10-12 lines
you spit first
no dr, crew, and hate votes
etc
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10-12 lines
you spit first
no dr, crew, and hate votes
etc
yo this is my check in
checken in waiting for you to drop ya verse
yo u call urself skitzo i guess that means ur crazy
bc after i hit u with these punches ill leave ya hurt and daisy
yo u muct be a skitzo tryin to call me out on that post
bc when u lose this battle ull look lik eu just seen a ghost
ayo u think ur gay lyrics are hot, but they are actually really gay
they call me night ryda bc its bitches like u i can beat night or day
but after i leave u with these punches ull b daised and confused
i bet ur face is prolly hurtin now bc i just hit u n left a bruise
i saw ur first battle n ur shit was horrible and it was reall bad
bc i just killed u in this battle, i beat u so bad its really sad
this night ryda im comin in for tha motha fuckin kill
if ur ass was jack u still couldnt get pussy from jill
You say I act like I have just seen a “ghost” right?
At first I thought I did, then I notice it was you at “night”
Faggot ass bitch, ya punk ass name says it all
Cuz you running away from “Pandora’s Box” and ryding on balls
You talking that I have gay lyrics but the only gay one is you
Cuz the only reason you joined RB is so you can look at other dudes
105 post congrats now you can sway and ask for a win
“Return the favor thnx” asking others to poll a win in
But it won’t happen once they finish reading ya verse
Ya garbage instead of me the readers will end up heading in a hearse
But I do gotta give the props when all props are due
“Pat on the back“…wait I wasn’t talking about giving props to you
Ehh... this was a pretty weak verse.. i wasnt feeling it very much..punchlines were there but they werent hitten very good ... could have been alot better... next time try to use some personals.. and use more direct punchlines.. flow was eh.. could have been better...structure was okay but some lines were alittle stretched..Overall keep it up ,you came pretty weak , and it wasnt enough to winQuote:
Originally Posted by night ryda
Pretty decent verse... could have been alot better..structure was okay, some punchlines were okay , some just were really weak... Personals were there but not really hitten hard..flow was okay.. But overall it was a decent verse..could have been alot better.. make more direct punchlines , and hotter personals ...Overall Elevate bothQuote:
Originally Posted by Skitzo
Vote-Skitzo
both return the favor in my sig please
aight aight.... i did come week.....but yall im uppin w/ some votes ill rtf
lol no you tried I came weak uppin #1.............
ummm.....if u read my last battle u can tell i have done alot better.......i still think i won but ur flow was nice
yo dis battle wuz kind of weak i seen better from u night and skitzo came thru wit his punches no doubt dey wuz hot
but overall flow and personals goes 2 night so night barely sneaks by
v/rida
yo poll ya vote then lantern uppin fo some more votes
^^it was an unexplained vote its goin to get dqed...
how was it unexplained? he said my flow was betta than urs man dont bitch about we tied up now
well if u want it explained then let me break it down 4 u......
Originally Posted by Skitzo
You say I act like I have just seen a “ghost” right?
At first I thought I did, then I notice it was you at “night”..........weak
Faggot ass bitch, ya punk ass name says it all
Cuz you running away from “Pandora’s Box” and ryding on balls.........good
You talking that I have gay lyrics but the only gay one is you
Cuz the only reason you joined RB is so you can look at other dudes.....not original
105 post congrats now you can sway and ask for a win
“Return the favor thnx” asking others to poll a win in.......weak
But it won’t happen once they finish reading ya verse
Ya garbage instead of me the readers will end up heading in a hearse...good
But I do gotta give the props when all props are due
“Pat on the back“…wait I was
n’t talking about giving props to you.....decent
yo u call urself skitzo i guess that means ur crazy
bc after i hit u with these punches ill leave ya hurt and daisy..........decent
yo u muct be a skitzo tryin to call me out on that post
bc when u lose this battle ull look lik eu just seen a ghost.....nice
ayo u think ur gay lyrics are hot, but they are actually really gay
they call me night ryda bc its bitches like u i can beat night or day.......weak
but after i leave u with these punches ull b daised and confused
i bet ur face is prolly hurtin now bc i just hit u n left a bruise....decent
i saw ur first battle n ur shit was horrible and it was reall bad
bc i just killed u in this battle, i beat u so bad its really sad.....mediocre
this night ryda im comin in for tha motha fuckin kill
if ur ass was jack u still couldnt get pussy from jill.....nice
overall skitzo 8/10
overall ryda 8.5/10
yo is that explained enough man?? it cant get dq'd now
Vote - Skitzo
Ryda you had a pretty weak verse with not many hard hitting punches you need to aim more at the opponent with your diss. Your lines didnt flow too well and some lines were stretched but overal structure was aight. Skit your drop was decent man nice job. Structure was nice and punches were good but some were weak with an ok flow threw out.
vote- Skitzo
He had better punches an flow...
not vote-ryda cuz he didnt have punches or a good flow. ( elevate )
ryda you had a good opener but it got me lost when you said daisey.. i beleave you have to diss the opponent... Then when i kept reading an it was wack... my vote started slippping more towards skitzo....
when i read skitzo's he defended himself while dissing you.... so my vote is skitzo
v/S
yo i'mma give this 2 ryda.........this battle wasnt the best n i hope u can still od better, u were level par on structure n flow, but it came down 2 punches and rdya's hit home more
v/ryda
my vote goes to skitoz cuz
nightryda shoudhave came wit some betta stuff
for tha record wat is bc?
N: Your verse was weak. You tried using personals but they werent hittin hard or anything special. I saw some punches but they werent really hitten hard either, they were pretty wack. Lose some self glory and come more original rather than played. Use better vocab and reword some lines to make it sound better and make the punches seem to hit harder bcuz your verse wasnt goood at all. Elevate..
S: Okay, pretty good, decent. Flow and structure was a lot better. Punches were harder, some weak, but for the most part they hit harder than his. Personals were okaay..couldve beeen better though. Same thing with the reworded lines...Better vocab couldve been used but overall your verse was a lot better than his.
v/skitzo : Having harder hitting punches and a better all around verse.
rtf please in my sig (honestly).