Here we go again...
10 lines,
No crew voting,
No hate voting,
No dick riding,
Blind spit, anytime within 15 minutes of check...
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Here we go again...
10 lines,
No crew voting,
No hate voting,
No dick riding,
Blind spit, anytime within 15 minutes of check...
Check...
SpitSnake your getting too thick, time for you to shed yo skin,
Your good for settin’ up battles…then get knocked down like a bowling pin,
Sorry it’s so harsh but it’s all your good for…getting beat,
Snake your rhymes are more lifeless than a tin of raw meat,
Snake this aint your battle; crawl away accept your defeat with grace,
This chump’s got more shit filled in him than a fourth graders pencil case,
Your flow is all over the place; Snake what you been smokin?
Man Snake’s running outta lines to spit at me, he’s godamn choking,
Battling don’t suit ya you picked the wrong game to play in,
Get back to the drawing board your lyrics aint fit for a trash bin...
Quote:
Originally Posted by SPitSNake
Its From an old battle that he forgot to Put Poll so he is polling it now
VOte and ill Rtf.......Leave a good comment and I will To ,,,,,,,VOte fair
UPPPPPPPPpppinnnnnnn .......COmon Ppl Vote
Spitsnake had the better punches, flow, metas, struc, adn verse, I liked his better, I just wasnt feelin the other dudes verse...
v/Spitsnake....rtf, links in my sig. try to hit all of them. I'd rtf. honest votes.
uppin.....Gonna go to sleep.....check tmr from the votes......leave links to your battles and ill check them out and vote peace
yo i liked the pencil case bit of tech but i agree with da caliph upp one for spitsnake
thx for the comment....needing some poll votes
Uppin #1
tech..
pretty good verse home, had a decent consistency of lines and deent punches, ok imagery and wordplay, nothing too complex, pretty basic, but to the point, and personals were ok, your structure was also good, came @ your opponent in battle and overall had the better verse here ya get my vote for comin harder..pz
spitsnake-
ehh homie i see you could use some structurizing on your verse, real basic rhyme scheme, nothing really stuck out to me, didnt se much creativity or real strong puinches, work on a more direct approach towards dissn your opponents, work on it homie.... pz
vote/---------Tech-nikal
If I dropped feedback, on your battle, check out my open battle, drop feedback and links, & dont forget to poll ya vote... all favors will be returned.... pz
v//tech cuz he came stronger in this battle....spitsnake i've seen way better from u before....need to keep elevating....v//tech for overall better verse
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn rft
SpitSnake your getting too thick, time for you to shed yo skin,
Your good for settin’ up battles…then get knocked down like a bowling pin,
Sorry it’s so harsh but it’s all your good for…getting beat,
Snake your rhymes are more lifeless than a tin of raw meat,
Snake this aint your battle; crawl away accept your defeat with grace,
This chump’s got more shit filled in him than a fourth graders pencil case,
Your flow is all over the place; Snake what you been smokin?
Man Snake’s running outta lines to spit at me, he’s godamn choking,
Battling don’t suit ya you picked the wrong game to play in,
Get back to the drawing board your lyrics aint fit for a trash bin...
tech..
pretty good verse home, had a decent consistency of lines and deent punches, ok imagery and wordplay, nothing too complex, pretty basic, but to the point, and personals were ok, your structure was also good however i not sure it was good enough to win
vs
I spit radiation, youll turn yellow like bart simpson/
Any hesitation youll get claped in an instant/
Resistance will lead to the end of your existence/
Make it hard for you to *breathe* like Fabolous/
I mastered this,your brain, ill plaster it/
Imma hurricane, youll need a disaster kit/
Ill walk all over you like a runway dude/
Youre probably young enough to goto sunday school/
On some Soprano shit, beating you with a cue stick/
And fuck yeah i caught SARS cuz im too sick/
Talkin bout, "You hard on the net"
Like Kareem in Game of Death you take it on the chin/
Spitsnake had the better punches, flow, metas, struc, adn verse, I liked his better, I just wasnt feelin the other dudes verse...
hey man liked the word play and felt like you came slightly harder
v/spitsnake
rtf click on the first link
no hate
rtf
i liked spits better ithought he came better but competive battle all around
V/SPIT
Structure:spit snake
Multies:none
Punchlines:spit snake
Personals:spit snake
Wordplay:none
Enjoy'd:spit snake
Complexity:spit snake
Creativity:spit snake
Metas:none
Flow:spit snake
overall spit snake for better punches and flow
upppinnnn someone close this battle
i like spit snake beetter flow punchlines and word play
vote spitsnake