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No Recycling
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5-12 Lines
Good Luck with your battle verse kid...
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Rules...
No Biting
No Recycling
No Hate Votes
No Dick Riding Votes
Blind Spit
5-12 Lines
Good Luck with your battle verse kid...
correction: 8 to 15 lines now for the battle verses....so lets get this show on the road okay....peace out....due by sometime tonight or tomorrow
im checking into this battle....so when i get the chance i will rip this shit, good luck kid
<^> <'-'> <^> This is my check in <^> <'-'> <^>
I stepped in and got all these dicks in here
throwin fits in here
like "this shit aint fair"
there trippin here cuz i got all their bitches stare
they fixin hair, got them to poke out all their tits and rear
HEATS risin im burnin up play a track and TURN it up burn your dutch
i been throu the hood and learned enough
so all im concerned of it to earn a buck
until im deceased i release the fury
giv couple grand to the judge wont see the jury thats chump change
and i aint playin no dumb games
Its summer now the sun is out
the desert eagle will gleam
before the shells hit the floor im leavin the scene
you better think before you mess wit these lethal MC's
nice.. nice your flow was alright, just you need to get more rhymes in there there werent much rhymes in the middle body, but the all other was tight, just gonna see what mixtape got to prove.
yo bro work on dissin your oponent bro a lil more and youll be aight man for real the wrecking ball theory thats my thing bro
aaight thanks for the feedback... but yall gotta concider im a rookie... as a matter of fact that was my first battle
if you had the sixth sense you know you dead bitch,
you dead in the ground....you got that dead stinch,
ill take ya teeth out like a dentist dawg ill finish off,
leave ya with 18 holes like its mini golf ya penny fraud,
ill straight chop ya face up like its coleslaw,
ya young chump wanna run with a light weight,
noob punks for Christ sake run for a lifes sake,
after this ya the next stat ta suicide rate,
i straight turn my back on this kat im not murderin tracks,
he killed himself more than shakin on a turbulance rack,
this is damn smile :banghead: he's bangin his head,
after listenin to you his craniums straight fed,
up with this sick rhyme their coughin fag lines,
got them messed up more than MT sniffed lines.....
ended weak but whatever....im tired..havent battled in MONTHs...peace
structure: mix
flow: both
Multies: none
punches: mix
Personals: both
enjoyed: none
Complex: none
v/ mix
please rtf
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=197124
Can Yall Vote Please... We Need Some More Votes...
Need some feed.....Bumpin #1 come on people...dont sleep
Come On People Bumpin #2 Need Some Feed People..........need Your Votes..win Or Lose.....
Bumpin #3 c'mon yall i need some more votes on this shit
bumpin #3 on my part, yo stop sleepin on this battle...need votes so we can close this joint
lets go ppl we need some more votes... come one don't sleep
what the fuck... just vote ppl....
come on people bumpin #4....need some votes on this battle....just leave a link in your reply and we'll respond to it man....dont sleep damn...
Dammit, this is bullshit...why are you people sleepin on this battle...bumpin #5.....people sleep alot on this site man....COME ON NEED VOTES.... IDONT CARE IF I LOSE OR WIN... I JUST NEED FEEDBACK AND VOTES
Battle me,PUSSIE!Quote:
Originally Posted by WhiteBoyGotRhyme
JUS HIT ME BAC,IZ jAY rOC!Quote:
Originally Posted by Jay Roc
Can We Get Some Votes Please...
this is bullshit.....you expect us to vote on your battles but your not suppose to vote for ours...whatever man....
ay it wont leemmme got it keeps sayin that i need to explain my vote better and i explained alot
vote goes to mixtape because betta verse and strcture rtf
vote goes to mixtape because betta verse and strcture rtf