Competition?...more like dropped attention

Chrit

Ya'lls concepts are boring, punches are all repetitive
May be the comp, but that aint mean ya'll competitive
I'm that strong, and when I show the comp'll be gone
Like a big receiver, I'm quick to throw a neon deon
And Vylint ya times gone, it'll be best when ya start to see
That every post ya make now, is damaging credability
Of Season Two, when ya came nice, but please dude
Jace n you had an aim crew... and I still found a way to beat you
N Jace, quit sayin nigga, ya indian, and I'm not hatin
When i leave ya eyes black, jack n' not cause you live on reservations
Nuc, ya garbage, punches always steerin clear of harm
N' like Canada, we aint fearin Nuclear Arms
So fucka BKS, ya poor and with beef I'ma warn ya
Bout how ya always seein BK's located on ghetto corners
I'll admit it, John is good, but aint no stoppin the facts
Like how Hens are built to take a cock in the ass
And Razah... ya aint nice, so why you reppin a crew dun...
You aint thrown a punch in years, atleast never a new one
I hear Young P's in, that mere notion is obsurd
Since ya only rapped in philly, cause I'm steady smokin herb
Barons the only vet left, but ya audio shows are borin
6 years on the net, and you still aint know what flow is???
So fuck it, ya'll got biters, dont you fools see?
Vy's OM bit me from this week...
...and ST bit his name from the dude that runs the league
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Stalkers... now K, The Judge... whoever you are
will be an oxymoron, when jaywalker lays down the law

Jay Walker


Sylentz Says: you gotta admit, we are last words only competition, But you would beat us in text, ill give ya that one
Sylentz Says: but as far as ranks go

1st = Last Word
2nd = The Comp

there it is chump, so sylentz don’t front, i’m blarin it blunt
fucka hair on my chin... bitch, you’re like a hair on my nut
so be aware of it slut, lie again, i’ll make ya run to see clergy
shit, you ride my jock so much...
...you should consider the kentucky derby
‘n kid, how you gonna fib like I got cut, know who ya messin with bitch
WHEN I PUT AN OM OUT YESTERDAY EXPRESSING I QUIT!!!
‘n Vylint and Guiles? i guess bitches have dumbest luck
but...
aint gotta prove i’m better...w.rite already summed it up
so i’ll go to the next ho, leave half of his neck blown
Kap, ya shits Best Kept Secret... <---even he said so
but lets not front ya hoes, i’ll tell you somethin yo
you’re lay lines were DOPE...fucking months ago!
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I was gonna write more, but really brief, I got bored
'n it doesnt take a fucking blind man to not see you got whored

LAST WORD BITCHES.

Can I rap in here or what?

This piece had me grinning, nothing like good old fashioned slab of beef! Strong personals and nice punches. Some smooth collaberation going on as well guys. The topic was... well... not original but this was a battle piece so fuck it. Decent vocab too. Not much more to say except i'll be checking for the other side of this beef.

Keep on posting.

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Originally Posted by RingKing

Can I rap in here or what?

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no, homo

Chrit, seriously. Why mention me?

And Razah... ya aint nice, so why you reppin a crew dun...
You aint thrown a punch in years, atleast never a new one

C'mon man, why ain't nobody dissing me

Ya'll know I'll only reply once somebody drops something worth replying to . . and they they get shitted on. Lol, but atleast they ATTEMPT to do something.

way to keep me lazy wack ass bitches

^^^

I dont even need to take shots at you, i already beat you

Q: Who's the best person you ever beat?
A: I BEAT RAZAH WHEN HE POSTED A TERRIBLE VERSE

don't flatter yourself kid

^^^

Dont be bitter about losing yo.

lmao.. i'll drop some real feed on this now. very solid diss overall, there's not much to critique on a battle verse. flow was cool and the punches were there, some good wordplay and personals too. i'll point out the lines i liked the most.

Ya'lls concepts are boring, punches are all repetitive
May be the comp, but that aint mean ya'll competitive
Of Season Two, when ya came nice, but please dude
Jace n you had an aim crew... and I still found a way to beat you
Nuc, ya garbage, punches always steerin clear of harm
N' like Canada, we aint fearin Nuclear Arms
I'll admit it, John is good, but aint no stoppin the facts
Like how Hens are built to take a cock in the ass
And Razah... ya aint nice, so why you reppin a crew dun...
You aint thrown a punch in years, atleast never a new one

and..

there it is chump, so sylentz don’t front, i’m blarin it blunt
fucka hair on my chin... bitch, you’re like a hair on my nut
‘n kid, how you gonna fib like I got cut, know who ya messin with bitch
WHEN I PUT AN OM OUT YESTERDAY EXPRESSING I QUIT!!!
‘n Vylint and Guiles? i guess bitches have dumbest luck
but...
aint gotta prove i’m better...w.rite already summed it up
but lets not front ya hoes, i’ll tell you somethin yo
you’re lay lines were DOPE...fucking months ago!

chea, ain't much more to say.. all those lines were real nice and hit hard. solid diss.

That was a hot battle piece. I haven't really been able to get into the battle scene myself yet.
You went right after them and ate em alive
"N' like Canada, we aint fearin Nuclear Arms"
My favorite line Don't be mad if you see or hear it somewhere else
Now I feel like battling

^^^

lmao... biter

well well well....very ill piece......love tha ill deliverance...your vocab and wordplay...your immaculate punches.....your hard hittin personals....your whole verse being very ill...ill this was nice..and thats to both verse...they both came wit hard hittin shit...not that im surprised...but definately impressed...keep droppin tha hottness.~1~

I'm that strong, and when I show the comp'll be gone
Like a big receiver, I'm quick to throw a neon deon

^ this is why chrit will never be shit

neon deon?

roflmmfao

fucking diss me you pussys.

nice strong diss guys,, both came pretty good here and chrit really impressed with some of his shit

I'm that strong, and when I show the comp'll be gone
Like a big receiver, I'm quick to throw a neon deon
Of Season Two, when ya came nice, but please dude
Jace n you had an aim crew... and I still found a way to beat you
N Jace, quit sayin nigga, ya indian, and I'm not hatin
When i leave ya eyes black, jack n' not cause you live on reservations
Nuc, ya garbage, punches always steerin clear of harm
N' like Canada, we aint fearin Nuclear Arms
So fucka BKS, ya poor and with beef I'ma warn ya
Bout how ya always seein BK's located on ghetto corners
I'll admit it, John is good, but aint no stoppin the facts
Like how Hens are built to take a cock in the ass
And Razah... ya aint nice, so why you reppin a crew dun...
You aint thrown a punch in years, atleast never a new one
I hear Young P's in, that mere notion is obsurd
Since ya only rapped in philly, cause I'm steady smokin herb

so be aware of it slut, lie again, i’ll make ya run to see clergy
shit, you ride my jock so much...
...you should consider the kentucky derby
‘n kid, how you gonna fib like I got cut, know who ya messin with bitch
WHEN I PUT AN OM OUT YESTERDAY EXPRESSING I QUIT!!!
so i’ll go to the next ho, leave half of his neck blown
Kap, ya shits Best Kept Secret... <---even he said so
but lets not front ya hoes, i’ll tell you somethin yo
you’re lay lines were DOPE...fucking months ago!
I was gonna write more, but really brief, I got bored
'n it doesnt take a fucking blind man to not see you got whored

all pretty dope lines right there,, loved the neon deon line
and the jacent reservations line had me lauging too also the I PUT OUT AN OM line from jay had my laughing out loud too... dope shit guys :thumbup:

lol @ deon not understanding the line about him

all i gotta say is last word is the dopes crew out there ya tearing this OM thread up

Word yo.

Hey, I used a neon / knee on wordplay years ago

CONGRATULATIONS CHRIT, YOU'RE YEARS BEHIND ME

this was a badass piece you came hard with those punches this shit flowed decent too even that second piece kicked ass...........

And Vylint ya times gone, it'll be best when ya start to see
That every post ya make now, is damaging credability
Of Season Two, when ya came nice, but please dude
Jace n you had an aim crew... and I still found a way to beat you
---good flow
And Razah... ya aint nice, so why you reppin a crew dun...
You aint thrown a punch in years, atleast never a new one
----prob my favorite

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Originally Posted by MX One

Hey, I used a neon / knee on wordplay years ago

CONGRATULATIONS CHRIT, YOU'RE YEARS BEHIND ME

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and I bet it was against a deon eh?

so it was personal?


yeah, pry not

go back to '03 when you had credability

I mean, atleast I was credible at a point.

RIGHT CHRIT

Lol, clown.

^no,... no you weren't