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both verses due in 35 min
no c/h/d vote
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check in due in 5 min
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yo dawg you need to check in.......................
damn no show to bad i really wanted to battle him.
this battle is gonna resume must post in 30 min both
With lyrical razors im cuttin~his~rhymes, my spits are disrupting~his~lines/
Slice open his dome and stick my dick in his brains so I can fuck~with~his~mind/
Im smokin~this~fool, my flows will crumble him and leave him broken~in~two/
Shoulda killed him a while ago, opened~the~womb, strangled him with fillopian~tubes/
Im hackin~and~smashin~this~bum, ill cap~him~and~blast~him~for~fun/
Im destroying this faggot, pounding him to a pulp is no hassle~like~capital~one/
His spits couldn’t be hot if you stuck a match to his mouth~and~burned~it/
Beat him into submission, break his jaw so this spitter will be out~of~service/
Even my worst is enough~to~get~you, lyrically give you cuts~and~fleshwounds/
Stash you in the handicapped stall and let you bleed out in the public~restroom/
Hes runnin scared when I pull~knives, flows rough like spittin steel wool~rhymes/
Ill take this fag and strap horns on him, toss darts at his face till I hit a “bulls~eye”/
Slashin him, ill hurt~him~with~ease, my punches sting cuz I burn~him~wit~frees/
Punch him repeatedly till his whole face is swollen up like he was allergic~to~bees/
Im slicin~his~writtens, pinpoint this kids joints, im tossin~knives~wit~precision/
Slice off his legs while hes runnin, forcin him to live the rest of his life~as~a~midget/
guess dis a no show so it's gotta be og he came pretty good anyway
ooooooo shit i voted for da wrong nigga by accident anyway i can change dat shit,
you souldn't fuck wit me son \\
cuz da last nigga dat tried\\
got duck tapped,hogg tied, and bled till he died\\
you need 2 get off dat dick dawg\\
its fuckin u up\\
i know i just peeped you on da streets sayin fuck for a buck\\
homie you a bitch still a bitch you gon stay a bitch\\
i see you on dis site hatin dat a nigga rich\\
you a michael jackson wannabe stick wit da little boys\\
cuz you got fucked in da azz tryin 2 fuck wit da big bois\\
you a hatin muthafucker you fuel my fire\\
keep talkin muthafucker you gon feel my fire\\
my shit is so hott it feels like you're in hell\\
dem niggas made you suck dat dick when ya azz was in jail\\
you a 304 bitch and i's ya pimp\\
dem homos fucked ya in da azz now you walk wit a limp\\
you caught da aids doin dat shit so much i feel sorry\\
but when it comes to rockin da mic boi ya ass is sorry\\
dis aint new these niggas know how i be on it i'll carve ya azz up nice\\
pussy how do you want it\\
toony900 killed thhis nigga the lyrics were bettter sturcture and flow.............
yo i cant change dat vote my bad
i got t admit you can spit dem flames but its all good though no beef
good lookin out wyte boi. you too street poet (lol)
these niggas need to hurry up and start voting right now
lol i voted cuz it wuz a no show battle to me now dat i seen it it look like an even battle to me iono who i woulda picked
thanx any way i checked out yo battle u can spit dem flames too
it should be 1-1 but w/e bring the votes..................
tony900-good flow structure an punches... Keep focusin on the battle your in instead of others an self glory..... 8/10
devil- You were demoted more to him with punches wordplay an i liked the flow...i ll have to give you an 8.5 cuz i was feeling it a little more..
thanx uppin#1........................................... ...
thanx for my first battle devilog uppin#1 you got dat hott fire
With lyrical razors im cuttin~his~rhymes, my spits are disrupting~his~lines/
Slice open his dome and stick my dick in his brains so I can fuck~with~his~mind/
Im smokin~this~fool, my flows will crumble him and leave him broken~in~two/
Shoulda killed him a while ago, opened~the~womb, strangled him with fillopian~tubes/
Im hackin~and~smashin~this~bum, ill cap~him~and~blast~him~for~fun/
Im destroying this faggot, pounding him to a pulp is no hassle~like~capital~one/
His spits couldn’t be hot if you stuck a match to his mouth~and~burned~it/
Beat him into submission, break his jaw so this spitter will be out~of~service/
Even my worst is enough~to~get~you, lyrically give you cuts~and~fleshwounds/
Stash you in the handicapped stall and let you bleed out in the public~restroom/
Hes runnin scared when I pull~knives, flows rough like spittin steel wool~rhymes/
Ill take this fag and strap horns on him, toss darts at his face till I hit a “bulls~eye”/
Slashin him, ill hurt~him~with~ease, my punches sting cuz I burn~him~wit~frees/
Punch him repeatedly till his whole face is swollen up like he was allergic~to~bees/
Im slicin~his~writtens, pinpoint this kids joints, im tossin~knives~wit~precision/
Slice off his legs while hes runnin, forcin him to live the rest of his life~as~a~midget/
^^about a 7/10 due to how much u bounce around on subjects, but still decent
you souldn't fuck wit me son \\
cuz da last nigga dat tried\\
got duck tapped,hogg tied, and bled till he died\\
you need 2 get off dat dick dawg\\
its fuckin u up\\
i know i just peeped you on da streets sayin fuck for a buck\\
homie you a bitch still a bitch you gon stay a bitch\\
i see you on dis site hatin dat a nigga rich\\
you a michael jackson wannabe stick wit da little boys\\
cuz you got fucked in da azz tryin 2 fuck wit da big bois\\
you a hatin muthafucker you fuel my fire\\
keep talkin muthafucker you gon feel my fire\\
my shit is so hott it feels like you're in hell\\
dem niggas made you suck dat dick when ya azz was in jail\\
you a 304 bitch and i's ya pimp\\
dem homos fucked ya in da azz now you walk wit a limp\\
you caught da aids doin dat shit so much i feel sorry\\
but when it comes to rockin da mic boi ya ass is sorry\\
dis aint new these niggas know how i be on it i'll carve ya azz up nice\\
pussy how do you want it\\
^^bout a 5/10 decent structure but sorry and sorry dont ryme homie but u got potential no beef keep tryin
if i could vote it would be for devilog cause he took this battle with harder punches and better flow
return the favor homies thnx no hate votes just sayin that just incase tony got mad but i dont want beef i just vote fair thnx guys peace good luck later on
thank you for the opinion dawg uppin in this biatch
"toony900 killed thhis nigga the lyrics were bettter sturcture and flow............." SON ARE YOU FUKIN SERIOUS? Og murdered this kid wit 2 lines..
Slice open his dome and stick my dick in his brains so I can fuck~with~his~mind/
Shoulda killed him a while ago, opened~the~womb, strangled him with fillopian~tubes/
that was all it took.. da fuck u smokin? Or yall traded votes?
Wordplay: OG
Structure: OG
PUNCHLINES: !i!i OG i!i!
Flow: OG
lol thats what i said 2-2 uppin........................
should be 3-1 but this bitch got lucky when street-poet voted fuh him on accident
Og took dis...There's really no reason ta esplain,cause he did have better punches,wordplay,flow and structure
lol thanks uppinn.....................................
With lyrical razors im cuttin~his~rhymes, my spits are disrupting~his~lines/
Slice open his dome and stick my dick in his brains so I can fuck~with~his~mind/
Im smokin~this~fool, my flows will crumble him and leave him broken~in~two/
Shoulda killed him a while ago, opened~the~womb, strangled him with fillopian~tubes/
Im hackin~and~smashin~this~bum, ill cap~him~and~blast~him~for~fun/
Im destroying this faggot, pounding him to a pulp is no hassle~like~capital~one/
His spits couldn’t be hot if you stuck a match to his mouth~and~burned~it/
Beat him into submission, break his jaw so this spitter will be out~of~service/
Even my worst is enough~to~get~you, lyrically give you cuts~and~fleshwounds/
Stash you in the handicapped stall and let you bleed out in the public~restroom/
Hes runnin scared when I pull~knives, flows rough like spittin steel wool~rhymes/
Ill take this fag and strap horns on him, toss darts at his face till I hit a “bulls~eye”/
Slashin him, ill hurt~him~with~ease, my punches sting cuz I burn~him~wit~frees/
Punch him repeatedly till his whole face is swollen up like he was allergic~to~bees/
Im slicin~his~writtens, pinpoint this kids joints, im tossin~knives~wit~precision/
Slice off his legs while hes runnin, forcin him to live the rest of his life~as~a~midget/
vs
you souldn't fuck wit me son \\
cuz da last nigga dat tried\\
got duck tapped,hogg tied, and bled till he died\\
you need 2 get off dat dick dawg\\
its fuckin u up\\
i know i just peeped you on da streets sayin fuck for a buck\\
homie you a bitch still a bitch you gon stay a bitch\\
i see you on dis site hatin dat a nigga rich\\
you a michael jackson wannabe stick wit da little boys\\
cuz you got fucked in da azz tryin 2 fuck wit da big bois\\
you a hatin muthafucker you fuel my fire\\
keep talkin muthafucker you gon feel my fire\\
my shit is so hott it feels like you're in hell\\
dem niggas made you suck dat dick when ya azz was in jail\\
you a 304 bitch and i's ya pimp\\
dem homos fucked ya in da azz now you walk wit a limp\\
you caught da aids doin dat shit so much i feel sorry\\
but when it comes to rockin da mic boi ya ass is sorry\\
dis aint new these niggas know how i be on it i'll carve ya azz up nice\\
pussy how do you want it\\
wtf fix ya structure for real ist was a weak verse devil take out the ~ come on this was weak battle but i do have to give it to dvil..weak punches from both sides but devil hit harder it was a wack battle and i didnt like this battle but keep on tryin you know who my vote goes to devil..
Devil Taked It Tony Work On Ur Structure.u Both Came Kinda Weak But Devil Had A Better Overall Verse
V/devil