah your last line was a lie. You aren't making any money if you're poor also.

And this was bias as hell, but atleast it was written pretty well.

God helped me out fine, thank you.

I agree with the idea that SOME churches are just conspiracys tryin to get your cash
(other churches are just confused as hell)

I think all churches are confused.

actually everyone I been to is.. lol

there is NO perfect church.. but thanks to all.

I feel like you did something different with this piece that no other poet or rapper has done on this site at least I haven't seen it you talked about religon and I think you understood the feedback that you were going to receive aout this piece don't you. Anyway I like this piece being that you used to be a pastor you showed credibility for your actions and words in this piece and that something you got to have when writing somehthing like this because otherwise people will just blow you off this is a good piece but you should elevate though a little and this piece would have gotten my nomination for open mic hall of fame I wish you much sucess man with your writing

this rap has been the best rap i hav read all day 10/10

Lol, cool drop man – a little controversial, but you kept it short and sweet. I like the style you took with this, reminded me of Diss Kabob with the short setups, but it was cool none the less. Good little read. Props bro.

I feel ya on the white thing.

Yo, man u can rhyme by why the fuck ya using islam as a front for ya name, use a propa name and rhyme.