10 lines
u spit 1st
hs rules
no feeding
500 posts 2 vote
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10 lines
u spit 1st
hs rules
no feeding
500 posts 2 vote
Check.............................................
Why dont we just post our verses in like 30-40 min?
yea i 4got 2 but dat shyt.............30mins 2 drop...........
Ight let dis be my check not the other one............
Seems no 1 likes u......U said u were leaving,wat u got was jus a fuck you
Only whyte boy must miss u...Cuz he always on ya dick as if he was ya boo!
My rhymes are phat....Yours seems like nothing........Thin as damn twig.....
And da rest is all bad comments...Just like da Feed back you got for ya Sig!
Havent you ever go to church...U should,ya punches like commitin a sin...
I see you usually go for least 16 lines......Why?You cant even drop a ok 10!
U must "recycle" your rhymes...Dey from ya ol battles recycled like a garbage bin
If voters were like the salvation...U should b happy 4 da voters gradin dis ez win!
Time for you to accept ya sentence....I won dis "trial" So git ready for da L....
Only time you'd ever see your own "bars"..............Is if this fag went to jail!!!....
check
Seems no 1 likes u......U said u were leaving,wat u got was jus a Fuk YOU
Only*wyte boy must miss u...Cuz he always on u dick as if he was ya boo!
My rhymes are phat....Yours seems like nothing........Thin as damn twig.....
And da rest is all bad comments...Just like da Feed back you got for ya Sig!
Havent you ever go to church...U should,ya punches like commitin a sin...
I see you usually go for least 16 lines......Why?You cant even drop a ok 10!
U must "recycle" ur rhymes...Dey from u ol battles recycled like a garbage bin
If votrs were like da salvation...U should b happy 4 da voters gradin dis ez win!
Time for u to accept ya sentence....I won dis "trial" So git ready for da L
Only time you'd ever see your own "bars"..........Is if this fag went to jail!
My bad man i forgot to add da links....
*Wyte boy is most of da time on his dick and shit....Check unleashed talent as proof.
ima put a end to the legacy, oh word? i'm battling the last of da best
naw, i'm battling ass at it's best, the punches el put u to rest
insisted on takin my spot in crew battle, then ya ass ko'd
pre-schoolers can fukk wit ryhmes, they soft like play-doh
ya bar's get repoed, thug is as plain as a mac wit out the cheezy
i open ya chest, pull out ya lungs, so i can help u breath eazy
after this battle you'll bitch like, "his votes they wasn't explaining"
P-t, for one bar u give yourself a workout, call it physical training
listen, so if u got one eye open and one eye closed
that mean's your the one eye chose, the one eye froze
my falt how it should look
ima put a end to the legacy, oh word? i'm battling the last of da best
naw, i'm battling ass at it's best, the punches el put u to rest
insisted on takin my spot in crew battle*, then ya ass ko'd
pre-schoolers can fukk wit ryhmes, they soft like play-doh
ya bar's get repoed, thug is as plain as a mac wit out the cheezy
i open ya chest, pull out ya lungs, so i can help u breath eazy
after this battle you'll bitch like, "his votes they wasn't explaining"
P-t, for one bar u give yourself a workout, call it physical training
listen, so if u got one eye open and one eye closed
that mean's your the one eye chose, the one eye froze*
*i was suposed to battle vaskez......he insisted he go and got ko'd
* 1st bar......look at his sig
*i=eye
No problem man......Had mistakes too....up...dis battles title shoulda said"hot battle"...lol.......
My rhymes are phat....Yours seems like nothing........Thin as damn twig.....
And da rest is all bad comments...Just like da Feed back you got for ya Sig!
Havent you ever go to church...U should,ya punches like commitin a sin...
I see you usually go for least 16 lines......Why?You cant even drop a ok 10!
vs.
after this battle you'll bitch like, "his votes they wasn't explaining"
P-t, for one bar u give yourself a workout, call it physical training
Rizzo-u had an ok opener but don't talk about u gonna kill some one or put them 2 rest. u had no good punches only the one that i pulled out. that was decent. u wasn't direct homie, had some s/g 2 there. be more creative with ur verse, ur vocabs was and i saw that u tryed wodplay but was gay and wack. come hard nexttime. Plain T-u had a better verse, u dissed him more, and had better personals 2, u seemed more creative and had ok punches 2 ru verse 2. i felt u came harder then rizzo.
v/p
ima put a end to the legacy, oh word? i'm battling the last of da best
naw, i'm battling ass at it's best, the punches el put u to rest
insisted on takin my spot in crew battle, then ya ass ko'd
pre-schoolers can fukk wit ryhmes, they soft like play-doh
ya bar's get repoed, thug is as plain as a mac wit out the cheezy
i open ya chest, pull out ya lungs, so i can help u breath eazy
after this battle you'll bitch like, "his votes they wasn't explaining"
P-t, for one bar u give yourself a workout, call it physical training
listen, so if u got one eye open and one eye closed
that mean's your the one eye chose, the one eye froze
VS
nothing
sorry but i didnt like plains structure and wordplay at all i couuldnt harly understand it
rizzo i like urs it was hot and u killed him with the punches even though i could barely get at wat he was sayin
vote/riz
good job to both.........1
Are you serious dorshe.....Thats clearly a hate vote becuz even rizzo will admit that he even understand it.....Your just mad cuz you lost against me cuz i got your ass dqued......Your an asswipe......I should git you banneed...........up......
nah for real i aint mad i really think he won if u really want me to get into fuckin details then i will
Punches - P
Flow - Rizzo
Structure - Rizzo
Personals - P
Wordplay - P
This was a really close battle but I think Plain Thug had better punches and just a better verse.
v/Plain Thug
Quote:
Originally Posted by Streets
:wtf: are u talking bouti aint talk bout killin nobdy.......and rest was a metaphore..........did u really read my verse??........i should get dat dq'd.......but w/e
Uppin #1
Uppin dis......C'mon peeps dont sleep me and rizzo will git to your links.....500 posts to vote.....
Rise.............................................. .
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=227790 Vote up then <===lol
rizzo.. wow, i already see elevation from the last verse I saw you post (which i think was last week). Definitely about 5x better.. keep up. However, you can still do better.. but this time the verse was okay, had some ok thoughts for punches, just need reword.. and some wordplay, but the closer didn't work.
plain.. not bad, not great either.. nothing that stood out too much.. some okay concepts, but if worded differently could've been alot harder.. the wording messed the flow a bit as well, but it was decent. Slightly better punches...... but close battle guys. For this...
v / plain
keep up guys.
v-Rizzo
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had an overall harder verse and actually threw punches and used wordplay.....plain thug was weak all the way around yo...how the fuck you 22-5??????lmfao...expand yo vocab nigga!!!!...
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overall...
Rizzo-7/10
Plain-3/10
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v-Rizzo
Upping #2
yo im tryin to find some people to vote on me n dutchmasters battle it in frontlines near the top n i know u got more than 500posts to vote so will u hit it up.......vote honestly............1
My rhymes are phat....Yours seems like nothing........Thin as damn twig.....
And da rest is all bad comments...Just like da Feed back you got for ya Sig!
Havent you ever go to church...U should,ya punches like commitin a sin...
I see you usually go for least 16 lines......Why?You cant even drop a ok 10!
vs.
after this battle you'll bitch like, "his votes they wasn't explaining"
P-t, for one bar u give yourself a workout, call it physical training
v/p
yo hoop up at my battles and giove us some votes.. !!
pain vs white out
pain vs lost soul
pain vs antuan
pain vs venwel
be ez
Pa!n
My rhymes are phat....Yours seems like nothing........Thin as damn twig.....
And da rest is all bad comments...Just like da Feed back you got for ya Sig!
Havent you ever go to church...U should,ya punches like commitin a sin...
I see you usually go for least 16 lines......Why?You cant even drop a ok 10!
vs
after this battle you'll bitch like, "his votes they wasn't explaining"
P-t, for one bar u give yourself a workout, call it physical training
rizzo- decent verse had the one quotable line above but nothing else really stood out to me......ur closer was okay but i felt u couldve worded it better.....ur opener had an okay personal....but it wasnt that original.........Plain- i thought u had the better verse overall.......u had those two quotable lines at the top........u had more consistency and better personals.....i also thought u had nicer punches
v/plain
Punches - P
Flow - Rizzo
Structure - Rizzo
Personals - P
Wordplay - Both
Close battle as hell both drop'd decent i like how Rizzo used the crew names for wordplay i was feel'n it but Punches hit harder for Plain good job from both its good to see that people still no how to battle not like these noob as niggas like King Kritik and shit lmao
v/Plain Thug
Votes DQd
close battle, i honestly think plain midve took this by a hair, cuz he came less wahck, i cant say he came doper cuz neither of you came dope, plain just had a little better flow, and a better idea of what attempting of a personal or a diss is...close battle, shitty battle as well.
v/p.
Plain-Thug
Seems no 1 likes u......U said u were leaving,wat u got was jus a fuck you
Only whyte boy must miss u...Cuz he always on ya dick as if he was ya boo!
No bad opener
My rhymes are phat....Yours seems like nothing........Thin as damn twig.....
And da rest is all bad comments...Just like da Feed back you got for ya Sig!
OK personal
Havent you ever go to church...U should,ya punches like commitin a sin...
I see you usually go for least 16 lines......Why?You cant even drop a ok 10!
Good
U must "recycle" your rhymes...Dey from ya ol battles recycled like a garbage bin
If voters were like the salvation...U should b happy 4 da voters gradin dis ez win!
ok
Time for you to accept ya sentence....I won dis "trial" So git ready for da L....
Only time you'd ever see your own "bars"..............Is if this fag went to jail!!!....
No bad closure
Vs
Rizzo
ima put a end to the legacy, oh word? i'm battling the last of da best
naw, i'm battling ass at it's best, the punches el put u to rest
No bad opener
insisted on takin my spot in crew battle*, then ya ass ko'd
pre-schoolers can fukk wit ryhmes, they soft like play-doh
Good lol
ya bar's get repoed, thug is as plain as a mac wit out the cheezy
i open ya chest, pull out ya lungs, so i can help u breath eazy
Cheezy? id say so no
after this battle you'll bitch like, "his votes they wasn't explaining"
P-t, for one bar u give yourself a workout, call it physical training
Ok
listen, so if u got one eye open and one eye closed
that mean's your the one eye chose, the one eye froze*
Wack.
Both came good. Seen better from plain thug. Strucutre was good for rizzo ok for plain. Punches were good both ways an so were personals. this was a close battle. It comes down to the breakdown
Breakdown
punches: Tie
personals: plain
flow: Tie
Strucutre: Rizzo
creativity: Tie
complex: Tie
v/ PLain thug because i felt that he had 1 more better punch then rizzo. Cuz rizzo had a couple of played lines like the chezzy one. He forced it to rhyme. no hate
Omg Plain Thug Killed His Ass He Had Punches And Evrything Rizzo Came Weak His Shit Didnt Reaally Flow No Multies So It Was Preety Wack