Another bitch saying my name(witeboi ace)

yo retard/
ur lyrics is so haphazard(disorganized)/
i can destroy your whole image wit half a bar/
u better remmember why u here so dont talk back to pa/
ill hit u in ur jowl below ur jaw/
u dont compair to me/
my vocabulary murders the dictionary/
battle me it will be man slaughtter involuntary/
my malice is kinda scary when alone in the dark/
before u send shots at me u need to get u and ur moms out the trailer park/
i dont mean to take it out of context but if u didnt notice/
ill send shots at dude head that will damage small areas of the brain and spinal cord like he suffer from multiple sclerosis/



my vocabulary murders the dictionary/

work on ur structure take the / at the end.......worrdplay elevate to basic....................overall 4 out of 10.......
drop 2 links so it wont close........

and by the way who were u dissin??

some bitch that said my name

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my vocabulary murders the dictionary/

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"right" *sarcasticly*

you need to work on your basic rap skillz never mind the really special ones, to me you need improvment with your uneven lines and choppy flow, thew rhymes still descent, vocab and complexity seriously needs work, topic, again wasnt interesting, work on those things and you'll be a pretty good rapper, keep elevating

kool

yea, no offense what i said about the right, you just need to elevate, i have been in your position before...peace homie

man dont be messin up with white boi as I cantell he owned your ass , I may not be that good but hey, Im pretty ace is better. peace out dawg no hate

since u on his dick so hard wont me and u have a battle(set it uP or shut the fuck up)

yo max the mom fucker, dont come to this site and cause shit in a fuckin open mic forum, take it to front linesm ,god!!

LMFAO my god so you guys are so lame. and scribble im not a mom fucker. I only did yours but its no harm. PEACE

bitch

yea, too bad that was michael jackson you stupid fuck, my mom is too good for you

wodup you need to work on your rapping skills and how you put words together and when you wright out a rhyme take out / cuz that just prooves how new you are to the game

no hate peace...

thanx for the tip

dude you dont have a mom. I killed her and now shes burning in hell.

sure, i just saw her 1 minutes ago and plus you dont know where the fuck i live ,you stupid shit

i got something ima bout to put down about that bitch.he talk to much this aint no site for chit chat.this is where niggas slurg there lyrics and get critisized

16 line minimum.