heres the rules
10 lines
no crew
no D/R
no hate
verses due 30 min after check in
ALL votes must be explained
you got to spit first since I set it up good luck
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heres the rules
10 lines
no crew
no D/R
no hate
verses due 30 min after check in
ALL votes must be explained
you got to spit first since I set it up good luck
check in,...............................................
Ok ima crush dis boy then give him an uppercut so he can say he raised his game higher //
Then move like "Eminem" and play this bitches ass like his name was "Mariah"//
send-ya-troops, i 'choke you out' worse than 'nuclear holocast', smokin a blunt, with 'lung cancer', and-a-noose //
im the new reaper in town you can ask a 'friend-or-two', you can call me Hitler the way imma put and end-to-jew(you) //*
as my punches 'pound-ta-ya-face' with an 'ounce-of-this-rage' i 'denounce-ya-fame' //
cuz you 'beatin me' is 'unheard of', like seein someone actually pronounce-ya-name //*
i bend syllables then i 'fill the spit', i couldnt 'feel ya shit' if my hand was 'up your ass' like a 'ventriloquist' //*
Waited a while for my come-back battling me you shouldnt have done-that //
This aint gonna jus gonna be a KO coz u gonna get knocked down with one-smack //
You a pussy like that boy "Lloyd" I could see you singing "south-side" //
You got a high voice with a dick in your arse thats why you screaming with your mouth-wide //
Easy!!
*Jew and you, Hitler killed over 2 million jews
*Hasnt beaten me yet and his name could be pronounced any number of ways
*Ventriloquist's make dummies talk and move without moving their lips
lmfao checkity check check bitch
alright here we go
This kid ain't even shit,he can't split no wig..
I saw your flow against submit,it was some elementry shit..
Your shit is so basic,tryin to teach noobs how to read..
OHH SHIT another muthafucka from detroit tryin to get ahead of me..
Your probably in 8 mile,tryin to be like eminem G..
probably dyed your hair blond,you fuckin wannabe..
You tested positive for bein a S.O.B*,so just learn this..
you ain't even wanted,cuz your flows sound racist..
like you were in the klan or somethin,so let me put this to an end..
on this easy muthafucka,and send him back to school cuz he ain't no rap dr*..
*S.O.B,-son of bitch
*DR-doctor
alright here we go
This kid ain't even shit,he can't split no wig..
I saw your flow against submit,it was some elementry shit..
Your shit is so basic,tryin to teach noobs how to read..
OHH SHIT another muthafucka from detroit tryin to get ahead of me..
Your probably in 8 mile,tryin to be like eminem G..
probably dyed your hair blond,you fuckin wannabe..
You tested positive for bein a S.O.B*,so just learn this..
you ain't even wanted,cuz your flows sound racist..
like you were in the klan or somethin,so let me put this to an end..
on this easy muthafucka,and send him back to school cuz he ain't no rap dr*..
*S.O.B,-son of bitch
*DR-doctor
Ok ima crush dis boy then give him an uppercut so he can say he raised his game higher //
Then move like "Eminem" and play this bitches ass like his name was "Mariah"//
send-ya-troops, i 'choke you out' worse than 'nuclear holocast', smokin a blunt, with 'lung cancer', and-a-noose //
im the new reaper in town you can ask a 'friend-or-two', you can call me Hitler the way imma put and end-to-jew(you) //*
as my punches 'pound-ta-ya-face' with an 'ounce-of-this-rage' i 'denounce-ya-fame' //
cuz you 'beatin me' is 'unheard of', like seein someone actually pronounce-ya-name //*
i bend syllables then i 'fill the spit', i couldnt 'feel ya shit' if my hand was 'up your ass' like a 'ventriloquist' //*
Waited a while for my come-back battling me you shouldnt have done-that //
This aint gonna jus gonna be a KO coz u gonna get knocked down with one-smack //
You a pussy like that boy "Lloyd" I could see you singing "south-side" //
You got a high voice with a dick in your arse thats why you screaming with your mouth-wide //
nice battle lol
i like Cormegaz verse many reasonz
like flow,nice structure,nice punches,an was all ova da nigga
like this line
Your shit is so basic,tryin to teach noobs how to read..
OHH SHIT another muthafucka from detroit tryin to get ahead of me..
damn asmodeus NARROW DOWN YA LINES .......pleaz elevate no hate
my vote
Cormega
uppin for votes 1
-as- not bad but not reallya good verse. u need to come with harder punches and ur flow and stucture was pretty weak. one thing i didnt like was the line about his name. it makes sence u just have to no what t stands for.
-jr-u had good flow and stucture but i wasnt really feeling the punches that much so work on those but overall u had a decent verse. just try to work on getting some better punches
v/jr
thanks uppin 2
as-ur verse wasnt great some ok punches but the structure and flow were quite off on dis one no ggod personals or multis need to work on that and elevate mayne 4/10
vs
jr-ok verse ur flow was very consistent and punches and personals were much better then ur opponents ur ending was better as well structure ok nottin special overall good verse mayne 7/10
v/jr reasons above
thanks uppin 3
uppin............................................. .....
uppin 4
ok asmodeus read some abttles man, ur structure is really really bad so u should try to read stuff and use it like that, and also ur punches werent that good either, maybe try fixing ur flow as well, Cormega u need some help with punches a lil bit but ur flow fucking rules lol, u beasically beat him here. V/Jr for better punches and way better flow and structure.
my last upp 5
As - Your jew line definitely was a stretch. All of your explanations were unnecessary, since they were straightforward ideas. Also the line about pronouncing his name didn't make much sense, since your's is harded to say.
Cormega - Your drop was structured better. Your explanations were for even more obvious concepts, give the reader credit. You came at your opponent with an attempted personal on his location, all asmodeus had was the name pronunciation which was worse of an attempt.
v/Cormega
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