LyricalGangster ~vs~ -IsIs-

10-16 lines
1 hour
blind spit
i will check in after u do
house rules

aight yo. good luck i need like 5 mins to check in, gotta do shit right now.

aight this my check in man..........

iight then check in .................................................

predicting the future , well heres ur mortuary brochure
seen ur rhymes b4 u got no structure , Isis is a tru cutter
my rhymes smooth like butter , ur rhymes are jus stutters
them punches u spit better off in the gutter , old man go putter
u dont believe in styles cuz u got none , in yo family u shunned
hurry now , when u were born yo mom asked for a refund
ghost in a shell.............. rhymes better off burnin in hell
cant get a real girl , always hittin a .................dryspell
everytime he trys gettin wit a bitch in a club she says farewell
this battle will finish everylast one of ur brain cells
my rhymes get me to mansions urs get ya livin in hotels
while i get fans Isis rises hell , reign my ass , since u started u fell
heres popo's little angel , never wud do a thing wrong, singin barnie theme song
acting gangster eatin chinese wong tong and believin in king kong
rhymes better up somebodys ass like a man thong
everytime he drives in the hood my pops says now boi run along




done peace

Now I Will speak its simple I must be loose,
Ima stand straight face to face with you, and cut off all your pimp juice,
Lyricalgansta, trippin off his own hype, tryin to battle Ice,
but only droppin shit, when he types,
Inspite of height, and the phatness of his weight,
im stompin on shit he walks on, his wackness depicts his fate,
his chaos has been defined, so clearly hell be suicidal after this line,
in due time, ill get mine, hell be fed his,
but speak clearly, when you try to spit against the IsIs,
incline for elevation, is what you need to do,
style is wack, faded, and up for discontinual review,
so before you continue to, drop your rhymes in the limit due,
think about who your battlin, and what ive done to you.
stop lying now, foretold that your style isnt messin with my tao,
so how, can you contemplate on fuckin with a phenix,
swoop in, screamin, and lyrically remove this gangstas penis.

good luck man.. pretty dope drop you did.

iight lets get some votes in this bitch

lets get some votes in here.. Uppin' #1

lyrical gansta,. ur ish was so so,. got tired of the comparison in every line


Isis,. well structured battle, not murder but definately got the job done.

vote - Isis

I have to give this one to lyrical. his 1st couple of lines were weak but then he really cam correct. IsIs cut of your pimp juice line was good....you were strong in the middle but finished kind of weak...all in all good battle...

nevamind cant vote not enough post...good battle though

Uppin for votes, cmon people!! its not that hard to vote, take 3 mins of your time to vote on this.

Cmon people vote on this shit!! uppin #3!!!

predicting the future , well heres ur mortuary brochure
seen ur rhymes b4 u got no structure , Isis is a tru cutter
weak ass opener.................
my rhymes smooth like butter , ur rhymes are jus stutters
them punches u spit better off in the gutter , old man go putter
not feelin it...............
u dont believe in styles cuz u got none , in yo family u shunned
hurry now , when u were born yo mom asked for a refund
eh...not really...........
ghost in a shell.............. rhymes better off burnin in hell
cant get a real girl , always hittin a .................dryspell
dont connect.......kinda weak
everytime he trys gettin wit a bitch in a club she says farewell
this battle will finish everylast one of ur brain cells
naw........cmon mannnnn
my rhymes get me to mansions urs get ya livin in hotels
while i get fans Isis rises hell , reign my ass , since u started u fell
eh, probably ur best line
heres popo's little angel , never wud do a thing wrong, singin barnie theme song
acting gangster eatin chinese wong tong and believin in king kong
noooooo............
rhymes better up somebodys ass like a man thong
everytime he drives in the hood my pops says now boi run along
weak closer...........
1/10 - extremely weak verse, not many punches, jus rhymin.....pick it up

Now I Will speak its simple I must be loose,
Ima stand straight face to face with you, and cut off all your pimp juice,
weak opener...............
Lyricalgansta, trippin off his own hype, tryin to battle Ice,
but only droppin shit, when he types,
eh, ok, no structure..................
Inspite of height, and the phatness of his weight,
im stompin on shit he walks on, his wackness depicts his fate,
dont connect, weak................
his chaos has been defined, so clearly hell be suicidal after this line,
missin a line?? ^^??
in due time, ill get mine, hell be fed his,
but speak clearly, when you try to spit against the IsIs,
self glory bullshit..............
incline for elevation, is what you need to do,
style is wack, faded, and up for discontinual review,
eh,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ok.................
so before you continue to, drop your rhymes in the limit due,
think about who your battlin, and what ive done to you.
what have you done to him?? Nothin!............
stop lying now, foretold that your style isnt messin with my tao,
nuffin rhymin with this line.........
so how, can you contemplate on fuckin with a phenix,
swoop in, screamin, and lyrically remove this gangstas penis.
weak closer..........
2/10 - you came slightly harder, but ur verse was kinda weak, can elevate some
v/isis

vote on the battle in my sig ~1~ pz

i hate this....

lyrical-
not a bad verse. Worek on a few things, get rid of using a rhyme for more than 1 bar. Mutlies are cool, but thats annoying and dumb. You came with some basic threats that were gay but you also had some goodwordplay and personals...
isis-
uh... you had a lot of filler.... the closer pensis thing was really gay. I hate to say this but you came almost whack. you didnt use any good wordplay with this kid. and look at his name... you didnt land any solid punches....
v/ LG...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=226984 :)

u guys had about the same style LOL........ this is F L and ...... well oh well...... i can't tell who really came harder cuz there was no complexity nor anything having me think about anything..... basics, but i felt isis more... overall i think u cats are pretty much pared... felt like lyrical was spitting more. Get some puns, and some hard punches in ya flow,,, strike ya foes with that intellectual ..........


u dont believe in styles cuz u got none , in yo family u shunned
hurry now , when u were born yo mom asked for a refund
ghost in a shell.............. rhymes better off burnin in hell
cant get a real girl , always hittin a .................dryspell


vs.


Inspite of height, and the phatness of his weight,
im stompin on shit he walks on, his wackness depicts his fate,
so how, can you contemplate on fuckin with a phenix,
swoop in, screamin, and lyrically remove this gangstas penis.


v/ isis ....... the lines he had wore a lil' more complex, Lyrical i bet u would do real good on Audio

uppin #4

both of you did ight but isis had better punches more readible wordplay
and basicly i liked his rhymes better


vote: isis

oh nenver mind i dont have 200 post but you guys aint really good enough to say people need 200 post thats real stupid your not kampboy now kampboy is worth 200 post

yo isis good verse and every thing i liked some of ur lines but it was kinda a week verse

lyrical gangsta good verse too i liked more of your lines i no u cooda came harder then that tho

vote lyrical

yo vote honestly on the battles in my sig aiight peace

meh... thanks for the honest vote. but i cant hit up your battles right now sorry i will hit em up though.

lyrical he takes this one cuz he had better flow and rhymes the other guy u had punches i rate ur verse 6/10 lyricals7/10 close battle but i voted fairly and there it is lyrical

200 post shit man damn this ones close though

nuttin

vs.

im stompin on shit he walks on, his wackness depicts his fate,
his chaos has been defined, so clearly hell be suicidal after this line,

lyrical had a wack verse, weak punches, wack flow. structure was ok. but u didnt have too much complexity, ur vocab was ok. i didnt really see wordplay. overall elevate. isis you came definitely better than him. you came wit better punches, and come more consistent.

v/isis

uppin in here lets get this closed

peace

gangsta dude i hoope that pick isnt really u u look like lil scrappy

good thing u can rap or u wouldnt be very cool at all

u can battle but im better so if u wanna battle set it up

more votes u need 200 post to vote so get at it yall , peace niggaz

leave a link and I will hit it up , fairly

yo ill hit up this battle if u hit up one of mine in frontlines...ill be back if sum1 votes........1

lyrical-
not a bad verse. Worek on a few things, get rid of using a rhyme for more than 1 bar. Mutlies are cool, but thats annoying and dumb. You came with some basic threats that were gay but you also had some goodwordplay and personals...
isis-
uh... you had a lot of filler.... the closer pensis thing was really gay. I hate to say this but you came almost whack. you didnt use any good wordplay with this kid. and look at his name... you didnt land any solid punches....
v/ LG...

predicting the future , well heres ur mortuary brochure
seen ur rhymes b4 u got no structure , Isis is a tru cutter
my rhymes smooth like butter , ur rhymes are jus stutters
them punches u spit better off in the gutter , old man go putter
u dont believe in styles cuz u got none , in yo family u shunned
hurry now , when u were born yo mom asked for a refund
ghost in a shell.............. rhymes better off burnin in hell
cant get a real girl , always hittin a .................dryspell

vs.

Now I Will speak its simple I must be loose,
Ima stand straight face to face with you, and cut off all your pimp juice,
Lyricalgansta, trippin off his own hype, tryin to battle Ice,
but only droppin shit, when he types,
Inspite of height, and the phatness of his weight,
im stompin on shit he walks on, his wackness depicts his fate,
his chaos has been defined, so clearly hell be suicidal after this line,
in due time, ill get mine, hell be fed his,
but speak clearly, when you try to spit against the IsIs,

both was a ok verse, good battle on both sides but i thought lyrical won cuz of better structure. this was a close battle, punches was both, personals was both, but lyrical also had better wordin and understandable verse. easy 2 read. flow was both and creativity was both. so L won for structure and wordin.

v/l

ill get at this later............................................

Lyrical took this...He had more multis and *fair* structure...Flowed with ease...Not many new punches...Same for Isis...This battle was almost right down the middle...But Lyrical came out with a litte bit more punches than Isis...Wasn't an enjoyable level...THE BREAKDOWN!!!

Structure: Lyrical
Flow: Tie
Punches: Lyrical
Enjoyability: Lyrical...(at a very low level)
Creativity: Isis

V/ Lyrical...Better verse all around..
Flow:

iight uppin on this , lets get some more votes , u need 200 post to vote on this

uppin #5 cmon people lets get some votes. 200+ to vote.

predicting the future , well heres ur mortuary brochure
seen ur rhymes b4 u got no structure , Isis is a tru cutter
my rhymes smooth like butter , ur rhymes are jus stutters
them punches u spit better off in the gutter , old man go putter
u dont believe in styles cuz u got none , in yo family u shunned
hurry now , when u were born yo mom asked for a refund
ghost in a shell.............. rhymes better off burnin in hell
cant get a real girl , always hittin a .................dryspell

vs.

Now I Will speak its simple I must be loose,
Ima stand straight face to face with you, and cut off all your pimp juice,
Lyricalgansta, trippin off his own hype, tryin to battle Ice,
but only droppin shit, when he types,
Inspite of height, and the phatness of his weight,
im stompin on shit he walks on, his wackness depicts his fate,
his chaos has been defined, so clearly hell be suicidal after this line,
in due time, ill get mine, hell be fed his,
but speak clearly, when you try to spit against the IsIs

v/ IsIs

cuz he had a betta all around verse and ta me just more creativity, l-gangsta urs was good too so it wuz kinda hard but in da end IsIs took dis

isis-nice verse wit stron punches and a nice flow, ure lines were a little too stretched and thats the only thin i didnt likeabout your battle verse other than u won

lyrical-u had a nice verse too, the thin i didnt like about it was that u made comparisons in every line. u need to spread ya shit out so we dont become bored of readin it.

vote/isis