I Doubt you been Laid

Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic
Talkin loads of hard shit but really hoe ya garbage
The talented leave the net...
...you stalk me on aim braggin bout stayin on it
Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!
Ya last words aint shit, pry sayin ya signed, herb
I no showed on purpose, i aint one t' assault a minor
Dont box with a legend... hot lines? I've written mine
While you just end up bitin.... severely bitten lines
I'll out-box, and while you'll just come and talk soft.... since
u on hens so bad, ya always beatin cocks off
And dog.... ya friends turned, now I'm fixin to pound
a blow hard so hard $pits drippin outta ya mouth

Homo....




Replied to:
something er another.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...15#post2730115
yeah... that kids sucked

Key lime pie eatin ass cuntwaffles

Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic
Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!
Dont box with a legend... hot lines? I've written mine
While you just end up bitin.... severely bitten lines
And dog.... ya friends turned, now I'm fixin to pound
a blow hard so hard $pits drippin outta ya mouth


Seriously though...

Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!


*DEAD*

ha ha

some nice stuff in there.. coulda been done a lil better but obviously it was keyed...

rewording woulda helped. lets see if Lay answers..

coo.

Wow the personals were just oozing out of this.... nice little drop for a keystyle... and $pits sig is pretty sick btw...

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Originally Posted by wyte boy

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Stop freeposting faggot. Don't you think thats one reason you got banned the FIRST time?

Nice.Solid verse Chrit.

The whole thing was nice...

I must have missed something...

Guess I'll hear about it later.

Good work, looks quickly typed...but still effective as hell.

Peace

Guess we've got some crew beef, eh?...Dope..Personals were hitting, the 9 weeks line was tight...Decent drop...

Lol at the IP line, that was dope. Rest was cool. I liked the 'assault a minor' line actually ..

This was decent at best, but nah..

IP line was ok, not great tho, i mean it just doesnt come off as a punch to me..

hen line is played as fuck, try to avoid that ish..

but, i mean, ive seen a lot worse, so keep droppin, stay up..

6/10

Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic
Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!


I second that this was also a decent drop but it could have been reworded to make it some what of a smoother flow. Alright though for a quick drop.

^^^

You need to understand flow before you knock it

ok drop strongest line : Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic

weakest:Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....

on my perspective it was good but i dont know about the title

^^^

This is why you are 1-2

thats why this verse i just wrote rapes everything u ever wrote in ur pathetic life faggot

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=212107

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Originally Posted by Trapt Wit

^^^

This is why you are 1-2

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Originally Posted by Trapt Wit

^^^

You need to understand flow before you knock it

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you must really hate people that hate ur noob raps aye?

face it kid u fucking suck

Noob?


Are you seriously retarded kiddo?


Battle? I'll eat you if you want it that bad.

Text, audio.... either way

to me it really didnt do shit...it was like reportin shit that happened but u didnt destroy or anything...if u wanna destroy u gotta do alot better than make fun of his IP or say his lines were bitten...Destroy is when u make em not talk because u sussed them so bad...they cant say anything because u got them so deep with the shit they cant do anything or make anything to beat it...but anyways it was an ok piece...not really great but elevate

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Originally Posted by Trapt Wit

Noob?


Are you seriously retarded kiddo?


Battle? I'll eat you if you want it that bad.

Text, audio.... either way

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i accept your challenge on text set up the battle and ill go first i am going to fucking straight clown on your fucking ass

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/poll...competevar=yes


have a blast kiddo

lol gierson doesn't know what he's getting into, haha

nice drop wit, sick lines, the flow was there, haha, the IP line was sick, also just the opener and end was was killer

nice key man, peace

this was cool.. had some strong parts, but not many.. lol @ the IP line, funny.

good shit.

lmfao chrit

had some nice shit in here, you owned him.

2 bad i didnt get to see his l0l, who was it anyway ?

props on the pwn'age

Trapt Wit. Nice. I need to get 100 posts.

i know this is my first post and u think just because im new to this site means i cant rap for shit lets say ur fav rapper joined the site u would call him newb if he said what im about to say...

this shit is seriously whack.

fact: all rappers think their shit is the best.

fact: im a much much better rapper than you.

fact: reason only people think this shit is good is because they are all on your low, low level i see real weak shit weak multiples...in rapping, multiples are important single word rhymes sucks ...it takes very little skill only good metaphores...eminems shit is mostly double,tripple word rhymes...and still has insane metaphores

im not comparing u to eminem because there is no comparison...he obviously owns wana be mc's like you

anyways weak shit. but i wouldnt use that verse in a battle vs me or anyone else ur ass would just get killed

Nice quick key style...was somewhat funny,
and true lol...

"Kid I'm savage, and with ya ego, I've had it
considerin ya only bust lines from grandmas attic
Talkin loads of hard shit but really hoe ya garbage
The talented leave the net...
...you stalk me on aim braggin bout stayin on it
Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!"

like the rhyme scheme .... meh was good enough
said.

I dunno what caused this but I enjoyed it, nice read...good personals. Not much else to say suppose

Honest kid... ya trippin so why ya wanna fight me?
You on the run? You lying.....
I mean you've had the same IP for 9 weeks!

Dont box with a legend... hot lines? I've written mine
While you just end up bitin.... severely bitten lines
I'll out-box, and while you'll just come and talk soft.... since
u on hens so bad, ya always beatin cocks off
And dog.... ya friends turned, now I'm fixin to pound
a blow hard so hard $pits drippin outta ya mouth

those were my fovorit lines...
Very personal Chrit...i liked the John Hensley line....came off nice with the personals here. IP was dope too...good closer with the $pitacular line too.

I saw the reply to this..and this owned.

good shit Chrit

Lmao @ the kid talking about multi syllable rhyme schemes...

can you not read?

good shit