Reasons To Cry Collab Ft. Miss Clitoria Cummings

Reason's To Cry

EternalDamnation

thiers meanings in the world that you just dont know
pride.. perfection.. left alone cuz thier was no show
constantly the time has changed and it damaged ya brain
family is gone dead or alive now your going insane
set back thought about the consequences ya making
drop to the ground and thought that your heart.. was breaking
rain dripped on ya cheek and clouds fogged on your eyes
flash backs when you was a kid and you wanted to fly
child hood memory's with all the friends that you had seeked
always on the road with the visions that you seen and speeked
sometimes your heart breaks and you just want to die
the feeling inside you just make you have reasons to cry



Miss Clitoria Cummings
Got an early morning phone call around eight o'clock
Little did I know 5 hours later my heart would drop
Uncle Jimmy called..he said your conditions got worse
Sittin here trying to control these tears,while i'm writting this verse.
Ten o' clock is the time we reached the ya bed room
You were there laying weak,didn't think you'd be gone soon
Sitting in the chair...............right beside your bed
So many thoughts.....running through my head
I look up at the clock.........It's now 12:54
Next thing I know, your doctor walks throught da door
I stare up a clock.....It's now 12:56
Had a feelin something was gon' happen i'm like ah shit
I look up at he doctor he's now holding your hand talkin all that doctor talk I don't understand
I look at the clock again, it's 12:59,I heard you, breathe didn't know that was ya lsat time
The doctor looked at you, and checked you pulse.....
The look on your face...told us you were ghost(gone)
I didn't know what to do..........I got up and left
Before I hit the door a tear fell from my eye, and i'm thinkin that ya death was a theft
All the 15 years of my life, I never thought I would see someone die
I say fuck it! and let the tears run down from my eye
People why...............you sit there and cry
Death is the reason I named and told you why

RIP Daddy Rick, I miss you.
I wrote the about the last 5 hours of his life. It could've been better, I hope yall like it. I know there are some stretched lines, sorry about that.

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thax man but hope jerkle wont see it cuz you might have to lleave more feed next tim uppin


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- Jekyll

Thats wassup, leave a link and i'll hit it up honestly.

ok, i have read alot of open mics on this sites, i won't say this is one of the best but it is pretty good, i like the idea it was a pretty "heartfelt" piece i think it could have had more originality, it seems like all open mics recently has had something to do witrh a dying person....

....i liked the vocab you guyz may have used an unoriginal title but you made it your own you did a great job with your verses, i have to say that Miss Clitoria Cummings came more original than EternalDamnation but both were dope,

i liked it, next time pm me and let me in on the open mic

pz-

coo coo its all good i was looking for four people to collab with but shea uppen you want in on this nex one we go make

uppin

Congrats i really enjoy'd read'n this peice because when it comes to death i can relate to most i've been through some situations that i thought myself should've had happen but it did and most jus gotta understand that everything happens for a reason this peice had imagry and was very creative but even the worst presented piece can be the best no matta wat when it comes from the heart and its hard to write bout stuff like this but its best to get watcha gotta say off ya chest cuz depression is not wat anybody wants you both did a damn good job and just remember

You may lose someone you love but Heaven has gain'd an Angel...........

I commend you both, it doesnt matta wat others think when you post something from the heart....................this was a damn good OM

jerklyy i here you man thanx for letting me know and i was in a hurry cuz i wanted to post it but malice thanx for that feed man i can see where your coming from and i bet you if you read both of them again closely youll think about your past deep shit 1

yeah, most deff a heartfelt song with male and female talent on here, well i'm assuming EternalDamnation is a male, heh, but yeah i've felt alot of the feelings and before i go and get sentimental here, i'm digging the way this song flowed, i'd be cool if you two came together and made a song with it and had a cool chorus to go with it.

chea that would be dope cuz i dont have a mic and she might not either but thanx man most def my favorite we making another one soon with a annonomous person i am a dude

Uppin damn

bway dis shiit deep az fuk... apart frm wun or 2 stretched linez wha iz ere not 2 lyk bou dis collab... daym i wuz realy feelin it....
well dunn 2 both ya...i njoyed readin it..

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Originally Posted by LAYDEEE SNYPAH

bway dis shiit deep az fuk... apart frm wun or 2 stretched linez wha iz ere not 2 lyk bou dis collab... daym i wuz realy feelin it....
well dunn 2 both ya...i njoyed readin it..

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:huh:, I couldn't understand a thing you wrote, but whatever you said thank you.

Uppin.

uppin bitches

Damn quit sleepin on ish, Wake tha fuck up

Uppin

sad story but ........it kep me interested thts all that matters.......i mean its excellent work by clitoria cummings.....i could feel tha tension...the other verse coulda been worked on but overall the shit was hot no vocab really just story line......but i enjoyed it i cant really say that for some of these other people who post there shyt......congrats keep up tha good work and if ya ever se flyest nigga eva around here gimme some honest opinions.........ight one fa now

^^^ thanks

Uppin

I see yall still sleepin, U wanna sleep go get in da bed, don't sleep on my music.

uppin

iight nice drop yo this collab could have had sum more vocab from both of u. had real depth and emotion to both of ur verses. both had real great imagery. its all happenin in my mind. great job on that. ms. clitoria cummings, u could have sum better structure. sort of confusing to read. but great verse. both had great flow. overall on both verses i give it a 9/10. keep it up and keep on droppin collabs and pieces =)

thanx for the feed man apreciate it ya heard thanks

thanks uppin this

O.K A Gud Song Here...
Nice Emotion, original enuff concept gud flow and very creative...
I'd say improve ur vocab (on both verses) and wordplay...Also, although the flow was gud I thought the rhyme scheme on both verses was fairly simple, add a bit more complexity and yo shit will be off tha chain...
Gud Song, Respect To Both...

Thanks uppin for more feed

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Uppin, if yall gon' sleep on stuff, I might as well not post anything else

last time uppin

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