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verse 30 minutes after that
you spit first nigga
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10 lines
no hate votes
no unexplianed vote
check in due in 30 minutes
verse 30 minutes after that
you spit first nigga
Chekk aight mayne.....
I blast tha hood back to the past and herb-dissa/
It figures he thinks he's better when he makes his words-bigger/
Acts hard but he's a guy-that-lacks-cock/
Tryin' to hide wackness so he puts his rhymes-on-caps-lock/
Drops hot writtens but always forgettin-the-heat/
Changed to Acapella cause he got rejected-by-beats/
Your second-to-me, you don't even write-your-songs/
You post the same rhymes on all of the sites-your-on/
You ain't shit-liar, you need to tell'em the truth-punk/
Says he spits-fire, but he's covered in goosebumps/
On account that ho's the first letters in-his-name/
Got his Ass Plugged, and Every Lame Lyric Appraised/
Every kid-is-afraid of Aca in a spittin-booth/
When he poses as much threat as guys in chicken-suits/
And you don't be payin' attention, you ain't watchin-your-shit/
On account of the misspelling that you got-in-your-sig/
Werd
just like u got in this site u should get out/
u so stupid you dont even know what you rappin about/
nigga u rappin like you hard you aint 2pac
when have you have you ever seen my rymes on cap lock/
nigga you think you can beat me you insane/
ill leave you like the lion and scarecrow no heart and brains/
nigga im from piru street/
i dont never forget my heat/
nigga im hot you coming at me is bad timin/
how you gonna win and you words aint rhymin/
uppin for votes
Punches: Jay
Metaphors: Jay
Flow: Jay
Multis: Jay
Wordplay: None
Vote: Jay
Really one sided battle was that: Jay had nice flow, nice multis, nice punches while K-hood had bad rhymes not so good punches and bad flow.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=218316
punches-jay
personals-jay
vocab-jay
structure-jay
flow-tie...i thought both had good flow
wordplay-jay
Vote-Jay says..verse was just tighter to me in all aspects....http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...220600......my topicla battle needs votes plz...id appreciate it.~1~
Thanks uppin this please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin.....................need more votes
uppin.
Jay had an overall better verse
Punchlines hit harder usually i would vote line by line
but obviously Jay won
Structure went to jay also even though they both were wack flow wuz a tie
vocab i say Jay, um Punchlines won this for Jay
VOTE = Jay
Anway uppin
uppin this,
word..... both do need to still step da vocab up a tad and work on complexityQuote:
Originally Posted by :TreaZoN:
this was a very lopsided battle jay took this one with some eaze he had better punches, flow, structure, everything about his verse just excelled over hoods verse k-hood u have a lot of elevating to do
v/jay
all votes DQ
I blast tha hood back to the past and herb-dissa/
It figures he thinks he's better when he makes his words-bigger/
NO
Acts hard but he's a guy-that-lacks-cock/
Tryin' to hide wackness so he puts his rhymes-on-caps-lock/
OK
Drops hot writtens but always forgettin-the-heat/
Changed to Acapella cause he got rejected-by-beats/
LOL OK
Your second-to-me, you don't even write-your-songs/
You post the same rhymes on all of the sites-your-on/
GOOD PUNCH ESPECIALLY IF ITS TRUE
You ain't shit-liar, you need to tell'em the truth-punk/
Says he spits-fire, but he's covered in goosebumps/
GOOD
On account that ho's the first letters in-his-name/
Got his Ass Plugged, and Every Lame Lyric Appraised/
OK
Every kid-is-afraid of Aca in a spittin-booth/
When he poses as much threat as guys in chicken-suits/
WACK
And you don't be payin' attention, you ain't watchin-your-shit/
On account of the misspelling that you got-in-your-sig/
GOOD PUNCH
vs
IP: F521 B5EB
just like u got in this site u should get out/
u so stupid you dont even know what you rappin about/
WEAK
nigga u rappin like you hard you aint 2pac
when have you have you ever seen my rymes on cap lock/
WEAK
nigga you think you can beat me you insane/
ill leave you like the lion and scarecrow no heart and brains/
OK
nigga im from piru street/
i dont never forget my heat/
VERY WEAK
nigga im hot you coming at me is bad timin/
how you gonna win and you words aint rhymin/
WEAK CUZ HE DID RHYME
jay came hard wit much better punches and wordplay..k-hood was very weak and had basic rhymes wit no wordplay
Need Votes..........
Punches: Jay
Flow: Jay
Structure:Jay
Wordplay: Jay
Vote: Jay
One sided battle: Jay had nice flow, some good multis actaully,and some nice punches.
K-hood had some bad rhymes, weak punches and flow. Need some work, jsut come harder and watch the best........no hate.
v/jay
Thank you guys........Need Votesssss
This battle was kind of weak...but Jay takes this...lol....Easy...K-hood didn't have much of a verse..it was scattered and had extrememly light punches...Jay at least attempted punchlines...It was a close battle tho...Not one of my favorites but all in all it was a weak one....
V/Jay for punch attempts and better vocab/structure
blast tha hood back to the past and herb-dissa/
It figures he thinks he's better when he makes his words-bigger/
Acts hard but he's a guy-that-lacks-cock/
Tryin' to hide wackness so he puts his rhymes-on-caps-lock/
Drops hot writtens but always forgettin-the-heat/
Changed to Acapella cause he got rejected-by-beats/
vs.
nuthin
it wusnt as different as k when come ta structure but wit da punches there wuz no contest. Jay had nice flow, some good multis actaully,and some nice punches. K just came weak in all angles and homie needs serious elevation. i mean K had ok flow but dats nuthin if ya punches are shit so just work on it. jay for da betta verse
dam!!! jay strait murdered dis otha cat, i really didnt even have to read k-hoods verse, but i did, so heres da break downs:
k-hood
just like u got in this site u should get out/
u so stupid you dont even know what you rappin about/
...strait...
nigga u rappin like you hard you aint 2pac
when have you have you ever seen my rymes on cap lock/
whack, and you fed off his verse...
nigga you think you can beat me you insane/
ill leave you like the lion and scarecrow no heart and brains/
pretty nice...props homie...
nigga im from piru street/
i dont never forget my heat/
feedin again, whack...
nigga im hot you coming at me is bad timin/
how you gonna win and you words aint rhymin/
ok, but whack for a closer...
elevate on vocab and structure, and rhymes, jus everything, lol...
jay
I blast tha hood back to the past and herb-dissa/
It figures he thinks he's better when he makes his words-bigger/
...good opener...
Acts hard but he's a guy-that-lacks-cock/
Tryin' to hide wackness so he puts his rhymes-on-caps-lock/
...nice rhymes homie, good diss...
Drops hot writtens but always forgettin-the-heat/
Changed to Acapella cause he got rejected-by-beats/
...really good punch, really good...
Your second-to-me, you don't even write-your-songs/
You post the same rhymes on all of the sites-your-on/
...ehh, thats aight...
You ain't shit-liar, you need to tell'em the truth-punk/
Says he spits-fire, but he's covered in goosebumps/
...lol, really good here, original...
On account that ho's the first letters in-his-name/
Got his Ass Plugged, and Every Lame Lyric Appraised/
...pretty good...
Every kid-is-afraid of Aca in a spittin-booth/
When he poses as much threat as guys in chicken-suits/
...strait, not the best punch...
And you don't be payin' attention, you ain't watchin-your-shit/
On account of the misspelling that you got-in-your-sig/
...didnt really rhyme, good try, but bad closer...
overall, jay definitly won, but i did take off some points cause you went over the line limit, but then gave them back when i saw k-hood feed off your verse...
v/jay
ayo, dont sleep on my battle, vote please... please...Quote:
Originally Posted by Clisk