10-12 lines
you spit first
no d/r, crew, and hate votes
etc
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10-12 lines
you spit first
no d/r, crew, and hate votes
etc
skitzo u dillusional, my rymes slice so smooth they leave u just doubting all
wasted space, u take up my time
ill chew u up then rinse u out with whisky and lime
ur meat for the flies a lost enterprise
bleeding from ur bowels when my spit hits ur eyes
ur left cleaning endtrails in your own pool of blood
sinking from the feet in my lyrical mud
break the pace and catch up fast
just like wiht ur life ur spits coming last
this lyrical defenition aint a shudder nor shine
just a brief word of warning for wasting my time
-peace
Go ahead and “rinse out ya mouth“, while I “clean out my eyes”
Cuz wit all the “garbage” you spit and I see you indeed will die
You say I’m coming up short, I’m coming up last
Well I’m not a good guy, but I’ve beating kids like you in the past
You’re not “worth” the while, not “worth” half of this verse
Cuz “tab” when you spit, in the pocket is only place where it hurts
I win big bucks, you’re the one collecting minimum wage
Cuz you’re way below me you collect paper I collect the whole page
God protect the innocence, the defenseless dude
Not you though cuz you’re forsaken for God has left you
In every post he writes he ends it wit peace I’m out
Good riddance cuz nobody even wants you around
rememebr the quick reply dont qork you have to use the post reply button
uppin#1
Skitzo Took This One With Ease It Was Overall Better And Much Stronger
His Flow Was Stronger And His Style Was Better No Hate Ight
V/skitzo For Commin Much Stronger
Skitzo Was Overall Much Stronger
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Uppin #2................................................ ..............
...yea. ummmm...Skitzo easily took this wun.
Skitzo- i liked how u tried to flip his shit on him, but u could have had a betta punch when u did.
Tab- one word ELEVATE...get a new structure...lengthen and try 2 use sum personals
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if i could vote i would vote for skitzo because he had a better flow and i liked his wordplay better
P.S. this kid (skitzo) is one of the few ppl on this site that drop hot shit with regularity
yo skitzo won this for obvious reasons and i think we all know why he obvoiusly sounds like he knows whas up other dude needs taobservere a lil bit first so ya know
v.skiitz
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uppin #3................................................ ...................
uppin #4................................................ ..............
V/Skitzo he came wit more creative punchs....better structure little bit of personals...also flowed well to me he came out wit this win....he gets..my vote...
Tab.....u need to elavate.....u had some good lines but so played it seemed like u came to lightly...also ur structure needs work......No..hate....RETURN THE Favor....
V/Skitzo...
skitzo u dillusional, my rymes slice so smooth they leave u just doubting all doesnt rhyme
wasted space, u take up my time
ill chew u up then rinse u out with whisky and lime decent
ur meat for the flies a lost enterprise
bleeding from ur bowels when my spit hits ur eyes good
ur left cleaning endtrails in your own pool of blood
sinking from the feet in my lyrical mud can be better
break the pace and catch up fast
just like wiht ur life ur spits coming last good
this lyrical defenition aint a shudder nor shine
just a brief word of warning for wasting my time good!
overall: 6/10
Go ahead and “rinse out ya mouth“, while I “clean out my eyes”
Cuz wit all the “garbage” you spit and I see you indeed will die ight
You say I’m coming up short, I’m coming up last
Well I’m not a good guy, but I’ve beating kids like you in the past good
You’re not “worth” the while, not “worth” half of this verse
Cuz “tab” when you spit, in the pocket is only place where it hurts good
I win big bucks, you’re the one collecting minimum wage
Cuz you’re way below me you collect paper I collect the whole page good
God protect the innocence, the defenseless dude
Not you though cuz you’re forsaken for God has left you decent
In every post he writes he ends it wit peace I’m out
Good riddance cuz nobody even wants you around good
overall: 6.5/10
v/ skitzo
skitzo u dillusional, my rymes slice so smooth they leave u just doubting all
wasted space, u take up my time
ill chew u up then rinse u out with whisky and lime
ur meat for the flies a lost enterprise
bleeding from ur bowels when my spit hits ur eyes
ur left cleaning endtrails in your own pool of blood
sinking from the feet in my lyrical mud
break the pace and catch up fast
just like wiht ur life ur spits coming last
Vs.
this lyrical defenition aint a shudder nor shine
just a brief word of warning for wasting my time
Vs.
Go ahead and “rinse out ya mouth“, while I “clean out my eyes”
Cuz wit all the “garbage” you spit and I see you indeed will die
You say I’m coming up short, I’m coming up last
Well I’m not a good guy, but I’ve beating kids like you in the past
You’re not “worth” the while, not “worth” half of this verse
Cuz “tab” when you spit, in the pocket is only place where it hurts
I win big bucks, you’re the one collecting minimum wage
Cuz you’re way below me you collect paper I collect the whole page
God protect the innocence, the defenseless dude
Not you though cuz you’re forsaken for God has left you
In every post he writes he ends it wit peace I’m out
Good riddance cuz nobody even wants you around
Okay Tab Hell No ur structure was way off and wtf u dont need to put all ur lines in bold...Next time dont do that get better vocab and Elevate!!!!...
Skitzo..That shit was okay but ive seen better from you but its obvious that u merked this fool u had good and decent punches better structure and nice wordplay.
V/Skitzo
tab - Your shit was kinda lame man. Don't bold your rhymes, we can follow your rhymes ourselves man. Also your concepts and lines were extremely basic, you had no good concepts and no good punches so work on coming harsher.
Skitzo - I wasn't really feeling any of your punches. Some of your punches were too basic like your opener and some of it just made no sense like the paper line. Work on combining creative concepts with harsh punches, it just takes time and practice really. Read battles in the LLL to help improve your game, but you got this.
Vote - Skitzo
up up uppin............................................. ...................................
tab - no disses, just talking about what will happen and about yourself - that shit doesn't win battles.
skitzo:
Go ahead and “rinse out ya mouth“, while I “clean out my eyes”
Cuz wit all the “garbage” you spit and I see you indeed will die
^^weak, and feeding...why?
You say I’m coming up short, I’m coming up last
Well I’m not a good guy, but I’ve beating kids like you in the past
^^kinda weak
You’re not “worth” the while, not “worth” half of this verse
Cuz “tab” when you spit, in the pocket is only place where it hurts
^^ok
I win big bucks, you’re the one collecting minimum wage
Cuz you’re way below me you collect paper I collect the whole page
^^heh, ok
God protect the innocence, the defenseless dude
Not you though cuz you’re forsaken for God has left you
^^ok but not worded into a diss
In every post he writes he ends it wit peace I’m out
Good riddance cuz nobody even wants you around
^^kinda weak too
well you deliberately came weak I can tell, cos you didn't need more. Skitzo wins despite a wack verse, for actually dissing.
tab u did alright but it was to bland to plane u need to elavate
Go ahead and “rinse out ya mouth“, while I “clean out my eyes”
Cuz wit all the “garbage” you spit and I see you indeed will die
^^made since but not good
You say I’m coming up short, I’m coming up last
Well I’m not a good guy, but I’ve beating kids like you in the past
^^kinda weak
You’re not “worth” the while, not “worth” half of this verse
Cuz “tab” when you spit, in the pocket is only place where it hurts
^^ok
I win big bucks, you’re the one collecting minimum wage
Cuz you’re way below me you collect paper I collect the whole page
^^haha
God protect the innocence, the defenseless dude
Not you though cuz you’re forsaken for God has left you
^^not a punch
In every post he writes he ends it wit peace I’m out
Good riddance cuz nobody even wants you around
^^ehh