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Lock down
Yo we locked down like animalz behind barz
If I could get from behind barz would give up all the fanvy carz
7 hr of bein out that cell
Still don't matter this place stank as hell
Them soft nigga hung themself usin sumthin like a rope
Causae they waz scared the next day the might drop the soap
Nigga think this place cool out ur fuckin mind
U think it's cool seein niggas gettin raped all the time
I be holdin it for niggas out side
Cause when I get out I know I'm gonna shine
Locked don wit ankle weight and hand cuff
We see the sun 2 houses a day ain't that enough
We they tell u a education is a bad thing to waste
Wish I would of know when I stabbed that dude in the face
Jail is like stayin in a bathroom for year
Word of advice don't let nobody see u shed tears
Kill to survie in this bitch no fun and game
Fuck wut then niggas say when u get out u'll heva be tha sanme
Tryin to escape bout three monthes ago
Got away for a day and got my ass put back in for 2 more
2 more year to my but don't give a fuck
Cause when I waz out all I did waz live it up
Might neva get out 10 more yr in this cell
Man fuck this I rather go to hell
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i got ya homie...Ok ur flow for one was ehh, all over and ur wordplay was aight...The idea is good and the emotion and fear is good...seems like u actaully been there almost...The shit u talked about was scary and I feel ya on the u gotta watch ur back all the time shit...I give it an ok rating but I know u can do better...Elevate and no hate
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yo ez i liked that verse it was tight u should b a topical head seriously i'll even open up a spot for u
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Thx dogg I might do that
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was crackin eazy??? i liked it, but i know u can do better b.......wordplay was very nice........flow was ok........i really liked all the ideas u had.....shows u have a gd mind and sence of thought........i realii feel u on watching ur back cuz when u live in our world u have 2.......
by the way make sure u post 2 links 4 positive feedback u left, or ur thread will get closed
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goodjob eazy that was a dope verse you could of worked on the structure the flow was really good could of reworded your verse and upped your vocab but all and all it was a decent open mic good job keep evaluating and keep postin more open mics
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this was a nice piece..of shit!....j/p..it was coo..lil long tho..but overall nice drop..propz..
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im def feelin da concept homie and i agree wit route... u really make it seem u have dat experience...my only comlpaint is da words u rhymed wit and vocab( not always da same thing ppl lol) but flow was pretty good... and da message was def received... much love fo dis one homie
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Uppin for some feed back plz
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real nice, nice topic keep it up.....................uppin for more feed
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Thx ma nigga uppin for some more feed
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uppin 4 ma hommie.............
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ezy im tellin u u need 2 links 4 open mics u let correct feedback in , or yours will be closed............peep mines in my sig
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Umm...Hmm... Elevate
Try to make your verse the same length *lines*
Get ya vocab up.
You came to simple, you need make a visual. Get what I mean??
If u don't PM me.
You got potential.
Hit my link if u an't do it already
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Thx
Uppin for more feedback
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ok drop, but if u wanna b usin easy's name, u gotta do better than ok, u gotta do sick drops... not livin up 2 ur name nigga
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Thx hommie uppin for mor feed
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u frum westcoast? where frum westcoast nigga?
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I lived in LBC and Las Vages
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Once again uppin for feed
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